Forums > Critique > Based on your Avatar... Would I work with you?

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Zachary Epstein wrote:
what do you think? I used a pic of myself because it found it kinda weird that you dont know who this random person without a face is contacting you.

I think it's better not to have a pic of yourself as avatar if you're the photographer, but to show the work you are able to do in the style you do it. So I see that you've changed your avatar... So I would say yes. I like the model's pose and the dress looks great on her- good capture of the model, especially the model's legs. Cool location/background. Only thing is expression looks blank/confused and it should be more engaged.

Sep 08 13 08:07 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

JustinSteven wrote:
Sure

Yes. I like the color scheme here and you've got a handsome look. Outfit looks good on you and I like your pose/expression in the left side image. The image on right side is okay, but the pose is a little slouchy and awkward and your expression squinty.

Nice (though too dark at the bottom):
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130706/23/51d90c5d46968_m.jpg

Also like:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130728/02/51f4eaf09d0b5_m.jpg

Sep 09 13 11:27 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Soft Lights wrote:
I'd like to know.

I would say maybe. The panties on the model looks good, as does her tattoos- Nice skin (though a little orange in color) and good pose. Model's hair looks okay- Could be more polished/neat but the makeup is lovely. Expression is decent.

Cute:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130525/11/51a104ae2e387_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120520/12/4fb94322164df_m.jpg

Sep 09 13 12:17 pm Link

Photographer

PAULDO

Posts: 124

Garden Grove, California, US

Would you work with me dear?

Sep 09 13 12:37 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Jason B FORBEs wrote:
i'm down!

No. This is just not my style. I don't like the black/white tones and the gritty feel of the image. Plus, I hate smoking shots! The look of the model is very rough- and not sure I like the crop. Expression is decent though.

Much Better:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130804/22/51ff3d736639c_m.jpg

Sep 09 13 07:44 pm Link

Model

VeronicaB

Posts: 97

San Francisco, California, US

how about me?

Sep 09 13 08:06 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Damien Anthony 412 wrote:
How about mine ?
Thanks

No. This looks very much like a snap shot.. and it's blurry. The suit looks good but the posing and expression are not great.

Sep 09 13 08:46 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Doc McCoy wrote:
Me...?

I would say maybe. The skin is way over photo shopped and the color seems unnatural. However, the model's body is quite sexy and I like the belly button ring she has on. The pose is just okay and the expression looks quite blank. Also not loving the crop at the bottom.

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/100730/09/4c52fd40244e8_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/101001/16/4ca671bb2f251_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/100710/07/4c388901d1827_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130808/10/5203dac4b2efa_m.jpg

Sep 10 13 07:48 pm Link

Model

FranklinElsey

Posts: 71

Omaha, Nebraska, US

I'd hope so..

Sep 11 13 06:06 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Jay Black wrote:
Well, I'm a photographer who feels I owe it to models to show myself once in my portfolio. It's only fair, right? I made sure a model was in the shot with me.

Should it stay or should it go, Winking Wonder?

I see you've changed your avatar. I prefer seeing a photo of a model... That way, I get to see your true style. Anyway I would say maybe. I'm not loving the crop- it's a bit too tight and while the green shirt nicely matches the model's green eyes, being able to clearly make out the outline of the model's bra and see part it, is not good. Though I must say you've captured the model's cleavage well. And I like how smooth the model's skin looks. Beyond that, the model's expression looks quite blank - It should be more emotive.

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120322/07/4f6b378082daa_m.jpg

Sep 11 13 09:03 pm Link

Photographer

Darryl Cobb Jr

Posts: 66

Philadelphia, Pennsylvania, US

Would appreciate the feedback on this.

Sep 11 13 09:06 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

DicePhotography wrote:
go for it!

Yes. I really like the lighting and color scheme here. The model looks great- nice capture of the model's figure and cute outfit. Posing is pretty good, as is expression. Cool background location too.

Sep 11 13 09:26 pm Link

Model

C L O U D

Posts: 373

Bournemouth, England, United Kingdom

hows about me? smile

Sep 11 13 10:21 pm Link

Photographer

MikeSmith Photography

Posts: 2

Nixa, Missouri, US

I'll play.

Sep 11 13 10:25 pm Link

Photographer

Rebel Lens

Posts: 225

Sydney, New South Wales, Australia

Yeh you'd work with me, because you were bored and there wasn't interesting on TV that day. big_smile

Sep 12 13 02:40 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Perris Cartwright wrote:
Would you work with me? Thank you.

Probably. I'm not sure this is the best image to use as it's a bit blurry but I like the smoky eye effect and long/dark/thick eyelashes. Skin also looks pretty good as well.

I like:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130328/16/5154d60ec9eec_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130906/21/522aaad3c9d5e_m.jpg

Sep 12 13 09:48 am Link

Photographer

2Banounced

Posts: 45

Grand Haven, Michigan, US

This is my latest shot....interested?

Sep 12 13 10:00 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Daren Del Val wrote:
How about me?  I'm still really new to photography but learning with each shoot.

I would say yes. I like the collage look and think that the image has a nice lifestyle quality/feel about it. Model has on a nice outfit and what seem to be natural poses that look good. Though the pose in the middle image is awkward- especially the elbow pointed toward the camera and the expression (of the middle image) is quite blank. The rest of the expressions are lively- Lovely smiles. I also don't love the pose in the bottom right corner- arms/elbows are in the way. Very pretty location though- Nice backgrounds.
PS I would love to visit Hawaii!

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130609/14/51b4ece52fc33_m.jpg

I like the top 2 images and bottom image:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130609/14/51b4eec806fa7_m.jpg

Also nice, however there are 2 images are essentially the same so I would keep only 1 of each -- Probably the eyes open versions:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130609/14/51b4f03ccb892_m.jpg

Sep 12 13 11:32 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

PhotographE wrote:
what about me please : )

I would say maybe. I do like the color scheme and the outfit is pretty cool. The camera lets me know that it's a self portrait. Your expression is a bit too surprised though.

I like:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130731/19/51f9c8de5bcd7_m.jpg

Sep 12 13 09:18 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Lovely Day Media wrote:
If you're still playing, I'd like to know. smile

Yes. Nice lighting and colors in this image. The model looks lovely - I like the way her hair looks and the green dress is quite flattering. Pose is decent though the right arm is cut off a bit and is too white. The expression is a little blank- Should be more engaged/emotive.

Sep 12 13 09:30 pm Link

Model

Roxy Naughton

Posts: 29

Richmond, Virginia, US

Very interested.

Sep 12 13 10:03 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Mountain Image wrote:
Curious what you think.

I would say yes.  I like the clear smooth quality of the image and the color scheme is nice. The outfit looks really good on the model and you've captured her figure well. The pose is also nice, but the crop isn't the best. Expression could be more engaged/emotive as well.

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130125/23/510383bb3d3df_m.jpg

Sep 13 13 11:11 pm Link

Model

_M_M

Posts: 9

Dumont d'Urville - permanent station of France, Sector claimed by France, Antarctica

Me please!

Sep 13 13 11:26 pm Link

Photographer

darensphotos

Posts: 4

Honolulu, Hawaii, US

winking_wonder wrote:
PS I would love to visit Hawaii!

Thanks for the honest reply!  and yeah... you should visit hawaii!  If you ever do, let me know!  I'll be your tour guide!  just make sure you're not on any diet because hawaii has the best food.  Non-stop activities: swim with dolphins, monk seals, turtles, jump off of waterfalls, etc!

Sep 14 13 01:09 am Link

Model

A L O

Posts: 22

Sarasota, Florida, US

Let me know what do you think! I will appreciate it!

Sep 14 13 06:11 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Daren Del Val wrote:

Thanks for the honest reply!  and yeah... you should visit hawaii!  If you ever do, let me know!  I'll be your tour guide!  just make sure you're not on any diet because hawaii has the best food.  Non-stop activities: swim with dolphins, monk seals, turtles, jump off of waterfalls, etc!

No problem. I definitely will let you know if I go out to Hawaii. I would love to swim with the dolphins etc!

Sep 14 13 08:34 am Link

Model

Leone P

Posts: 515

Batley, England, United Kingdom

Interested to know what you think. smile

Sep 14 13 08:35 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Dave McDermott wrote:
I just put up a new avi so I'd like to know. smile

I would say maybe. The black and white tones are nice but the model's skin, especially face, looks over airbrushed. The pose is good and looks sexy - Nice capture of the model's figure. The model's hair looks great as well. Expression seems a little blank but not too bad.

Sep 14 13 09:33 pm Link

Model

KRISTEN MARIE

Posts: 484

Toronto, Ontario, Canada

smile me!

Sep 14 13 09:40 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

PhotographE wrote:

I think I've already gotten to you and the answer was maybe. The colors are nice - I like the suit. And the camera lets me know that it's an image of you. Decent self portrait!

Sep 14 13 10:34 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Black Rainbow Inc wrote:
Thoughts?

No. It looks like a snap shot- It's slightly blurry, washed out, and I'm not loving the crop especially the blurriness on the sides. The model's big blue eyes are beautiful though, with a decent expression - and the best part of the photo.

Kind of cool:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130906/15/522a5841dcd0e_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130905/13/5228efc0a7bd2_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130901/14/5223b848423ed_m.jpg

Sep 14 13 10:46 pm Link

Photographer

Gran Via 536

Posts: 343

Barcelona, Catalonia, Spain

Still playing?

Sep 15 13 02:33 am Link

Photographer

fussgangerfoto

Posts: 156

Philadelphia, Pennsylvania, US

winking_wonder wrote:
I don't like the black/white tones and the gritty feel of the image. Plus, I hate smoking shots!

Oh snap! You gave me an idea for my next avatar - a high-grained B&W film shot of a chain-smoking waif.

Sep 15 13 03:04 am Link

Model

Lauren Hiebert

Posts: 13

Fresno, California, US

Me?

Sep 15 13 03:21 am Link

Model

Lilith Von Dahlia

Posts: 123

Newcastle, New South Wales, Australia

Me please. smile

Sep 15 13 03:50 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Tomas Kibsgaard Larsen wrote:
Sounds interesting.. I'll give it a go!

I would say yes. I like the lighting and color scheme. The model's outfit is chic and looks great on her. Nice posing as well. You've captured her figure well. I just don't really like the car in the background and that her eyes look closed behind the sunglasses.
PS Would love to come to London again!

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130221/02/5125fcc84b152_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130902/12/5224e2cfb04b8_m.jpg

Sep 15 13 04:55 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Lee Clarke wrote:
do your magic

I would say yes. The image is sharp, has nice black and white tones and though I can't see the color of your eyes, they look lovely. The outfit is decent, but the pose and expression could be better- You look a little mad.

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130904/07/522746ea937a6_m.jpg

Sep 16 13 01:54 pm Link

Model

MissGoldenarrow

Posts: 8

Nijmegen, Gelderland, Netherlands

Me too please!

Sep 16 13 02:06 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Danielle Reid wrote:
I'm sure I posted here a few months ago, but I changed my avatar since then. What do you think?

I would say yes. I like the smooth clarity of this image though your skin looks quite photo shopped. Nice makeup though - I like the sparkles on your eyes and you have lovely facial features. The bra and panties set looks good on you and your pose is pretty good. Expression looks a little blank though.

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130907/22/522c0f34ef761_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130701/00/51d12e6f8418a_m.jpg

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/33117877 18+

Sep 16 13 04:46 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Britney  Lee wrote:
I'd love your opinion as well !!

I would say maybe. Not sure what the significance of putting makeup on is for a model's portfolio, but I do like your look. You've got nice features and the lingerie is sexy/looks great on you. I can tell you have a good figure. Your expression looks like a blank canvas though.

You have *MUCH* better images:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130901/15/5223c5a54546c_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130901/16/5223cba225631_m.jpg

Sep 17 13 09:13 pm Link