Shaun Tia wrote:
There are two models here critiquing.


*****Rules:*****

Dont cry.

Dont get pissy.

What we say is not just for shits and giggles, there is truth behind it all. Take it as constructive.

Go.

Mean critique?

Bored Squid Photography wrote:
i'm new at the whole thing, so any criticism is food for thought....i have an idea of what you'll say, but fire away.

First, pick one image from a model in a specific outfit. Especially if theyre all lit the exact way and are not of good quality. If you want to make a series...make one.

You have a VIP membership, but that doesnt mean you need to fill up your gallery with the crap that would turn models away.

If you do landscape, I would try getting into infrared.

Also, your photoshopping skills need some mad work. The purpose is not to make the photo look like it has had an insane amount of post work...

Find somewhere other than your garage to shoot...at least get a backdrop or something.

Leah Jung wrote:
Who doesn't need this once in awhile? Enjoy.

Okay..I have mixed feelings about you. Some of your work rocks.

And then I run into crap like this:


What is the point to this photo?


This, my dear, is aweful.


Unless your runway pic is the most awesome shit alive, just tell us in your port that you were in one.

Pick one photo from an outfit...


This makes you look 14.

I dont like your choice for avi. . .I cant see you. Its like a half assed silhouette.

Hayley Louise Moore wrote:
Me please

Meh photo, not good but not awesome either


Your hands suck in this photo.


Pick the best from an outfit.


Prom pictures taken by mommy do not belong in our ports.


This is bad for you-absolutely no expression. I would delete it.


Learn to use your face and youll get farther in this industry.

KatiexMarie wrote:
please do me

I cant express to you how happy I am that you deleted that aweful pic out of your port.

Yay.

You get brownie points

You look the same in a lot of your photos.


I like the pose and your expression. I have a problem with your skin tone.


This is much better except for your hands.


Your hand looks huge, and I dont enjoy the background. Youre cute. Wish I could see where your chin started and your neck began.


This is nice.


Senior photo?


Sickingly cute.

DearestGrudge Studio wrote:

and I'd happily agree. I think you're awesome!

Aww Lets shoot!

Kiti Kobain  wrote:
Promise not to get pissy

Ive seen you around the block before.

You promised...

I dont like your face in this series:

Which I think is weird...I dont like my face in my breast cancer awareness shot...hmm


This is cute


Your right arm ruins this shot.


I dont like that youre wearing white shoes.
Or that you lost your right leg and your neck.


Look at that neck!


Cute
Hate the bg. But thats not on you.


Very good look for you


You lost your feet and neck...


Ugh on the saturation.


Cropped hand. Cute photo.


I look at the wall before I look at you. Bad on the photogs part.


Nice head shot

Shaun Tia wrote:

Ive seen you around the block before.

You promised...

I dont like your face in this series:

Which I think is weird...I dont like my face in my breast cancer awareness shot...hmm


This is cute


Your right arm ruins this shot.


I dont like that youre wearing white shoes.
Or that you lost your right leg and your neck.


Look at that neck!


Cute
Hate the bg. But thats not on you.


Very good look for you


You lost your feet and neck...


Ugh on the saturation.


Cropped hand. Cute photo.


I look at the wall before I look at you. Bad on the photogs part.


Nice head shot

Thanks doll, I appreciate it all

Harpy_image wrote:
AHAHA
This looks like it could be amusing
Thank you

Your style is unique. I like it.

Although dont overwork a concept so much that *you* make it dull.


this is funny shit. Something in his face seems off though..is it a little blurry?


This is for killsometime.com or something...its funny as hell, but as far as photographer skills, it sucks.


Family album. Not MM material.


Oh my goodness.

C Fine wrote:
Please. I would love some feedback.

This is scary, not cute.

18+???
https://www.modelmayhem.com/pic.php?pic … up_id=&ua=
Even if youre looking at nothing, you need to make an expression.

18+
https://www.modelmayhem.com/pic.php?pic … up_id=&ua=
the position of your arm ruins this photo.

LucyS wrote:
i was 10th in your 'first 10' thread, but i'll take this one instead, i love criticism!

Im sorry that thread got lost in the abyss. Ill do an extra long one for you

I think your bio is perfect.

The only thing would maybe include a schedule.

Your avi is awesome.


Dead model pose. Man if you got a floor full of games, rock them. Dont just lay like a dead fish.


This is creepy. And perfect.


I dont like the first photo. Makes your body look squat.


The posing her makes your body look wide. And squished....I dont like arm hair. Its a pet peeve of mine.


Good, although I find the background extremely distracting....


Blurry, poor quality and makes you look fat.


Doesnt make sense...Wouldve been better nude.


I do not like this at all.
Looks like a snapshot and your fingers are cut off.


Weirdly cool.


I find the weird blue sky more interesting than you in this photo


Pretty


Your hand looks black...


Awesome place...I believe you couldve rocked it better


Crap...your foots cut off.


I like it
I would have burned the light in the back some, because I try to keep my eyes on your face, but that light is all my eyes want to look at.


Pretty


Interesting. Not something I enjoy, but I know others would.
Your lips are really in focus, as is your dress/shirt. The rest of your face is not though...bugs me.


Zombie?


Love the lighting
Hate the hands and feet

Broken Doll wrote:
Not afraid!
Go, mean girls

Man! You know I love your stuff....

I really cant say anything mean to you dear

Tyler Rush wrote:
Any advice for me?

You look very fake tan in the first photo. Ew.

Ah the male model port

I cant say much. Male models are same face, few poses, and "man, am I buff!?!" stuff.

You fit all those.

EmeraldSea wrote:
ooh ok

Youre a good model...why dont you have more stuff?

Variety.

Im going to say this to you, and take it to heart:
Pick your *best* photo in a particular outfit. Use that photo for your port.

Quality over quantity.

Youre a great fashion model .

Shaun Tia wrote:

I cant express to you how happy I am that you deleted that aweful pic out of your port.

Yay.

You get brownie points

You look the same in a lot of your photos.


I like the pose and your expression. I have a problem with your skin tone.


This is much better except for your hands.


Your hand looks huge, and I dont enjoy the background. Youre cute. Wish I could see where your chin started and your neck began.


This is nice.


Senior photo?


Sickingly cute.

aww thanks haha yea it was a bit badly edited..n now I look at my avatar, I can't see the part where my chin ends haha..maybe my chin naturally blends in easily with my neck

I taken the 'senior' photo out and replaced it, you can check that one out and tell me if it's better or not, i'm not sure about it so I would appreciate it!

I think i'll keep the sickening one in there haha..do i loose my brownie points? I deleted the other one for you

Thanks for taking the time to reply..

Katie.