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Model

Ona Ray

Posts: 510

Louisville, Ohio, US

So, we took these shots at my work the other night. We emptied out a display case and I climbed in and out several times. Anyways, how do you like the results?

18+
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/18875885 (updated)
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/18859318


and the rest are on my tumblr...
http://phantomlolita.tumblr.com/post/89 … gly-i-love

Aug 03 10 10:53 pm Link

Photographer

Shirley Zhong

Posts: 2156

Singapore, Singapore, Singapore

I like the color and light, it's nice and definitely something I'd one day love to do smile I'd need to get a display case to start with though.

Aug 03 10 11:26 pm Link

Photographer

gwsphotos

Posts: 243

Beaverton, Oregon, US

I like them.  Creative idea and interesting results.

Aug 03 10 11:32 pm Link

Model

-NNY-

Posts: 598

Sacramento, California, US

I really like the first and last one on there.

Aug 03 10 11:59 pm Link

Photographer

NW Glamour

Posts: 211

Spokane Valley, Washington, US

Great concept!

Aug 04 10 12:08 am Link

Photographer

Chuckarelei

Posts: 9639

Seattle, Washington, US

Interesting photos.  But not sure if they do good judgment on you?

Aug 04 10 01:44 am Link

Photographer

David Kirk

Posts: 4566

Ottawa, Ontario, Canada

Chuckarelei wrote:
Interesting photos.  But not sure if they do good judgment on you?

I agree that the concept is interesting, but I don't think the two you posted here are flattering for you.

Aug 04 10 03:57 am Link

Model

Ona Ray

Posts: 510

Louisville, Ohio, US

David Kirk wrote:
I agree that the concept is interesting, but I don't think the two you posted here are flattering for you.

Are any of the others better in that regard?

Also, thanks everyone so far for your input!

Aug 04 10 04:10 am Link

Model

Tamara-marie

Posts: 3574

Kingston upon Hull, England, United Kingdom

Ona Ray wrote:

Are any of the others better in that regard?

Also, thanks everyone so far for your input!

you have better ones on the site u linked us 2 huni
ur avi is not flattering to your lovely chest at all
x

Aug 04 10 04:19 am Link

Model

Ona Ray

Posts: 510

Louisville, Ohio, US

Tamara-marie wrote:

you have better ones on the site u linked us 2 huni
ur avi is not flattering to your lovely chest at all
x

Okay, thank you! I'll try one of the others out.

Aug 04 10 09:47 am Link

Photographer

sospix

Posts: 21571

Orlando, Florida, US

I like 'em  .  .  .  you had a straight on one with you crouched down that was interesting  .  .  .  does your boss know ya shot 'em  .  .  .  wink

SOS

Aug 04 10 10:00 am Link

Photographer

Photogdan

Posts: 687

Louisville, Kentucky, US

sosdezign wrote:
I like 'em  .  .  .  you had a straight on one with you crouched down that was interesting  .  .  .  does your boss know ya shot 'em  .  .  .  wink

SOS

I like the idea and you and the photog did well...........but yeah what about the boss?   Cool place to work if you get by with it

Aug 04 10 10:07 am Link

Model

Shaun Tia

Posts: 1696

Phoenix, Arizona, US

You need to see your belly button in the first one. Otherwise it gives a weird porportional distortion type thing. Belly buttons are important.

I think you should do it again with in your face poses.

Aug 04 10 10:26 am Link

Model

Ona Ray

Posts: 510

Louisville, Ohio, US

haha Thanks! Yeah, he knew we were doing it. These were actually shot for the shop ad, which is why he let us do it.

We don't have the option of re-shooting unfortunately.

Aug 04 10 10:27 am Link

Model

Ona Ray

Posts: 510

Louisville, Ohio, US

Any other thoughts?

Aug 04 10 09:30 pm Link