Forums > Critique > Based on your Avatar... Would I work with you?

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5743

New York, New York, US

Christina Dominguez wrote:
what do you think?

No. The pose is okay - shows off your arms well but not really the rest of your body and looks like your skin is way too shiny/smooth. Your hair and makeup look pretty good but expression looks upset/worried... Not attractive at all.

Better:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/131002/08/524c352210777_m.jpg

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31777869 18+

Oct 27 13 05:38 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5743

New York, New York, US

LadyBritt wrote:
Im in:)

No. What you've chosen as your avatar doesn't really show how you look- facially and overall body. I can kind of gleam that you have a decent figure since I can see your ribcage and some shape- breast, abdomen etc.. And I don't really like the black/white tones, shadows and darkness of the image.

I like (a lot!):
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130924/14/5241ff9344579_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/131018/14/5261ac7a3d4d3_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/100710/15/4c38f7eb3ecf7_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/100622/21/4c218fb0ad124_m.jpg

Oct 27 13 07:30 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5743

New York, New York, US

Dallas Hicks wrote:
I'm game.

Yes, even though I think the expression is a bit too stern/serious, I like your overall look and physique. I love the blue of your eyes and the intensity of it, and I'm a sucker for blonds. The clarity and detail of the image is also good- Nice texture to the wetness.

Well done:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/131017/13/52604b15ec870_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130919/13/523b5f1fc7df5_m.jpg

Oct 28 13 09:50 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5743

New York, New York, US

Duncan Cheng wrote:
Deal me in!

Yes. I like the lighting and color scheme - Nice composite as well. I think the bottom 2 images are really strong and I love the posing, look of the model. Nice emotive expressions as well. Top image is also nice- and you've done a good job capturing the model's facial features.

I like:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121201/21/50bae0cef3881_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121106/11/509968f80ebed_m.jpg

Oct 29 13 09:43 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5743

New York, New York, US

vbjjohnson wrote:
May I have your opinion please? Thank you in advance!

Yes. You look really good against the dark backdrop and the white you have on shows you off well. You have lovely hair that is nicely styled and parted. Also like facial features as well as nice makeup. The expression is sort of wide eyed innocent with a touch of seduction.

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/131009/21/525630393c85b_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/131009/21/5256311d9b5fc_m.jpg

Oct 29 13 10:08 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5743

New York, New York, US

dandylioness wrote:
Would you work with me? (: I'm taking a look at your profile at this very moment O:

Yes. I like the color scheme and softness of the image. And you look lovely- Especially hair in the wind and your facial features. The red shirt looks good on you and I like the jewelry as well. Expression is nice.

Oct 30 13 01:47 pm Link

Model

Cleo1

Posts: 3

Merthyr Tydfil, Wales, United Kingdom

*holds hand up* :-)

Oct 30 13 01:58 pm Link

Photographer

Solas

Posts: 9631

Lethbridge, Alberta, Canada

me?

Oct 30 13 02:02 pm Link

Photographer

vlmedia

Posts: 169

Salem, Oregon, US

me?

Oct 30 13 02:06 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5743

New York, New York, US

robbyrockett wrote:
Sign me up. How about me?

I would say yes. I sort of like the blueish color scheme and you have nice features- decent pose that shows them off well. The expression looks good as well and I also like your outfit.

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130920/04/523c30896dd45_m.jpg

Oct 30 13 09:02 pm Link

Model

Samone Love

Posts: 13

Detroit, Michigan, US

Welllll?  (:

Oct 30 13 11:34 pm Link

Model

Lulu LiCole

Posts: 2

San Diego, California, US

Wow. I'm amazed you've actually gone through with this. smile

Oct 30 13 11:58 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5743

New York, New York, US

Kristopher St Pierre wrote:
yes? no?

No. The image is too small to use as an avatar, thus hard to make out the details. Upon closer inspection, I like the look of the model - Pretty features, makeup and outfit. The expression is kind of blank though- There is little connection/emotion and with this type of image there should be. However, I would probably lose the hat and guitar- They seem out of place.

Oct 31 13 08:28 am Link

Model

country fearless

Posts: 3

Twin Falls, Idaho, US

id like to know !!!

Oct 31 13 09:38 am Link

Model

Robby Rockett

Posts: 85

Palm Coast, Florida, US

winking_wonder wrote:

I would say yes. I sort of like the blueish color scheme and you have nice features- decent pose that shows them off well. The expression looks good as well and I also like your outfit.

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130920/04/523c30896dd45_m.jpg

Thank you so much for your time in this running thread. It looks like youve kept very commited to it. Its Impressive!
Thank you for the response and the thoroughly checking out the ports and giving useful feedback too.
I have to say i was a bit surprised I got a positive response, youre pretty tough and i have almost no experience.
Keep up the good work!

Oct 31 13 06:19 pm Link

Photographer

Geo Leon Photography

Posts: 142

Orlando, Florida, US

Game!

Oct 31 13 10:39 pm Link

Photographer

IDG Photography ZA

Posts: 11

Johannesburg, Gauteng, South Africa

I will play - Thanks

Nov 01 13 02:45 am Link

Model

Oscar Espinosa Jr

Posts: 1

Burnaby, British Columbia, Canada

How about mine?

Nov 01 13 02:54 am Link

Photographer

Rich Suit

Posts: 12

Maidenhead, England, United Kingdom

Can I play too?

Nov 01 13 05:53 am Link

Photographer

Cheval Blanc

Posts: 23

Sweetwater, Tennessee, US

I love feedback, let me know please.

Nov 01 13 05:58 am Link

Photographer

notbjorn

Posts: 151

Birmingham, England, United Kingdom

If this is still going, I'd love to hear smile

Nov 01 13 06:02 am Link

Photographer

beyond-the-surface

Posts: 94

New York, New York, US

How about me?

Cheers

Nov 01 13 06:02 am Link

Makeup Artist

Marci Cawley

Posts: 15

Vacaville, California, US

if you are still game, what do you think?

ps: 128 pgs of this topic is amazing! thanks for the constructive advice smile

Nov 01 13 06:47 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5743

New York, New York, US

AG91 wrote:
GO For it smile

I would say yes. I like the color scheme- pink is one of my favorite colors. I also like the style you're portraying - nice jewelry, fur draped around you, and very lovely makeup. Pose is pretty good but would look even better if you showed your neck. Expression looks nice- serene.

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/131022/09/5266a34c794e1_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121208/01/50c30c28099f0_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/131022/11/5266bfd691a15_m.jpg

Nov 01 13 07:55 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5743

New York, New York, US

Rosie Sklar wrote:
Me? smile

No. It's not really my style. I don't really like the grey on the model- I think blue or another color would look better on the model (and it doesn't match your hat) Also the pose isn't the best. The expression is okay and I do like the model's nice blue eyes

Better:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/131023/19/526886a85ab8b_m.jpg

Nov 01 13 08:19 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5743

New York, New York, US

Miz LuLu wrote:
?? smile

Maybe. It's a little tough to make out the details of the image but I do like your look. You have lovely hair- love the color of it and how it frames your face, as well as nice features. And I like the flower crown on your head. While white looks good on you, not sure about this particular dress- it doesn't show off your figure well and the pose is kind of just there. Expression also needs work. The background is cool though.

Maybe:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/131004/19/524f753e1e290_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130915/14/5236288bbab25_m.jpg

Nov 01 13 03:21 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5743

New York, New York, US

Celine Sophia wrote:
Me please

Yes! Gorgeous lighting and color scheme. Really like your hair - the style and the way it has a slightly moving quality to it. Your wide eyed expression also looks nice and I like the color of your eyes as well. Beautiful bare skin as well. Only aspect I would watch out for is showing more of your neck- it's a little lost in the current image/pose.

Lovely:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/131016/00/525e4394498c2_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130112/20/50f23b225951b_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130520/16/519ab6f532b15_m.jpg

Nov 01 13 06:22 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5743

New York, New York, US

Sonoma Coast Photograph wrote:
When you get around to me...

No. While the black and white tones are nice, I don't like the angle, cropping (cutting of part of the model's hand), expression - model looks upset. Also the hair - bangs are weird.. Though I will say the white shirt looks good against the model's skin.

Better:
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/33837398 18+

Nov 02 13 10:01 pm Link

Model

Gabriella S

Posts: 4

Boston, Massachusetts, US

Okay, I'll bite. I'm a bit new to all of this (I've only been modeling since July of this year) so I'm curious to hear opinions.

Nov 02 13 10:18 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5743

New York, New York, US

Johny Hoffman wrote:
Please! I would love to hear

Yes. I really like the lighting, color scheme and model. I love the model's outfit, jewelry and overall look. Beautiful hair, facial features and skin. However, placement of hands are a bit awkward and don't like that the top hand is cut off. The expression looks like one of sadness/longing which I think was intentional. But not sure why the net is there...

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/131018/16/5261c43ea5ec0_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130716/15/51e5c564410cf_m.jpg

Nov 03 13 05:11 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5743

New York, New York, US

Shirin McBennett-Sheen wrote:
What do you think?

I'm going to say yes. You're clearly a fitness model which I am certainly not but I like your look and your shape. Great form, pose and I like your hairstyle/features. The expression is a bit serious but maybe that's what you were going for?

Your port is certainly a surprise; a lot more variety than I expected!:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130810/11/52068223836f6_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130818/19/5211808d38141_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130904/19/5227ee9094d3a_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130901/02/52230eb8ee420_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130901/04/52232035e09f1_m.jpg

Nov 03 13 06:57 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5743

New York, New York, US

BillyVegas wrote:
I'd like to hear!

Maybe. It's not my usual style but I've always wanted to do a shoot with a motorcycle. The lingerie is sexy and I the poses of the body are pretty good- arms on the front model are a bit awkward though. Expressions look too blank. Also skin looks way too over-retouched but I do like the colors and background.

Nov 04 13 09:59 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5743

New York, New York, US

Tremmy wrote:

Thanks,
I'm back for more

I would say maybe. I like the roses on your head and the jacket/shirt fits you nicely. However I think the feathers on your shoulders are out of place and that the pose is just there/boring. Also your expression is very blank. Nice makeup though.

I like:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130314/12/51422043b29d9_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130523/02/519de04e4e69d_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130921/00/523d4610ac9c0_m.jpg

Nov 04 13 10:53 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5743

New York, New York, US

Cleo1 wrote:
*holds hand up* :-)

Yes. I like the pose you've got going on- nice long neck and the smooth skin/facial features and perfect makeup. The gold jewelry also looks great. The expression is okay- a bit stiff especially around the lip area but overall decent.

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/131015/12/525d9691929c8_m.jpg

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/34186397 18+

Nov 05 13 11:17 am Link

Photographer

Images by MR

Posts: 8252

Vancouver, British Columbia, Canada

Would you?

Nov 05 13 11:22 am Link

Makeup Artist

Jade Brady

Posts: 18

Manchester, England, United Kingdom

Would love your honest opinion? Makeup artist - Jade

Nov 05 13 01:29 pm Link

Model

Oceandamour

Posts: 20

Harrogate, Tennessee, US

Sure!

Nov 05 13 07:07 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5743

New York, New York, US

Karl Johnston wrote:
me?

Yes. I love love love the lighting and colors of that big blue night sky - So beautiful and in clear detail. The model looks okay though I think a different outfit and pose would be more flattering. Also her expression quite blank- should be more engaged/emotive especially with that gorgeous background.

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110719/12/4e25e15e13749_m.jpg

Nov 05 13 09:54 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5743

New York, New York, US

vlmedia wrote:
me?

I would say maybe. I like the color scheme and the model looks good - Nice shirt, love her hair and the way it is styled. The posing and expression could be better though.

I like:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110505/09/4dc2d37266a1a_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/100317/11/4ba1255707d6a_m.jpg

Nov 07 13 08:30 am Link

Model

Beth Chambers

Posts: 465

London, England, United Kingdom

Me please smile

Nov 07 13 10:02 am Link