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c_d_s

Posts: 7771

Lubbock, Texas, US

nudes by paul wrote:

you shouldn't keep either, instead you should come shoot with me.

You should shoot with Paul after you shoot with me.

But if you have to pick one right now, pick #1.

Jan 05 09 06:00 pm Link

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Keira Grant

Posts: 3799

Houston, Texas, US

Skydancer wrote:
Numero uno!

BTW, the new stuff you did with Edward is cool.

Jan 05 09 06:05 pm Link

Model

Keira Grant

Posts: 3799

Houston, Texas, US

c_d_s wrote:

You should shoot with Paul after you shoot with me.

But if you have to pick one right now, pick #1.

Okay...all it takes is an e-mail and an offer...

Jan 05 09 06:06 pm Link

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Hexfyre Photography

Posts: 69

Cincinnati, Ohio, US

I prefer the first one.

Jan 05 09 06:09 pm Link

Photographer

re- photography

Posts: 1752

Sonoma, California, US

If you are choosing between the two I would definately say the 1st one stays. I think that many of my reasons have already been been given by people who share my opinion.

Jan 05 09 06:11 pm Link

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DES1208

Posts: 555

Valencia, California, US

love em both but prefer # 1...

DES

Jan 05 09 06:12 pm Link

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Billy Raayn

Posts: 197

Milford, Connecticut, US

Keira Grant wrote:
Which of these two photos do you think I should keep? I like them both for different reasons, and clearly only want one in my portfolio.

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http://www.modelmayhem.com/pic.php?pid=9970826

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http://www.modelmayhem.com/pic.php?pid=10017730

First one.....the second looks like the left half of a porno scene!

Jan 05 09 06:12 pm Link

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Music Row Photography

Posts: 60

Franklin, Tennessee, US

I love the second one, way better photo !!

Jan 05 09 06:14 pm Link

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Vincent Wolff

Posts: 2866

Chicago, Illinois, US

#1

Jan 05 09 06:14 pm Link

Photographer

L O N D O N 6 x 6

Posts: 127

London, England, United Kingdom

..keep the second one I'd say for sure ...it's got an edge, brings out a stronger sense of emotion. Makes the viewer work to read the emotion, rather than being given it on a plate so to speak.... just my view though..

Andy smile

Jan 05 09 06:20 pm Link

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Magic Image Photography

Posts: 3606

Temple City, California, US

Keep them both and then come to L.A. and shoot with me for more images. smile

Jan 05 09 06:25 pm Link

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Teddyybare

Posts: 20

Portland, Oregon, US

Keep the first one

Jan 05 09 06:28 pm Link

Photographer

IIP

Posts: 413

Lumberton, New Jersey, US

1

Jan 05 09 06:31 pm Link

Model

Keira Grant

Posts: 3799

Houston, Texas, US

Magic Image Photography wrote:
Keep them both and then come to L.A. and shoot with me for more images. smile

Not keeping them both.

But okey dokey.

Jan 05 09 06:32 pm Link

Photographer

ward

Posts: 6135

Toronto, Ontario, Canada

my vote doesn't count ??? what the...lol

Jan 05 09 06:34 pm Link

Model

V I C T O R I A

Posts: 13979

Los Angeles, California, US

I like #1 smile

You rock lady!

Jan 05 09 06:36 pm Link

Model

Keira Grant

Posts: 3799

Houston, Texas, US

ward wrote:
my vote doesn't count ??? what the...lol

Oh heck yeah, your vote counts. *pst* PM sent

Jan 05 09 06:37 pm Link

Photographer

ward

Posts: 6135

Toronto, Ontario, Canada

Keira Grant wrote:

Oh heck yeah, your vote counts. *pst* PM sent

grazie. *replied* wink

Jan 05 09 06:41 pm Link

Photographer

GO GO LISTEN

Posts: 77

2nd is HAWT

Jan 05 09 06:43 pm Link

Photographer

MS Photo Chicago

Posts: 387

Chicago, Illinois, US

#2...a little more erotic and edgy.

Jan 05 09 06:43 pm Link

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Tortured Artist

Posts: 414

Rockville, Maryland, US

number two has some emotion and a story in ur eyes..one is a nice pic of you..

Jan 05 09 06:45 pm Link

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Implications Photo

Posts: 55

Memphis, Tennessee, US

Definitely the second. Much hotter.

Jan 05 09 06:45 pm Link

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Shew Design Studio

Posts: 372

Palo Alto, California, US

number one... much more interesting shot

Jan 05 09 06:46 pm Link

Photographer

Jamie Hankin

Posts: 67

New York, New York, US

I'm with the voters who say neither.......but for now keep #1. Are there other possibilities from the shoot?

Jan 05 09 06:49 pm Link

Model

Keira Grant

Posts: 3799

Houston, Texas, US

Jamie Hankin wrote:
I'm with the voters who say neither.......but for now keep #1. Are there other possibilities from the shoot?

Alas, not so much in terms of MM acceptable.

Jan 05 09 07:00 pm Link

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California Redwoods

Posts: 275

Santa Cruz, California, US

Definetly # 1 ...like JoJo says

Jan 05 09 07:04 pm Link

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B R E E D L O V E

Posts: 8022

Forks, Washington, US

Put them together as a set and post that to your port. By the way you are freaking gorgeous !

Jan 05 09 07:05 pm Link

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Fenux Photography

Posts: 1

Richmond, California, US

girl keep the first one in your port,  the second one is nice too,  but the first is just way more inviting.

Jan 05 09 07:05 pm Link

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emspace photography

Posts: 53

Chicago, Illinois, US

number 1

or combine them into a double image: it is a little like before and after — or maybe before and during smile

Jan 05 09 07:07 pm Link

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Javier_Mejia

Posts: 396

Los Angeles, California, US

Scott_La wrote:
The 2nd one (keep).

I'll second that.

Jan 05 09 07:09 pm Link

Photographer

Soats Photo

Posts: 251

Riverside, California, US

If any, the first one i guess...

Jan 05 09 07:09 pm Link

Model

Keira Grant

Posts: 3799

Houston, Texas, US

Terry Breedlove wrote:
Put them together as a set and post that to your port. By the way you are freaking gorgeous !

That is a good idea. Not sure I feel they are strong enough images to warrant a set though.
Thank you.

Jan 05 09 08:18 pm Link

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KMA2SQ

Posts: 3396

Knoxville, Tennessee, US

I don't care for either.  They both have problems.  I think #1 is more blatently crumby, so you should keep #2.

Jan 05 09 09:26 pm Link

Photographer

H E R B L I S H

Posts: 15073

Orlando, Florida, US

Keira Grant wrote:
Which of these two photos do you think I should keep? I like them both for different reasons, and clearly only want one in my portfolio.

18+
http://www.modelmayhem.com/pic.php?pid=9970826

18+
http://www.modelmayhem.com/pic.php?pid=10017730

Number #2 hands down!  Your expression is very strong - love the tension!

Jan 06 09 03:56 am Link

Model

TingTing Sung

Posts: 19

Paris, Île-de-France, France

i would say the first one too!

Jan 06 09 04:00 am Link

Photographer

stephen perry

Posts: 53

London, England, United Kingdom

Number 2. You've got better ones than number one in your port. Number 2 is erotic. Number 1 is .. not!

Jan 06 09 04:01 am Link

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Marty Gast

Posts: 8

Dallas, Texas, US

#1 is great, but you have better in your port ...#2 is more erotic, but might send the wrong message.  Like many herel I think you should shoot with me ... but since they asked first, I'll wait.

Jan 06 09 04:12 am Link

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B R U N E S C I

Posts: 25319

Bath, England, United Kingdom

The 2nd as it's a more interesting photo and has a lot more energy. The first is just kind of meh for me.

Just my $0.02

Ciao
Stefano

Jan 07 09 05:49 am Link

Model

amanda logue

Posts: 1312

Albany, California, US

To the OP I like both smile The 2nd one would really rock if were full body smile

Jan 07 09 05:57 am Link

Photographer

Leon Fern

Posts: 29

Houston, Texas, US

The first one.
The other looks too elaborated.

Jan 07 09 06:05 am Link