Forums > Critique > Based on your Avatar... Would I work with you?

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5806

New York, New York, US

J Sigerson wrote:
I MUST know.

Yes. This is a fun, kind of chaotic image but I love the pink, the set up and the model's look, including outfit, makeup, hair, expression... Everything comes together to tell a story and it's a good concept.

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120120/00/4f192b93acc77_m.jpg

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29967387 18+

Jun 08 13 10:02 pm Link

Model

corissa leigh

Posts: 6

Asia, Lima Provincias, Peru

im game. let me know

Jun 08 13 10:12 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5806

New York, New York, US

Sarah_ wrote:
I just changed my avatar so I thought I'd pop back in here. smile

No. And I know you have much better, but this avatar image does not do you justice. Your features are lovely, but your hair is just kind of there and your expression is extremely shocked- not even connecting with the camera. I will say you have a nice long neck but even there can see the tenseness from your expression and pose.

Love:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110204/22/4d4ce9ed6721a_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110205/09/4d4d83b2547cf_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/100526/20/4bfde408d0303_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110423/21/4db3a97913d1b_m.jpg

Jun 09 13 08:48 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5806

New York, New York, US

Courtney  L Cameron wrote:
Me?

Yes. I like the lighting and color scheme here. Your outfit is cute and the pose is decent though placement of right arm is a bit awkward- But overall nice and shows off your shapely legs. Also you have lovely long hair, pretty eyes and other facial features but your expression looks kind of bored.

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121202/23/50bc585278a68_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121217/10/50cf63a321103_m.jpg

Jun 10 13 10:22 am Link

Photographer

Jordy van Solm

Posts: 2

Delft, Zuid-Holland, Netherlands

I'd like to know

Jun 10 13 12:32 pm Link

Photographer

Adam J Caldwell

Posts: 290

London, England, United Kingdom

i'll bite =]

Jun 10 13 01:28 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5806

New York, New York, US

Beth Chambers wrote:
Me please smile

Maybe. Not sure this image is the best of you and placement of arms are awkward but cute outfit- really shows off your nice figure. Hair color and style is decent, albeit a bit messy. Your facial features are lovely but expression is very blank.

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120426/23/4f9a414a200f9_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120927/09/5064851418945_m.jpg

Jun 10 13 09:50 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5806

New York, New York, US

Norman Ding wrote:
New Avatar, what do you think?

Maybe. The black and white tones are nice and the model looks good with pretty great posing. The outfit also looks good on her and shows off her figure well. Expression is a bit weak though.

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120610/09/4fd4c653a60ee_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120610/09/4fd4c6e6ac746_m.jpg

Jun 11 13 09:39 am Link

Photographer

That Redhaired Girl

Posts: 1280

Lakeland, Florida, US

I'm curious!

Jun 11 13 05:40 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5806

New York, New York, US

PictureItYakima wrote:
Pray tell.
Thank you!

Yes, the image is quite sexy and I like the soft quality of it as well as the muted color scheme. The model is also lovely with nice hair and pretty blue eyes. The pose shows off her figure well. Only thing is expression looks unsure/worried.

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120913/19/50529417d6be6_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120903/20/5045709ef2c82_m.jpg

Jun 11 13 08:38 pm Link

Model

Carlysle McNaught

Posts: 11

Tallahassee, Florida, US

Interested to know!

Jun 11 13 09:09 pm Link

Photographer

Tom Tom Photos

Posts: 14

San Jose, California, US

wondering smile

Jun 12 13 12:40 am Link

Model

Amarissa

Posts: 4

Chester, England, United Kingdom

Me?

Jun 12 13 01:17 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5806

New York, New York, US

Yuliya Vee wrote:
Im curious!

Yes. It is a little dark for my tastes but the light does shine on you (except for the bottom of the image) so the viewer can easily see your nice figure and the black lingerie looks very sexy on you. The makeup and hair also look great, but pose could be better - Looks like you're just standing there and the expression looks angry, almost like you're growling..

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130603/14/51ad08caf05ed_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130414/15/516b34a977444_m.jpg

Jun 12 13 09:44 am Link

Model

Yves Malinka

Posts: 30

Newark, New Jersey, US

winking_wonder wrote:

Yes. It is a little dark for my tastes but the light does shine on you (except for the bottom of the image) so the viewer can easily see your nice figure and the black lingerie looks very sexy on you. The makeup and hair also look great, but pose could be better - Looks like you're just standing there and the expression looks angry, almost like you're growling..

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130603/14/51ad08caf05ed_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130414/15/516b34a977444_m.jpg

thanks very much! (:

Jun 12 13 10:32 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5806

New York, New York, US

ABIKOG wrote:
I just began and I wanna play too! smile

I would say maybe. The black and white tones are nice but the model's skin is too shiny and looks like model's head is larger (not proportionate to the rest of herself) with little neck. Also I'm not fond of the crop, especially on the top. Expression is a bit sleepy, not engaged. I do like the leather jacket on the model though.

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130607/17/51b27c2e441dd_m.jpg

Jun 12 13 12:18 pm Link

Photographer

Grey Water Photography

Posts: 2

Rochester, New York, US

I'm game.

Jun 12 13 12:19 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5806

New York, New York, US

Antediluvian Design wrote:
Of course I would.

No. This is not really my style and I don't like the gritty quality of the image. And the lower half of the model's body is not the most flattering, though I do like the pose from upper half as well as the model's shirt. Expression looks mad/upset which I don't really get...

Jun 12 13 08:55 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5806

New York, New York, US

corissa leigh wrote:
im game. let me know

No this image is obviously a snap shot and not even a very good one at that. It's a bit blurry, the angle is not great- Looks like your head is disproportionately large compared to the rest of your  body and the pose isn't all that flattering. The outfit is okay but rest of the styling leaves much to be desired- Your hair/makeup is nonexistent and your expression looks very bored/blank.

Even though this image is also just a snap shot, it captures you better:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130604/22/51aec5ef81976_m.jpg

Jun 13 13 09:01 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5806

New York, New York, US

Jordy van Solm wrote:
I'd like to know

No. This is just not really my style- I don't like the gritty feel of the image and the dark/dirty black background. Also expression is not very engaging.

Jun 13 13 01:28 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5806

New York, New York, US

Adam J Caldwell wrote:
i'll bite =]

Yes. I really like the color scheme and nice smooth finish of the image, as well as the model's look- lovely light blond hair. The undies especially and shirt lifted up shows off her figure well. The pose is decent though the right hand is a little awkward. Model's expression shows sensuality and breathlessness-- All good things.

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130612/15/51b8f7a6a4179_m.jpg

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/32898656 18+

Jun 13 13 07:51 pm Link

Photographer

JSB Fine Art Photo

Posts: 315

Frederick, Maryland, US

I would love to hear your opinion.

Jun 13 13 08:02 pm Link

Photographer

Frivolities

Posts: 102

Salem, Oregon, US

Very curious...would love to know.

Jun 13 13 08:14 pm Link

Photographer

Beyond the Physical

Posts: 909

HAZLET, New Jersey, US

OK Let's play.

Jun 13 13 08:21 pm Link

Photographer

Adam J Caldwell

Posts: 290

London, England, United Kingdom

winking_wonder wrote:

Yes. I really like the color scheme and nice smooth finish of the image, as well as the model's look- lovely light blond hair. The undies especially and shirt lifted up shows off her figure well. The pose is decent though the right hand is a little awkward. Model's expression shows sensuality and breathlessness-- All good things.

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130612/15/51b8f7a6a4179_m.jpg

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/32898656 18+

Thank you.

Jun 14 13 04:17 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5806

New York, New York, US

That Redhaired Girl wrote:
I'm curious!

I would say maybe. I like the warm colors of the image and the flowers above the mdoel's head- almost looks like it's on her. The hair color is lovely but expression not great.

Jun 14 13 08:52 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5806

New York, New York, US

Carlysle McNaught wrote:
Interested to know!

Yes. You have a very nice physique and handsome look. Posing looks pretty good, though expression is a little blank. Try to connect with the camera more.

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130613/06/51b9ccd3e01f0_m.jpg

Jun 15 13 06:37 pm Link

Photographer

NSFW

Posts: 142

Saint Louis, Missouri, US

Would you?

Jun 15 13 11:03 pm Link

Model

Alex Lindsay

Posts: 19

Camberley-Frimley, England, United Kingdom

I'm curious...

Jun 16 13 09:28 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5806

New York, New York, US

Tom Tom Photos wrote:
wondering smile

I would say maybe. Not really my style but I like the outfit on the model- colorful top with short black shorts look good on her and the pose is quite good. But not sure about the expression. Background has pretty cool colors and is muted well.

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130531/00/51a852476e96a_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130611/00/51b6d8c29c463_m.jpg

Jun 17 13 08:29 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5806

New York, New York, US

Gwendolen Williams wrote:
Me?

Yes. I like the lighting and color scheme is nice. The bikini looks good on you, I like your curly hair and smile. Pose is decent and love the blue sky background.

Jun 17 13 12:46 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5806

New York, New York, US

Grey Water Photography wrote:
I'm game.

Yes. Nice color scheme and composition. I like the model's look as well- lovely curled locks, cute features though expression can be worked on- the smile doesn't seem to meet the eyes.

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130523/11/519e5e0693231_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130608/07/51b339bc0a330_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130501/04/5181010aa0143_m.jpg

Adorable:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130516/07/5194eed42c6c6_m.jpg

Jun 17 13 06:48 pm Link

Model

Sarah_

Posts: 1487

Denver, Colorado, US

Added some new stuff, so I took your advice and swapped my avatar.  Is this one any better? smile

Jun 17 13 07:01 pm Link

Photographer

JamesR Photography

Posts: 40

King City, California, US

I am in...

Jun 17 13 07:07 pm Link

Retoucher

Michele Fair

Posts: 62

Cleveland, Ohio, US

I'll play!

Jun 17 13 08:10 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5806

New York, New York, US

JSB Fine Art Photo wrote:
I would love to hear your opinion.

I would say yes. I like the vibrant color scheme - Plus the red dress looks great on the model. I like the pose of the model and the background is beautiful and nicely muted. Expression works for the model- looks sultry almost.

Jun 17 13 09:04 pm Link

Photographer

Half Taco Photography

Posts: 183

Manitowoc, Wisconsin, US

Sounds like fun!

Jun 17 13 10:31 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5806

New York, New York, US

Frivolities wrote:
Very curious...would love to know.

Yes. Nice blue color scheme albeit a bit on the darker side- I love the background and effects and great dance capture in the foreground. Good composition as well.

Cute:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130531/17/51a93ee51ae69_m.jpg

Nicely done:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/100317/15/4ba1573329b87_m.jpg

Jun 18 13 12:42 pm Link

Model

amb300

Posts: 218

Murfreesboro, Tennessee, US

Jun 18 13 01:11 pm Link

Model

Sunblossom

Posts: 45

Manchester, England, United Kingdom

? smile

Jun 18 13 04:32 pm Link