Forums > Critique > Based on your Avatar... Would I work with you?

Model

Kitty Devereux

Posts: 67

Cambridge, England, United Kingdom

I am curious big_smile

May 24 13 09:57 am Link

Photographer

EdwardKristopher

Posts: 3409

Tempe, Arizona, US

Check out my new Avatar.  :-)

May 24 13 10:03 am Link

Photographer

Refrain Photography

Posts: 32

Moncton, New Brunswick, Canada

I'm curious too smile

May 24 13 12:10 pm Link

Model

Celine Sophia

Posts: 503

Santa Barbara, California, US

Updated avi, what do you think?

May 24 13 12:27 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5806

New York, New York, US

TravarezParsons Photo wrote:
What about me?

I'm not sure. Overall I like the image- nice color scheme, love the beach location and water as the background. However, the bikini doesn't match- I love the top but the bottom doesn't fit as well and the top and bottom are from different sets. Also, I usually like the wind in the hair look but here it is not executed effortlessly and the model's expression is very caught off guard. The pose is just all right. And one other thing- your watermark is too prominent.

May 24 13 09:48 pm Link

Model

Ruben van Waas

Posts: 24

Zwolle, Overijssel, Netherlands

winking_wonder wrote:

Um, yes! I would be crazy not to! I love your physique and the blue hoodie looks great on you. It's a bit too shadowed around you face but can tell that you are handsome and I like your hair! Looks like you have a good brooding expression.

Lovely:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130521/11/519bc3eca4e0c_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130520/12/519a7414da642_m.jpg

Awh thanks for the kind words! Doing modeling for a month now but hope to get further in the world of (fitness) modeling!

May 26 13 03:28 am Link

Photographer

AdamGray

Posts: 19

West Chester, Pennsylvania, US

I'll have a go...whenever you have a spare moment

May 26 13 05:31 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5806

New York, New York, US

Alex Haze wrote:

Awh thanks for the kind words! Doing modeling for a month now but hope to get further in the world of (fitness) modeling!

Awesome. Keep it up!

May 26 13 11:28 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5806

New York, New York, US

Francisco Castro wrote:
Sure.

By the way, kudos on having one  of the longest running threads on MM where the original poster is still actively involved. In July, it will be 2 years!

Thank you. And yes. I love roses- the rose petal theme is great. And the model is lovely too- I like the pose though not sure I love that it's upside down. Also the skin looks a bit too retouched, and the dark toe nail polish doesn't go with the petals! And the model's face is turned a bit too much - Would like to see more of it!

Like:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130117/06/50f807d41b814_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120219/22/4f41e9d9bf92b_m.jpg

May 26 13 11:31 am Link

Model

RenaBeana

Posts: 1104

Lillington, North Carolina, US

Me? Ty for your time

May 26 13 02:18 pm Link

Model

Leah_Doll

Posts: 23

Montreal, Quebec, Canada

Go for it! smile

May 26 13 11:26 pm Link

Photographer

Refrain Photography

Posts: 32

Moncton, New Brunswick, Canada

Leah Wall wrote:
Go for it! smile

Yep...certainly does! smile

May 27 13 06:14 am Link

Photographer

Philip Carnevale

Posts: 2

Phoenix, Arizona, US

I'm curious

May 27 13 06:23 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5806

New York, New York, US

Sophia Grey wrote:
me??

No. The image is not super clear/sharp and not styled at all. I do like the look of your hair but your expression is wide -eyed and blank. And the hand in the shot looks awkward, and you're also hiding your neck.

Maybe:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130130/02/5108fc2f50734_m.jpg

May 27 13 07:53 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5806

New York, New York, US

ClashnClairty wrote:
interesting, would love to know!

I would say I would consider it but probably not. First of all, the image is a bit blurry and the expression is really blank. But the way you've posed her is quite nice and the outfit is sexy. A bit more finesse and styling would have made it much better though. Also the wall is pretty cool but the perspective is weird- too close.

Cute:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130523/02/519de5db30a74_m.jpg

May 27 13 08:03 am Link

Model

Erica-rose

Posts: 150

Melbourne, Victoria, Australia

Can I play? What do you think, I'm worried my eyes are too small?

May 27 13 08:09 am Link

Model

Erica-rose

Posts: 150

Melbourne, Victoria, Australia

Can I play? What do you think, I'm worried my eyes are too small?

May 27 13 08:09 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5806

New York, New York, US

Emily Smiles wrote:
me??

Yes. First of all you have a great smile! I also really like your hair and the lighting that's coming off it, as well as your pretty greenish eyes. The makeup looks good as well and I like the color of your blue shirt. Nice greeny background with the right amount of blurring too.

Pretty:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121128/19/50b6dc4a8647f_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110722/19/4e2a2ea57f886_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130225/11/512bb6503d070_m.jpg

May 27 13 05:10 pm Link

Photographer

ClashnClairty

Posts: 133

Singapore, Singapore, Singapore

winking_wonder wrote:

I would say I would consider it but probably not. First of all, the image is a bit blurry and the expression is really blank. But the way you've posed her is quite nice and the outfit is sexy. A bit more finesse and styling would have made it much better though. Also the wall is pretty cool but the perspective is weird- too close.

Cute:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130523/02/519de5db30a74_m.jpg

Hahas, I've changed my avatar!

May 27 13 06:32 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5806

New York, New York, US

Duncan Cheng wrote:
Deal me in smile

Yes. I really like the flare and color lighting in this. Pretty model- she's got great facial structure and I like the hair style as well. Great posing as well. The outfit is cute and I like her expression too.

Lovely:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121201/21/50bae0cef3881_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120426/06/4f994bf9b2de5_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130216/03/511f697401c9d_m.jpg

May 27 13 07:14 pm Link

Photographer

Mark Callen Photography

Posts: 260

Buffalo, New York, US

*New Avatar!  Would you work with me??
  Thanks!
  Mark

May 27 13 07:22 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5806

New York, New York, US

Bravo Magic Images wrote:
Mon Tue and Wed are my shooting days.

Aw, you're no longer a member...

May 27 13 08:23 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5806

New York, New York, US

ClashnClairty wrote:

Hahas, I've changed my avatar!

Awesome! smile

May 27 13 09:31 pm Link

Model

Dimitrius C

Posts: 236

Gary, Indiana, US

I am in.  smile

May 27 13 09:38 pm Link

Photographer

Derrick Schwieters

Posts: 68

Coeur d'Alene, Idaho, US

I'll play your game...

May 27 13 09:39 pm Link

Model

Avelyn Paru

Posts: 184

Berkeley, California, US

Awesome.  Thanks for doing this.  I'm totally new and booking lots of jobs so I can add to my portfolio.

May 27 13 09:52 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5806

New York, New York, US

Courtney  L Cameron wrote:
me?

Yes. Nice black and white tones in the image and you've got a a great, long lean figure that's shown off well with your pose. Cut off jeans and heels look good but the top should be more form fitting. You also have beautiful hair and features. Expression is blank though.

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130325/19/51510cefc73c4_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121202/23/50bc585278a68_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121217/10/50cf63a321103_m.jpg

May 28 13 08:52 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5806

New York, New York, US

Pandora James wrote:
I woul like to know what you think

Yes. You look lovely in this image but the lighting on your skin is a bit off but that's not your fault. I like the black dress on you and the white belt works well with it. I also like the nature-y green background. Also nice hair and features- But expression could be better though.

May 28 13 11:01 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5806

New York, New York, US

claudio400 wrote:
Why Not.

I would say maybe. I like the colorful outfits on the models and they all look pretty good. The posing is decent but the expressions need a little work- they don't mesh together and not sure I understand the story from it, especially the model on the left..

May 28 13 01:04 pm Link

Photographer

Damian Walker

Posts: 9

Margate, England, United Kingdom

Me too please!

May 28 13 01:52 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5806

New York, New York, US

Kitty Devereux wrote:
I am curious big_smile

No. The blue lingerie looks cute on you but your stance and especially your expression looks very uncomfortable/unsure of yourself. Also might look better with your hair down. Cool metal and colored background though.

May 28 13 04:43 pm Link

Model

EllaLyse

Posts: 25

Adelaide, South Australia, Australia

I love mine, It will be interesting to see if you do smile

May 28 13 04:49 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5806

New York, New York, US

EdwardKristopher wrote:
Check out my new Avatar.  :-)

Maybe, but the skin is a bit overly processed and all those tattoos covering her arm and neck are distracting. I do like the colors and the fantastical background. The model looks quite sexy and posing of her body is good but the arms are placed awkwardly and the expression is kind of blank.

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/091228/00/4b3867227087c_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/111021/23/4ea25ec0e7dd1_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/091228/00/4b386f24eecaa_m.jpg

May 29 13 08:46 am Link

Model

Sarah September

Posts: 23

Los Angeles, California, US

me me

May 29 13 09:30 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5806

New York, New York, US

Refrain Photography wrote:
I'm curious too smile

No. The image of the model is pixelated, so it doesn't look smooth and clear. Also it's only half of the face and cropped weirdly. I do like the black surrounding the model's face though.

Better:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130510/04/518cde12468f3_m.jpg

May 29 13 10:49 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5806

New York, New York, US

Celine Sophia wrote:
Updated avi, what do you think?

Yes. I love that dress on you- a really pretty soft color as well. And the hair in the wind is nice as is your smile. And lovely background. The posing looks a little stiff and I would do something other than having your left hand clutching the right arm.

Cute:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130112/20/50f23c37e4858_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130112/20/50f239f21be8c_m.jpg

May 29 13 06:02 pm Link

Model

Veronica Olenko

Posts: 49

Oakville, Ontario, Canada

let me know!

May 29 13 06:32 pm Link

Photographer

Maegan M

Posts: 7

Auckland, Auckland, New Zealand

Go on then! smile

May 29 13 06:55 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5806

New York, New York, US

Identity Photoworks wrote:
I'll have a go...whenever you have a spare moment

No. I don't like the quality of the image- looks a bit blurry and grainy. While I do like the black lace top on the model, her posing is awkward -both elbows pointing towards the viewer and her expression is blank/uncomfortable.

May 29 13 07:14 pm Link

Model

Holly Haggerty

Posts: 1

Boston, Massachusetts, US

Let me know.

May 29 13 08:11 pm Link