Forums > Critique > Based on your Avatar... Would I work with you?

Photographer

Revenge Photography

Posts: 1833

Melbourne, Victoria, Australia

What do you think?

Aug 07 13 07:06 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Courtney von Vintage wrote:
Ouuu, I'm interested!

Aug 07 13 09:47 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Mario Be wrote:
Would you? wink

Yes. I love the softness of this image and the look of the model. She is lovely- you've captured her features well and the makeup is pretty too. Her expression is a little squinty though. The outdoor location is nice and I liked the blurred background.

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120729/03/501512b7a003e_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130612/11/51b8b9f356f9d_m.jpg

Aug 07 13 10:12 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Kasey LeeAnn wrote:
I'm curious :3

No. It's not really my style and I think we would clash. I'm not fond of the black/white tones in the image and the bra is too big, shirt/dress is not very fashionable. Also, your expression looks quite angry, upset...

Aug 08 13 08:52 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Urbiefoto wrote:
I'm game

No. The image is just not my style. It's too dark for me, the lighting is poor and the quality of the photo is not good- kind of blurry, over exposed. Also the pose of the model and the model's outfit is just okay. Her expression looks worried, not engaged at all. I do kind of like the way the model's hair is though.

You have so much better:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130306/14/5137c227909d4_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130204/17/51106197c28fc_m.jpg

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/26750017 18+

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/22413584 18+

Aug 08 13 07:33 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Arstine wrote:
I'm curious.

Yes. I like that the image is so clear - except for part of the arm and hand which is kind of distracting. Also, nice vibrant colors and model looks great.. Her black hair paired with blue eyes are striking. The outfit looks cool too. The expression, however is a bit squinty and not fully engaged.

Cool:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130729/18/51f718bca9de5_m.jpg

Aug 09 13 09:10 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Megan_Reno wrote:
I am interested in your opinion.
Thank you:)

I would say maybe. The quality of the image is not the best- I dont like the gritty feel, the black/white tones and the fact that it is clearly a snap shot. The outfit, though casual, looks good on you and your pose shows off your figure well. The cropping is not great though. And your expression is very blank/bored, shows no engagement.

Aug 10 13 10:25 am Link

Model

Shirin McBennett-Sheen

Posts: 285

Sydney, New South Wales, Australia

Would love to hear your opinion!

Aug 10 13 10:30 am Link

Model

Calli Pygian

Posts: 8092

Atlanta, Georgia, US

I'm curious.  What do you think?

Aug 10 13 11:06 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

The F-Stop wrote:
never mind

I would say yes. The curve/pose of the model is nice- quite sexy and I like how the leather pants look, paired with the white top. Also the strategic placement of arms to cover the breast area looks good. I just don't like that the quality of the image is a little gritty and the expression with eyes closed looks a bit worried.. Could be more serene. The background I like.

Aug 10 13 12:20 pm Link

Model

mwilde

Posts: 10

Los Angeles, California, US

Let me know?

Aug 10 13 12:50 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

B Jenkins Photography wrote:
Would you ?

Probably. It's a decent head shot, but there's something missing that I can't quite put my finger on. The lighting could be better and the model's expression is too blank. Though I do like the yellow sunhat, color of her eyes and earring.

Lovely:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130727/17/51f4652454c21_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130627/19/51ccf40c5291f_m.jpg

Aug 11 13 05:51 pm Link

Photographer

Gamma Photography

Posts: 231

Ottawa, Ontario, Canada

Color me curious smile

Thanks,

G

Aug 11 13 06:04 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

laurenaimee wrote:
Me?

Yes. I love the color scheme here and especially the pink and white roses in the model's hair. You've also captured the model's lovely face well, though the pose and especially placement of arm is a little awkward. Expression looks kind of faraway and sad, though that may have been the intention..

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130705/00/51d678db9d1bd_m.jpg

Aug 11 13 06:35 pm Link

Photographer

B Jenkins Photography

Posts: 25

Vacaville, California, US

Lovely:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130727/17/51f4652454c21_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130627/19/51ccf40c5291f_m.jpg

Thank you !

Aug 11 13 08:33 pm Link

Model

Jennifer Millikan Keene

Posts: 75

Asheboro, North Carolina, US

I'm curious to know if I'm doing something right since I'm a beginner.

Aug 11 13 09:53 pm Link

Photographer

Roberto Calcinelli

Posts: 3

Verona, Veneto, Italy

Your opinion on me?

Aug 13 13 05:56 am Link

Photographer

Timothy Bell

Posts: 402

North Richland Hills, Texas, US

would you?

Aug 13 13 09:11 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Ken Warren Photography wrote:
I'll play.

No. I think the styling is a bit too much, and not loving the makeup. Also model's expression looks very surprised/blank.

Aug 13 13 01:20 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Tony M1 Photography wrote:
Please do let me know !  in PM as well ..

Not sure. I'm not really into the style and the foreground distracts from the model. The expression and feel is gruff, which I dislike.

Aug 13 13 01:50 pm Link

Photographer

Mecia G Photography

Posts: 31

Addlestone, England, United Kingdom

Would love to know :-)

Aug 13 13 02:12 pm Link

Model

mwilde

Posts: 10

Los Angeles, California, US

Let me know

Aug 13 13 03:34 pm Link

Model

Marissa N Martini

Posts: 135

Clayton, California, US

Me smile?

Aug 13 13 04:17 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Caveman Creations wrote:
Might as well put my name in this hat.

No. The lighting is too stark, and not that flattering for the model. And the model's expression looks very surprised, a little scary. I do like the color of the model's hair and the way it frames her face but overall not a great picture. I do like the pale pink sheer shirt though and it looks good with the model's skin tone/color.

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130408/17/51635b7dec69a_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130622/00/51c54e3f87d58_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130408/17/51635c57db9d9_m.jpg

Aug 13 13 07:17 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Dominique Stollings wrote:
i want to know

Guess you're no longer on the site..

Aug 13 13 07:27 pm Link

Photographer

Images by MR

Posts: 7782

Vancouver, British Columbia, Canada

I gotta know...

Aug 13 13 07:37 pm Link

Photographer

Srefis Limited

Posts: 960

Asheville, North Carolina, US

Since you're finally online, lemme know! big_smile

Aug 13 13 07:41 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Birkey wrote:
I'm game!

Yes. Love the lighting and colors in this image. The model looks stunning - Great hairstyle look and lovely features. The black dress is simple and classy but the necklace sort of clashes with the heels (which look great but I would've chosen a less busy necklace) The model's pose is pretty good and the blue car in the background is nice. Model's expression could be more engaged.

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130807/20/52030f6822f38_m.jpg

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/33502469 18+

Aug 13 13 08:35 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Kayleigh Lucci wrote:
me please smile

Yes. Even though this sort of looks like a snap shot, it's pretty well done. I like the colors and patterns, especially the turquoise with the cream and black. Your outfit is fashion and looks great on you- Decent pose that shows off your figure well. Your hair and makeup also look good and you've got a fierce expression. Would like to see your eyes more though and more engagement.

Also cool:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121203/18/50bd641cb15d9_m.jpg

Aug 13 13 08:48 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

90038 Photography wrote:
meow?

I think so. I like the colors- light blue background and darker blue shirt and great capture of the model's face and his lovely features. Expression is decent- looks kind of sad but there's definitely connection and emotion in his gaze.

Even better:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130729/18/51f71577af9ad_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130807/16/5202dd7772567_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130713/23/51e23eed80639_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130715/09/51e4288ef1417_m.jpg

Aug 13 13 09:18 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Nick Rivers wrote:
what do you think?

I would say maybe. I like the clarity of the image and the bright color scheme. The shirt and pattern of it looks great on the model. Her pose could be more flattering and dynamic though -- the huge tattoo on her arm distracts me and doesn't really go with the rest of the image. But I really like the model's hairstyle and she has lovely features, though the head tilting up lets you see up the model's nose.. At least the long neck looks graceful. However, the model's expression is quite blank.

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130716/12/51e5a43577ca6_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130426/06/517a82555d252_m.jpg

Aug 14 13 08:45 am Link

Model

E L I N

Posts: 199

Montreal, Quebec, Canada

Played once I think but updated my port since. Thanks!

Aug 14 13 08:52 am Link

Photographer

Ken Warren Photography

Posts: 925

GLENMOORE, Pennsylvania, US

winking_wonder wrote:

No. I think the styling is a bit too much, and not loving the makeup. Also model's expression looks very surprised/blank.

Fair enough.

The styling and makeup are because the model is a dancer (American tribal style belly dance) and I was shooting a headshot for her, so I needed to deliver "This is what I'll look like". The expression is on me, though; the model is also an art model and I doubtless failed to give enough specific direction.

Aug 14 13 09:20 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

MikkiStith wrote:
Be super honest!

No. It looks like a snap shot, the quality is not too clear, is a bit blurry. Your pose is not the most flattering (even though I know it is to cover your breasts) and your expression looks shocked/surprised.

Maybe:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120616/17/4fdd1f1a551c7_m.jpg

Aug 14 13 09:52 am Link

Photographer

d o u g l a s

Posts: 242

San Diego, California, US

winking_wonder wrote:

Yes. Love the lighting and colors in this image. The model looks stunning - Great hairstyle look and lovely features. The black dress is simple and classy but the necklace sort of clashes with the heels (which look great but I would've chosen a less busy necklace) The model's pose is pretty good and the blue car in the background is nice. Model's expression could be more engaged.

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130807/20/52030f6822f38_m.jpg

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/33502469 18+

Thanks for your candid feedback - much appreciated!

Aug 14 13 10:20 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

heartness wrote:
i would really like to know smile

I would say yes, even though this looks slightly like a snap shot. The black and white tones are nice and the lighting is pretty good. I really like the long dress on you - shows off your figure. And nice tiara and necklace! The pose is relaxed and natural. Your expression is good- emotive.

Aug 14 13 11:55 am Link

Photographer

KFPhotography

Posts: 67

ROCKAWAY PARK, New York, US

I would love to hear it too smile

Aug 16 13 05:23 am Link

Photographer

JakzPhoto

Posts: 17

Brisbane, Queensland, Australia

I'm curious, let me know.

Aug 16 13 07:16 am Link

Model

Skyler Bleu

Posts: 522

Albany, Oregon, US

I'm curious! Please let me know what you think of my avatar or if I have a better picture. Thanks!

Aug 16 13 05:04 pm Link

Photographer

Personal Photograph

Posts: 245

Davenport, Iowa, US

Ever been to Iowa?

Aug 16 13 05:12 pm Link