Forums > Critique > Based on your Avatar... Would I work with you?

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

RenaBeana wrote:
Me? Ty for your time

No. I like the body suit on you and it looks great- very sexy. I do like the colorful background. But the stance/posing is just there and it looks like your skin tones are different hues. And expression is very blank.

May 30 13 08:43 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Leah_Doll wrote:
Go for it! smile

No. The image is quite small so it's hard to make out the details, but I like the red hair that you have and your hazel golden eyes. The dress looks nice but your posing is not that flattering and it looks like you have no neck. Also your expression is really blank. I do kind of like the background and composition though.

Better:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130527/13/51a3bd189f32b_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130527/13/51a3bd94e95ef_m.jpg

May 30 13 11:01 am Link

Model

Arielle Laurito

Posts: 54

Hammonton, New Jersey, US

Would love to know!

May 30 13 08:14 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Philip Carnevale wrote:
I'm curious

No. I usually like mask images but this one not so much. I think it may look better in color and I dislike that the model's figure is so blurry, as well as the crop.

May 31 13 07:45 am Link

Model

Tuesday Hanson

Posts: 32

Bellingham, Washington, US

Me?

May 31 13 07:55 am Link

Model

Arielle Laurito

Posts: 54

Hammonton, New Jersey, US

winking_wonder wrote:

expression looks a bit angry- Not sure if that was intentional?[/quote wrote:

My avatar is an alternative photo and I am angry in it because I use a lot of expression when doing these types of photo shoots. I am really trying to reach out to anyone who does alternative modeling or shoots alternative models. I have in my portfolio I am now more of an alternative model. Need your opinion on my alternative modeling.

May 31 13 07:27 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Arielle Laurito wrote:

winking_wonder wrote:

expression looks a bit angry- Not sure if that was intentional?[/quote wrote:

My avatar is an alternative photo and I am angry in it because I use a lot of expression when doing these types of photo shoots. I am really trying to reach out to anyone who does alternative modeling or shoots alternative models. I have in my portfolio I am now more of an alternative model. Need your opinion on my alternative modeling.

That is fine and kudos to you if that works for you but this particular thread is about whether I would work with you based on your avatar, so I don't really go into detail about your port as a whole. There are other folks here that offer that type of critique.

That being said, I actually like your new avatar. Nice color scheme, good lighting, lovely dress on you and can really see the story and emotion from you. So this time yes.

May 31 13 08:01 pm Link

Model

Arielle Laurito

Posts: 54

Hammonton, New Jersey, US

Thank you for your comments I will keep them in mind.

May 31 13 08:23 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Ericarose wrote:
Can I play? What do you think, I'm worried my eyes are too small?

I would work with you. It's a very gritty and real image- Not really my style but you have a great look. I love your hair-- even messy it looks good! Nice features, makeup is done well and the expression is real, filled with emotion. Plus that dress looks very good on you. And love the choker. Your legs are kind of at a weird angle but that's overall pose still looks decent. Also, the color scheme and lighting matches the mood.

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130528/02/51a476d5b0465_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130507/01/5188bbe849a07_m.jpg

May 31 13 09:13 pm Link

Model

Vinny

Posts: 95

Harrisburg, Pennsylvania, US

Well, would you?

May 31 13 09:16 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Mark Callen Photography wrote:
*New Avatar!  Would you work with me??
  Thanks!
  Mark

Yes. Love the colors, composition and model looks great! I like the whole premise - field of sunflowers with a glowing sunsetty type theme and great big dark blue sky. Model is posed well, and lovely styling. The expression is a bit weak though.

By the way, your Members Only nude work is very good...

Also nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130409/20/5164dda160495_m.jpg

Jun 01 13 10:48 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Dimitrius C wrote:
I am in.  smile

Yes. I like the black/white tones in the image and you have a nice clean look. And you're good looking. I love your outfit especially the white shirt and light jacket. Sunglasses look good on you and pose is natural. Background is interesting.

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130516/17/51957a2535942_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130516/17/51957c6f6918b_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/080428/20/4816713f3918c_m.jpg

Jun 02 13 07:26 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Derrick Schwieters wrote:
I'll play your game...

No. The image is not all that smooth and the model's posing could be better - especially placement of arm. The jeans look good on her but overall styling, including makeup and hair is not great and the expression is quite blank. Background is nice though!

Maybe:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130504/22/5185ec9b525c7_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130504/22/5185eb1cb7215_m.jpg

Jun 03 13 11:25 am Link

Photographer

Jacob Skogs

Posts: 75

Westbury, New York, US

I'd like to know.

Jun 03 13 03:10 pm Link

Photographer

SeaJae - Cirque Studios

Posts: 317

Greenville, South Carolina, US

Do tell!!! big_smile

Jun 03 13 03:27 pm Link

Model

Ruben van Waas

Posts: 24

Zwolle, Overijssel, Netherlands

Changed my avi to a more friendly photo, without my body on it. It's an experiment.. What do you think, does it attract more?

Thanks!

Jun 04 13 06:26 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Avelyn Paru wrote:
Awesome.  Thanks for doing this.  I'm totally new and booking lots of jobs so I can add to my portfolio.

No. The colors are a little dark, I don't love the white tee, crop is not very good, and lighting/styling could be better. Expression is not great.

Better:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130603/21/51ad7321e1639_m.jpg

Jun 04 13 09:49 am Link

Photographer

my_other_profile

Posts: 666

Ankeny, Iowa, US

?

Jun 04 13 09:51 am Link

Photographer

J Sigerson

Posts: 586

Los Angeles, California, US

I MUST know.

Jun 04 13 10:05 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Damo Walker wrote:
Me too please!

No. The image is too dark for my liking- Dark background and black clothing is not a good combination, as they blend in together. The model looks okay, and her hair is nice but I think the crop is too close at the top. Model's expression though is decent - There is definite connection with camera there.

Jun 04 13 11:26 am Link

Model

Sarah_

Posts: 1487

Denver, Colorado, US

I just changed my avatar so I thought I'd pop back in here. smile

Jun 04 13 11:39 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Elyse Rust wrote:
I love mine, It will be interesting to see if you do smile

Yes. I like the softness of the image and the pink color scheme (the pink feathers are a nice touch). Also the makeup looks really nice on you as does the jewelry and your hair is lovely. Your expression looks a bit weak/bored though.

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130311/02/513da06c3fe78_m.jpg

Jun 04 13 12:20 pm Link

Model

Courtney L Cameron

Posts: 72

Greenville, South Carolina, US

Me?

Jun 04 13 12:28 pm Link

Model

Beth Chambers

Posts: 465

London, England, United Kingdom

Me please smile

Jun 04 13 01:25 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Sarah September wrote:
me me

No. It looks like a snapshot and while the pose of your body looks okay, your arms are awkward. The lighting is decent on you though and the pink headband in your hair is cute. But looks like you have no neck and would like to see your face more. Background is nice though- Love the water in the shot.

Jun 04 13 07:15 pm Link

Photographer

Norman Ding

Posts: 56

New York, New York, US

New Avatar, what do you think?

Jun 04 13 08:38 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Veronica Olenko wrote:
let me know!

Yes. You have a lovely look about you- beautiful real smile, nice curled hair and pretty hazel eyes. The bra looks great on you and posing is decent. And background is nice- I like the purple/blue/white color scheme.

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121206/10/50c0e2c07b199_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121123/10/50afc6a7b7136_m.jpg

Jun 04 13 09:31 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Maegan M wrote:
Go on then! smile

Yes. Nice color scheme and love the lacy white lingerie on the llama, as well as the pale blue/lilac flowers in her hair-- and hair is beautifully styled. Makeup could be better. Posing is okay but expression looks out of place- shocked, not comfortable.

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130529/02/51a5cf106dc63_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/100701/01/4c2c4e2d32618_m.jpg

Jun 05 13 09:23 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Holly Haggerty wrote:
Let me know.

Yes. You have a nice look and I like your pose. The outfit looks good on you -I just would like to see more of your torso area that your arms are blocking. Your makeup and hair looks good and I love the large pink flower in your hair. However, your expression looks quite bored.

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120906/08/5048c0260fa4d_m.jpg

Jun 05 13 11:00 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Arielle Laurito wrote:
Would love to know!

Check here: http://www.modelmayhem.com/po.php?threa … st18291274

Like:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121221/13/50d4d9c497cbb_m.jpg

Jun 05 13 07:12 pm Link

Photographer

Volition Graphics

Posts: 437

Seattle, Washington, US

Pray tell.
Thank you!

Jun 05 13 07:20 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Tuesday Hanson wrote:
Me?

Yes. Love the lighting, colors and location/background. I like the way your hair is curled a bit and framed around your face as well as your facial features. Top is cute but your expression and pose need work. You look not sure of yourself. Also the crop at the top and bottom- cutting off part of your head and your hands/legs like that is not good.. But that's not your fault.

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130322/16/514ce481e0f5b_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130304/19/513569523442e_m.jpg

Love the bottom image:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130322/16/514ce40c890b6_m.jpg

Jun 06 13 10:20 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Vinny  wrote:
Well, would you?

Maybe. I like the overall color scheme and location. It looks like you have a pretty relaxed pose going and a decent look. I like your outfit as well. Your expression is a bit too blank though.

Jun 06 13 08:15 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Jacob Skogs wrote:
I'd like to know.

Yes. Nice black and white tones and there's a certain je nais sequoi style about it that I like.. Lovely framing of hair around the model's face, great clarity in capturing the detail of the model's features, including freckles. Expression is just okay though and I don't really like the blurring toward the bottom of the image.

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130506/19/51886bf25c343_m.jpg

Jun 07 13 09:14 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

SeaJae - Cirque Studios wrote:
Do tell!!! big_smile

No. A bit tough to make out the details of the image and it's quite dark. While I like the blue purple tones, the hair is all over the place and doesn't look good with the skin color of the model. Plus the expression is really blank and can't really see the face well.

Love:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130314/23/5142c00110b20_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130414/10/516ae28a0306e_m.jpg

Jun 07 13 07:40 pm Link

Model

Yves Malinka

Posts: 30

Newark, New Jersey, US

Im curious!

Jun 07 13 07:44 pm Link

Photographer

BIK ALE

Posts: 4

Linden, New Jersey, US

I just began and I wanna play too! smile

Jun 07 13 07:48 pm Link

Photographer

Antediluvian Design

Posts: 1137

Dunmore, Pennsylvania, US

Of course I would.

Jun 07 13 08:04 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Alex Haze wrote:
Changed my avi to a more friendly photo, without my body on it. It's an experiment.. What do you think, does it attract more?

Thanks!

I would absolutely work with you - Love your look. You're very handsome - I really like the style of your blond hair, your lovely blue eyes and the blue shirt you have on. However, your expression is a bit brooding and the right side of the image is too blurred.

To answer your question on whether your new avatar attracts more, I would say no. Especially since you're looking to be a fitness model, showing off your figure is #1.

Love these:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130520/11/519a70891bfe7_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130520/12/519a7414da642_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130521/11/519bc3eca4e0c_m.jpg

Jun 07 13 09:25 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

my_other_profile wrote:
?

This image is not really my style, but does show off your photographic skills pretty well so yes. Great capture of the model - the hair, makeup, shirt go well with the rest of the image and the expression is good- emotive. Nice capture of the window as well and good composition.

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130527/14/51a3cb4138474_m.jpg

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31756099 18+

Jun 08 13 07:18 pm Link