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Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Phil Bartow Photography wrote:
If your not out of breath, I'm In !

No. While the location/background is beautiful, the framing of the model is not great and the model's face looks not as polished/smooth as the rest of her body. I will say you have captured her figure well but the pose of her head is not so good and the expression is weak.

Sep 18 13 09:06 pm Link

Model

Lauren Arcadia

Posts: 15

Perth, Western Australia, Australia

I'm game

Sep 18 13 09:11 pm Link

Model

mjjay

Posts: 1

Sunnyvale, California, US

New to the game, but definitely in the game..

Sep 18 13 09:31 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

PAULDO wrote:
Would you work with me dear?

Yes. Normally I don't really like darker images, but these are done well especially the top two images. The model is lovely, and you've captured her figure really well. I like the poses, the hair in the wind look and the expressions are good- emotive. The bottom image is also decent- sensual and full of emotion as well.

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130831/13/5222514aed55e_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110727/21/4e30df1a889c2_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120528/20/4fc441e473c3b_m.jpg

Sep 18 13 09:56 pm Link

Photographer

Matrix Mark

Posts: 158

Maumee, Ohio, US

Wondering... work with me?

Sep 18 13 10:03 pm Link

Photographer

HChoi

Posts: 2

River Edge, New Jersey, US

I'm down for this.

Sep 19 13 12:23 am Link

Model

Kortney Kesha

Posts: 16

Denton, North Carolina, US

I'll play smile

Sep 19 13 10:22 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

VeronicaB wrote:
how about me?

No. This looks sort of like a portrait snap shot and the coloring is a bit off. The pose and composition is boring and though you have nice big eyes, the expression does not meet your eyes.

Maybe (even though it still looks like a snap shot... get more professional images!):
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130826/18/521c0318dad1e_m.jpg

Sep 19 13 01:30 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

FranklinElsey wrote:
I'd hope so..

Yes. Even though I can't make out how you look exactly, I do like this image. Nice bodypaint and great capture of the side of your face- You appear to be handsome with nice bone structure and features.

Like:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130913/06/52330e5d4606a_m.jpg

Sep 20 13 10:05 pm Link

Model

ChelseaChee

Posts: 9

Sydney, New South Wales, Australia

Yes, please....

Sep 20 13 11:46 pm Link

Model

Peter Jo

Posts: 11

Amsterdam, Noord-Holland, Netherlands

What about mine?

Sep 22 13 04:52 am Link

Model

Tremmy

Posts: 19

Nizhniy Novgorod, Nizhniy Novgorod, Russia

I'm back again smile

Sep 22 13 02:15 pm Link

Model

Brittany Waldron

Posts: 33

Erie, Pennsylvania, US

I'll give it a go

Sep 22 13 02:17 pm Link

Photographer

juliarabkin

Posts: 570

Rochester, New York, US

me too

Sep 22 13 02:39 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Photo by Darryl Cobb Jr wrote:
Would appreciate the feedback on this.

No. Though this is a dynamic portrait, I don't think the the pose or expression is that flattering and the model's arm/hands look disproportionately larger than the rest of his quite skinny body. Also not loving the outfit- the color pairing is not great.

I like:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130912/15/5232446be1e3a_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130903/20/5226af113767e_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130911/18/52311e400a390_m.jpg

Sep 22 13 09:40 pm Link

Model

Becky Ward

Posts: 262

Crawley, England, United Kingdom

What about mine?

Becky x

Sep 23 13 06:23 am Link

Model

Courtney Virginia

Posts: 201

Atlanta, Georgia, US

Go for it

Sep 23 13 06:47 am Link

Photographer

Mr Rod P

Posts: 142

Vienna, Virginia, US

OK, I am in!

Sep 23 13 09:20 am Link

Photographer

DFTBA Photography

Posts: 74

Waterbury, Connecticut, US

Giving this a try - im still starting out so please be gentle.

Sep 23 13 10:16 am Link

Photographer

Hardy Yuen

Posts: 9

Hồ Chí Minh City, Pomorskie, Vietnam

i'm in smile

Sep 23 13 11:35 am Link

Retoucher

RON IMAGES EDITED

Posts: 483

Miami, Florida, US

Would you????

Sep 23 13 11:41 am Link

Model

Ruqya

Posts: 58

Bergen, Hordaland, Norway

probably not..but i will try anyway.. smile

Sep 23 13 02:54 pm Link

Photographer

mlsy

Posts: 36

Singapore, Singapore, Singapore

Would you work with me?

Sep 23 13 03:35 pm Link

Model

Kendrah Astira

Posts: 56

Orlando, Florida, US

Curious ahaha

Sep 23 13 06:54 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

C L O U D wrote:
hows about me? smile

Yes. First of all, I love this type of ethereal pretty pic and the lighting/colors are nice. I love your general look- long lean figure, good looking face and lovely features and blue eyes. The outfit looks great and good posing but your expression is a teeny bit blank.

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130413/06/516956f991580_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/090226/15/49a72272b2544_m.jpg

Sep 23 13 07:49 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

MikeSmith Photography wrote:
I'll play.

Yes. The model has an extreme amount of makeup on but she looks good- The lighting is great on her and though the background is dark, I'm not focused on that. Also the model's skin is lovely - love her pose and long neck - looks so graceful. I like the silver on her neck and the glitter on lips/eyes. The eye makeup is really gorgeous and hair is nice too- though the top of her head is a bit much. Expression is emotive and ethereal.

Lovely:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130918/08/5239c9f49f4a8_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130311/20/513e9ce4135cc_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130311/19/513e96310b153_m.jpg

Sep 23 13 08:02 pm Link

Photographer

Ella Wilkes Photography

Posts: 404

Canberra, Australian Capital Territory, Australia

Would you?

Sep 23 13 09:19 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

MR J Photography wrote:
Yeh you'd work with me, because you were bored and there wasn't interesting on TV that day. big_smile

I would say probably though I don't like the dark shadow around the model's arm. The showing of the model's skin and smoothness of it looks nice though and I like how the model is in color while the background is black/white. Also really like the model's look- Nice hair color, great makeup and lovely features. The expression is quite empty though.

Decent:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130907/06/522b301d43814_m.jpg

Sep 24 13 09:53 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

16th Floor wrote:
This is my latest shot....interested?

I would say probably not. I feel that the model's face is a bit blurry and the crop is a bit too tight. Also the angle of the model's face is not the most flattering. I do like her bra and necklace though. Expression is not great.

Sep 24 13 10:27 am Link

Model

Marleaux Desire

Posts: 3

Philadelphia, Pennsylvania, US

Would you work with me ?

Sep 24 13 12:22 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Roxy Naughton wrote:
Very interested.

Maybe. I like the color of your dress and your hair color/style- Nice tendrils framing your face. The makeup doesn't match the outfit though and your posing could be better. Expression is okay.

Sep 24 13 12:31 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Mischi - wrote:
Me please!

Maybe. I don't think the posing- especially your hand- is not great and the crop especially on the left side, cutting out part of your arm is not very good. I do like how you have the sheets covering you though and you have lovely bone structure and nice features. The expression, however, is quite blank- Should be more emotive, especially for a sensual shot like it is!

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130908/14/522ceaf5a12e1_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120318/19/4f669376074fc_m.jpg

Sep 24 13 12:43 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Angelina Chloe wrote:
Let me know what do you think! I will appreciate it!

Yes. Even though the image is just a snap shot- you have a really pretty look. I like the way your hair looks and the way it frames your face, as well as your nice features. Lovely big blue eyes! The expression looks quite blank though- Should have more connection with the camera. And while I like the shirt, the pose could be better.

Cool:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130331/09/51586847a5c71_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130621/18/51c4fe5b33942_m.jpg

Sep 24 13 01:06 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Leone P wrote:
Interested to know what you think. smile

Yes. I really like the color scheme and the feel of this image. You also have a beautiful, unique look - love your big blue eyes and your hair style- the flowers in your hair are lovely. Nice makeup and endearing expression. The pose is decent- though hands are a little awkward. Pretty blue outfit material though and nice background. I just don't like the huge watermark from the photographer but that's not your fault.

Like:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130913/08/52332931239d6_m.jpg

Sep 24 13 09:05 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

KRISTEN MARIE wrote:
smile me!

I would say probably. I think the post processing work is a bit much and that your skin looks too smooth- reminiscent of a doll's skin, especially your face. But I really like your long light blond hair with brown and the makeup is nice. Pose is okay- the right hand looks awkwardly placed though. And expression is wide eyed and blank.

Lovely:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130823/19/5218179ac1d2c_m.jpg

Sep 25 13 09:50 am Link

Model

Jenna Bunny

Posts: 10

Missoula, Montana, US

New Avatar, curious

Sep 25 13 09:51 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Gran Via 536 wrote:
Still playing?

Maybe. I like the color scheme and the composition. The model looks pretty good- I especially like the outfit. Posing is okay but placement of right hand/arm could be better and the expression is quite stern.

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130818/10/52110862759d1_m.jpg

Sep 25 13 06:17 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Lauren Hiebert wrote:
Me?

No. This is very snap shotty- Also very grainy, blurry, not in focus and unprofessional. The pose is not great and expression looks blank.

Sep 25 13 09:04 pm Link

Model

Ida Bailey

Posts: 7

Brooklyn, New York, US

Would like to hear your opinion...

Sep 27 13 01:27 am Link

Photographer

Bruce M Walker

Posts: 106

Toronto, Ontario, Canada

Just for grins.

Sep 27 13 02:21 am Link