Forums > Critique > Based on your Avatar... Would I work with you?

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Beyond the Physical wrote:
OK Let's play.

I would say maybe. I do like the black/white sort of contrasty color scheme but not really the post work finish - a little gritty feel not smooth enough for me. The model is hot though and the lingerie looks great on her and pose is decent- however placement of arm closest to viewer is just there. I like the model's wavy hair though and she has lovely features but expression is too blank.

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130424/10/517816a6b144b_m.jpg

Jun 18 13 06:28 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

NSFW wrote:
Would you?

I would say probably. I like the pose of the model and her overall look- lovely how her hair is framing her face and the expression is decent and quite expressive. The accessories add a bit of her personality but the black background is a bit stark.

Jun 19 13 09:54 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Alex Lindsay wrote:
I'm curious...

Maybe. I like the outfit on the model and she's got a good pose going. The makeup is good as is the hair style but facial skin looks too perfect - over photo shopped. The background I don't really like though- Dirty wall. And model's expression isn't fully there.

Jun 19 13 08:26 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Sarah_ wrote:
Added some new stuff, so I took your advice and swapped my avatar.  Is this one any better? smile

Sorry, I don't love this one... It's a bit hard to make out the details of it. I like the black and white tones and that dress looks great on you- The posing is decent especially since you're in motion. But your expression looks too surprised and the dark shadows on your face and on the side are not good. But I would probably still work with you- Can still tell that you have a long, lean figure and lovely features.

Still love:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110204/22/4d4ce9ed6721a_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110205/09/4d4d83b2547cf_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/100526/20/4bfde408d0303_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110816/16/4e4b02ec48254_m.jpg

Jun 19 13 09:21 pm Link

Photographer

NSFW

Posts: 122

Saint Louis, Missouri, US

NSFW wrote:
Would you?

winking_wonder wrote:
I would say probably. I like the pose of the model and her overall look- lovely how her hair is framing her face and the expression is decent and quite expressive. The accessories add a bit of her personality but the black background is a bit stark.

Thank you (probably). smile

Jun 20 13 05:55 pm Link

Photographer

DoubleStomp Productions

Posts: 9

Anderson, South Carolina, US

Hmmm, might as well give it a shot.  ^_^

Jun 20 13 06:16 pm Link

Photographer

Melinda Ann M

Posts: 35

Manteca, California, US

Im game smile

Jun 20 13 07:49 pm Link

Photographer

Sarah Jane Photographie

Posts: 195

Saint Catharines-Niagara, Ontario, Canada

I'd be interested in knowing smile

Jun 20 13 08:05 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

JamesR Photography wrote:
I am in...

No. I don't really like the angle and the crop at the top is a bit too tight. The blurriness of the bottom half of the photo is a bit much- distracting. Model looks decent- nice black shirt and a sort of mischievous smile.

I like:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130610/20/51b694e71677d_m.jpg

Jun 20 13 08:37 pm Link

Photographer

JamesR Photography

Posts: 40

King City, California, US

Good stuff to know, Thanks for the input I am still in the learning phase.

Jun 21 13 04:13 am Link

Model

Alma_Bella

Posts: 1

Bloomington, Indiana, US

Count me in smile

Jun 21 13 04:26 am Link

Model

Whitney Pietrykowski

Posts: 5

Fort Myers, Florida, US

I would like to know

Jun 21 13 08:19 am Link

Makeup Artist

Sofia Qayyum

Posts: 29

Birmingham, England, United Kingdom

I would like to know smile

Jun 21 13 08:52 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Michele Fair wrote:
I'll play!

Maybe. I do like the image but I think the skin tones and color scheme is a bit too bright and makes it look a little unnatural. Plus the skin tone color does not go with the model's orange makeup and accessories.

Better:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120605/13/4fce67c341d26_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120604/08/4fccd173b2455_m.jpg

Jun 21 13 09:12 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Half Taco Photography wrote:
Sounds like fun!

Yes. Nice lighting and color scheme. The model looks very sexy - love that pose she has going on and the high heels look great on her, as does the license plate on her butt.. I like her slightly crimped blond hair and she has a lovely smile. Nice background too!

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/111229/23/4efd6f7774e42_m.jpg

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/26794065 18+

Jun 22 13 11:02 pm Link

Retoucher

Noah mostefaoui

Posts: 83

London, England, United Kingdom

Hi...i would be interested in your opinion

Jun 23 13 02:19 pm Link

Photographer

Visual Creations LV

Posts: 72

Las Vegas, Nevada, US

im game to know

Jun 23 13 02:54 pm Link

Model

Sarah Ruest

Posts: 34

Toronto, Ontario, Canada

Me please!

Jun 23 13 03:34 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

amb300 wrote:
Sure, I'm curious.

Looks like you removed your profile?

Jun 23 13 08:19 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Sunblossom wrote:
? smile

Maybe. It's just not really my style- the black/white is quite stark and quality of image is grainy and there's a little bit too much shadow. I can't really make out your face too well but I do like the way your hair frames your face and you seem to bring emotion to the table so that's good. The posing is pretty good- lovely bare back.

Like:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130605/03/51af199217447_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130623/06/51c6f2244f942_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130603/05/51ac8c0f9f466_m.jpg

Jun 23 13 09:01 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

DoubleStomp Productions wrote:
Hmmm, might as well give it a shot.  ^_^

Maybe. I like the background and star/light in the background and the model's styling is cool.. Really like the outfit, colorful makeup and hair as well as the black gloves. But don't like where it's cropped on top- where you have cut off the top of the unicorn horn and the model's eyes/eye color looks unnatural, expression is quite blank and skin has a grainy quality that I dislike.

Jun 24 13 05:24 pm Link

Photographer

Anvanya Photography

Posts: 26

Breda, Noord-Brabant, Netherlands

I've got a new ava, so I'm curious! smile

Jun 25 13 06:25 am Link

Model

E L I N

Posts: 199

Montreal, Quebec, Canada

New avatar! Would love feedback.

Jun 25 13 09:46 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

melie mel wrote:
Im game smile

No the image is clearly a self pic- it is bad quality, blurry, too close up, and badly cropped. It looks like you have nice blond hair and blue eyes but the expression is very blank.

Maybe:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/090919/17/4ab570984a620_m.jpg

Jun 25 13 11:28 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Sarah Jane Photographie wrote:
I'd be interested in knowing smile

Maybe. The image is a little dark, a bit blurred especially the background and model's skirt- would like it to be in focus more. I do like the outfit on the model and her outfit, as well as pose. Expression is really blank/bored though. But pretty makeup/features.

Cute:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130427/15/517c4fb1db647_m.jpg

Jun 25 13 12:25 pm Link

Model

WithAmour

Posts: 219

Orlando, Florida, US

I'll give it a go!

Jun 25 13 02:43 pm Link

Model

April Dorothea

Posts: 12

Fredericksburg, Virginia, US

May I play?   I'm game!

Jun 25 13 06:46 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

JamesR Photography wrote:
Good stuff to know, Thanks for the input I am still in the learning phase.

No problem. Keep it up!

Jun 25 13 08:49 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Alma_Bella wrote:
Count me in smile

Probably not. The pic quality is just okay- Your face/hair part is a bit blurred. The angle is also not the best -- makes you look short (even if you are, you don't want to appear that way) and looks like you have no torso. It also makes your body appear much larger than your hand on the couch. Also your expression looks blank/bored. I do like the shoes you have on though.

Maybe:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130315/14/514392b1ea5d2_m.jpg

Jun 26 13 11:57 am Link

Model

Raven Blake

Posts: 58

Calgary, Alberta, Canada

Would love to hear from you

Jun 26 13 06:02 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Whitney Pietrykowski wrote:
I would like to know

I would say yes. I like your look- Pretty dark hair with light colored eyes and lovely features. Lighting and background is nice. But your expression is kind of blank and boring- straight on. PS You're really gorgeous... Now work with better photographers and come up with better concepts!

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130617/09/51bf347ad76a4_m.jpg

Jun 26 13 07:11 pm Link

Photographer

Bold Sheep Photography

Posts: 234

Blacksburg, Virginia, US

😳

Jun 26 13 07:29 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Sofia Qayyum  wrote:
I would like to know smile

Yes. Even though the lighting and color scheme is not the best quality, that is not your fault. Your makeup artistry is plain to see- I really like the black liner cat eye effect and silvery smoky eye shadow. Nice nude lips as well. The updo is also lovely and goes well with the makeup.

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130606/10/51b0cbdae9552_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/111228/07/4efb33d6390ff_m.jpg

Jun 26 13 08:21 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Noah mostefaoui wrote:
Hi...i would be interested in your opinion

Yes! Your avatar image looks flawless - I really like the close up/smoothness and the color tones are great. Makeup looks lovely on the model and I love how everything is so clear- Nice lighting as well.

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130625/10/51c9d9c5478f1_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130620/08/51c323025bc68_m.jpg

Jun 27 13 09:54 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Visual Creations LV wrote:
im game to know

Yes. I really like the lighting and color scheme and the model looks great- I love her red hair and the black dress looks good on her. Pose could be better- more graceful and expression is quite blank.

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130604/20/51aea9f21cfbf_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130410/12/5165c00486ba0_m.jpg

Jun 27 13 12:04 pm Link

Model

Paige Alison

Posts: 13

Toronto, Ontario, Canada

any advice?

Jun 27 13 12:20 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Sarah Ruest wrote:
Me please!

Yes. I really like your look- especially love your wavy tresses - nice color as well. Makeup looks good on you but the expression is a little blank- Would be better if we could see your eyes more. Also the white shirt is really big on you so we can't really see your figure. Overall nice image though and I really like the location/background.

SHOOT MORE!

Jun 27 13 09:02 pm Link

Photographer

Sarah Jane Photographie

Posts: 195

Saint Catharines-Niagara, Ontario, Canada

winking_wonder wrote:

Maybe. The image is a little dark, a bit blurred especially the background and model's skirt- would like it to be in focus more. I do like the outfit on the model and her outfit, as well as pose. Expression is really blank/bored though. But pretty makeup/features.

Cute:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130427/15/517c4fb1db647_m.jpg

Thank you for your honesty.

Jun 27 13 09:46 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Anvanya Photography wrote:
I've got a new ava, so I'm curious! smile

Yes. I like the light color tones and the clarity/smoothness of the image. The furry white surrounding the model looks great against her pale skin and the light blond hair with blue-ish eyes go together well. Great capture of features and nice expression as well.

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130626/15/51cb69ff96e7e_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130514/08/51925b6bafb97_m.jpg

Jun 28 13 07:54 pm Link

Photographer

DoubleStomp Productions

Posts: 9

Anderson, South Carolina, US

winking_wonder wrote:

Maybe. I like the background and star/light in the background and the model's styling is cool.. Really like the outfit, colorful makeup and hair as well as the black gloves. But don't like where it's cropped on top- where you have cut off the top of the unicorn horn and the model's eyes/eye color looks unnatural, expression is quite blank and skin has a grainy quality that I dislike.

Thanks for the critique!  I definitely got some work to do.  smile

Jun 28 13 08:39 pm Link