Forums > Critique > Based on your Avatar... Would I work with you?

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Imogen Kihan wrote:
Would you work with me? smile

Yes. I like your overall look, even if the image is not the best quality. Your hair is styled nicely and your blue eyes are lovely. Outfit is cute, background is cool and pose is decent though be careful of the arm that is over your head- elbows shouldn't be pointed towards the camera. Also expression is pretty blank, almost lifeless.

Shoot more!

Jul 31 13 10:40 am Link

Photographer

Mario Be

Posts: 29

Erfurt, Thuringia, Germany

Would you? wink

Jul 31 13 10:42 am Link

Model

Kasey LeeAnn

Posts: 10

Atlanta, Georgia, US

I'm curious :3

Jul 31 13 10:42 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Avatar Shots wrote:
Would you?

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130714/21/51e37e77d8160_m.jpg

The image you posted is different from your actual avatar... So based on your current avatar, I would have to say maybe. While I like the shirt and pose of the model (except placement of arms)- very sexy, the hairstyle and expression are not great- especially the expression.

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130720/06/51ea92e10dbc1_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120701/08/4ff06adae7625_m.jpg

Jul 31 13 11:10 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

AnnemiekdenB wrote:
Want to play a game?

I would. Love the color scheme in this image and you have a lovely look. Beautiful eyes, hair, cheekbones, and other facial features and the necklace looks good on you. Your expression emotes well also.

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130624/10/51c887142f11b_m.jpg

Jul 31 13 12:10 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Danielle Reid wrote:
Too many pages to know if I posted here already, but this is a somewhat new avi...so would you?

You changed your avatar and I actually like this one better so the answer is yes. You look lovely - approachable and sweet. Nice outfit and I love the pearls on you. Your pose is relaxed and you have a great smile!

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130616/15/51be38016b0ac_m.jpg

Jul 31 13 01:32 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

ANTOLLOYD wrote:

Aug 01 13 09:27 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Maria J Campos wrote:
would you?

Absolutely! I love the lighting and the gorgeous background/location. The colors are a little dark but still look good. Also, I would adore doing a shoot with a horse. I like the model's long flowy skirt and she has a lovely pose against the horse. Also, looks like she has a emotive expression.

Lovely:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120607/06/4fd0a6c96acbe_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120619/01/4fe036479c185_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/111216/12/4eebb09e09953_m.jpg

Aug 01 13 08:04 pm Link

Photographer

Urbiefoto

Posts: 92

Arlington, Virginia, US

I'm game

Aug 01 13 08:13 pm Link

Photographer

Arstine

Posts: 42

Rapid City, South Dakota, US

I'm curious.

Aug 01 13 08:58 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

paigehasrabies wrote:
I'll bite smile i'd like to hear it.

No. This looks very much like a snap shot and blurry on the bottom. Also, you look like you're 12 years old. The costume is not great, your pose is not good, and your hair could be styled better. You do have pretty blue eyes and a cute smile. PS Strongly consider changing your model name (rabies?)

Maybe use this as your avatar:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130731/14/51f97db47d9fb_m.jpg

Aug 01 13 08:59 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Aug 02 13 08:45 am Link

Photographer

Maria J Campos

Posts: 252

Tilburg, Noord-Brabant, Netherlands

winking_wonder wrote:

Absolutely! I love the lighting and the gorgeous background/location. The colors are a little dark but still look good. Also, I would adore doing a shoot with a horse. I like the model's long flowy skirt and she has a lovely pose against the horse. Also, looks like she has a emotive expression.

Lovely:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120607/06/4fd0a6c96acbe_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120619/01/4fe036479c185_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/111216/12/4eebb09e09953_m.jpg

Thanks!

Aug 02 13 10:45 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

AdamGray wrote:
Lol, this thread is still alive?

Yes it is. As to whether I would work with you, perhaps. The image is not really my style and too dark but nice capture/shot of the model's profile. I also like the background. Though model's expression is kind of sad- Perhaps it was meant to be that way?

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130722/18/51ede300157f9_m.jpg

Aug 04 13 02:14 pm Link

Model

Megan_Reno

Posts: 23

Capon Bridge, West Virginia, US

I am interested in your opinion.
Thank you:)

Aug 04 13 06:47 pm Link

Photographer

The F-Stop

Posts: 1510

New York, New York, US

never mind

Aug 04 13 06:49 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Wulfilia wrote:
How about for me?

Maybe. It's tough to make out the details with the small view but I think your pose and outfit is pretty good. Definitely shows off your nice legs and the location is cool. Your expression, however can be improved.

Aug 04 13 06:55 pm Link

Photographer

B Jenkins Photography

Posts: 25

Vacaville, California, US

Would you ?

Aug 04 13 07:26 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Kylie Alexandra wrote:
Can I play? Would like to know smile

Yes. Gorgeous features- love your reddish hair and hair style, makeup and the bra looks great on you. Pose is okay but placement of your arm is not the best. Expression is decent.

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130703/16/51d4b1bdb706e_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130703/16/51d4afbd0913b_m.jpg

Aug 04 13 07:50 pm Link

Photographer

laurenaimee

Posts: 9

Bromsgrove-Catshill, England, United Kingdom

Me?

Aug 05 13 06:52 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Wordmarque wrote:
I'll play smile

Yes. I think the makeup looks great and the costuming is very cool. Really nice capture of the model's face and nice background color. Expression could be more engaging though

Lovely:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/081216/06/4947c1abe1b6e_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/090115/18/496feda0c16cc_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130530/10/51a788b81d969_m.jpg

Aug 05 13 11:41 am Link

Photographer

Ken Warren Photography

Posts: 923

GLENMOORE, Pennsylvania, US

I'll play.

Aug 05 13 11:47 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

mjartphotography wrote:
Although quite far from you.....I would like to think so!

Yes. Though the image is quite dark, I like the very cool patterns on the model's skin and the makeup looks good. Great capture of model's profile and nice, serene expression.

PS And yes you are far but I love England!

Love:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130716/07/51e55a8314e8e_m.jpg

Aug 05 13 12:49 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Jamarius Clark wrote:
me?

Probably. I like your physique and you look good in that outfit. The pose looks natural, casual but your expression is a little too intense.

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130601/19/51aaafba93c75_m.jpg

Aug 05 13 01:46 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Allie Nicoleeee wrote:
I'm curious to know!

Probably not. I don't love the black/white tones here and your pose is just there- your bent arm is awkward. I do like your hair and other feature though. But expression is very blank.

Better:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130711/08/51decb6ad3dde_m.jpg

Aug 06 13 11:57 am Link

Photographer

Tony M1 Photography

Posts: 7

Woodstock, Georgia, US

Please do let me know !  in PM as well ..

Aug 06 13 12:01 pm Link

Photographer

Caveman Creations

Posts: 580

Fort Worth, Texas, US

Might as well put my name in this hat.

Aug 06 13 12:01 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Samantha Hauxwell wrote:
I love games big_smile xxx

I would say yes. I think the post processing looks unnatural and the lighting is too bright but I like your energy. You've got a great expression that is playful and natural plus the black, white, red outfit looks nice on you. I like the added touch of the parasol and the flower in your hair.

Cute (but shoot different styles!):
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130721/12/51ec33f7e5640_m.jpg

Aug 06 13 12:30 pm Link

Model

Dominique Stollings

Posts: 1

Detroit, Michigan, US

i want to know

Aug 06 13 12:32 pm Link

Photographer

d o u g l a s

Posts: 242

San Diego, California, US

I'm game!

Aug 06 13 12:36 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Trill Imagery Ent wrote:
Ok Im game,lol

Probably not. The color tones are too grey and the model's pose as well as placement of model is kind of boring. Also the model's expression is very blank/bored.

Maybe:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130729/11/51f6b31757b69_m.jpg

Aug 06 13 01:44 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Razeal  wrote:
Tell me what you think

This looks very much like a snap shot- The quality of the image is poor, as is the lighting and general styling. It looks like you have a decent figure but this image doesn't show that - At least the pose is decent, but your expression looks bored, blank.

Perhaps:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130724/20/51f0998c27c39_m.jpg

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/33443720

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/33357763

Aug 06 13 06:08 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Jay Van-Stry wrote:
So... would you?

Yes. I like this concept- I think it's done well. The background/location is great, as is the model's outfit- and sexy in an understated way. Nice pose too. The model's makeup, hairstyle and expression are all good as well.

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130730/22/51f89fe966e3f_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130801/07/51fa6dd885789_m.jpg

Aug 06 13 06:39 pm Link

Model

Kayleigh Lucci

Posts: 2

Boston, Massachusetts, US

me please smile

Aug 06 13 06:57 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

trostheide_photography wrote:
I am curious, too :-)

BTW: why is it, that so many photographers have an avatar NOT showing themselfes? Isn't that the purpose of an avatar...?

No. The image is just not my style- it's too dark and stern for me and the expression is looks upset, almost angry. I do think the outfit looks good though.

The reason photographers don't have avatars that show themselves is because the photographer should showcase the work they are able to do with models.

Better:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130724/05/51efca12a83ad_m.jpg

Maybe:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130724/05/51efcc1fa65d0_m.jpg

Aug 07 13 08:15 am Link

Photographer

REED Photography

Posts: 32

Los Angeles, California, US

meow?

Aug 07 13 06:37 pm Link

Photographer

Nick Rivers

Posts: 6

Lubbock, Texas, US

what do you think?

Aug 07 13 06:39 pm Link

Model

MikkiMarvel

Posts: 86

Charlotte, North Carolina, US

Be super honest!

Aug 07 13 06:45 pm Link

Model

heartness

Posts: 27

Brisbane, Queensland, Australia

i would really like to know smile

Aug 07 13 07:02 pm Link

Model

SassyAshley

Posts: 7

Wylie, Texas, US

I want to know! lol

Aug 07 13 07:06 pm Link