Forums > Critique > Based on your Avatar... Would I work with you?

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

John Weidow wrote:
You are the athletic nature type. I suggest more natural settings and loosen up. Move, dance enjoy the camera winking at you and capturing your true beauty. Move to the rythyms around you make the photographer shoot 100 shots, but capture the true you.

John
http://www.modelmayhem.com/Johns Photography

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Dec 18 13 01:19 pm Link

Wardrobe Stylist

Angelina F Scantlebury

Posts: 44

Brooklyn, New York, US

I would love to know! smile

Dec 18 13 02:01 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Melanie Long wrote:
Me Me ME! big_smile

Perhaps. It's a bit small to make out the details but I do like your overall look and style. Nice comfortable pose as well but not sure about our expression- Would like to see more of your face.

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/131209/14/52a647cc5e361_m.jpg

Dec 18 13 08:25 pm Link

Photographer

Neil Cowley

Posts: 76

Peoria, Illinois, US

Rich Davis wrote:
Want to get wet?

ALWAYS!

Dec 18 13 08:29 pm Link

Model

Kyle Glickman

Posts: 6

Rochester, New York, US

Hey check me out!

Dec 18 13 08:57 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

starla dawn wrote:
interesting! I'm curious

Yes. I like your posing and the dress looks great on you. The background is nice, as is the lighting and colors. Your expression is a little stern though.

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130221/20/5126ed4311af9_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/131211/04/52a85b3701528_m.jpg

Dec 18 13 10:49 pm Link

Model

Alli Synn

Posts: 2

Martinez, California, US

Been curious for a while since I need to update my port.

Dec 18 13 10:56 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Connie Rose wrote:
Id like to know what you think smile xXx

Yes. I love your look- dark hair with pale skin. Very cute outfit, nice makeup and hair style. Pretty engaging expression as well. I just don't like the bra strap showing.

Lovely:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/111011/10/4e9482ee799f2_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/111113/14/4ec03e3c3fbe0_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110815/12/4e49712a75e00_m.jpg

Dec 20 13 11:36 am Link

Photographer

T Smalls Photography

Posts: 116

San Diego, California, US

I'd love to know.

Dec 20 13 12:11 pm Link

Photographer

Alex Oquendo

Posts: 37

Brandon, Florida, US

Deal me in

Dec 20 13 12:16 pm Link

Model

Gabriel Sage

Posts: 7

Los Angeles, California, US

Lets see!

Dec 20 13 03:09 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Angelina the Stylist wrote:
I would love to know! smile

I would say yes. It's a little different from my usual style but I like the outfits- very form fitting, flattering cuts and the silver jewelry goes well with it all. The goggles also add a cool effect.

Lovely:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/131203/16/529e76b47c9ca_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/131203/16/529e7a1e82c23_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/131203/16/529e7a597bb08_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/131203/16/529e77182119d_m.jpg

Dec 20 13 09:45 pm Link

Photographer

Icesolation

Posts: 4

Tampa, Florida, US

Count me in

Dec 21 13 01:45 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Mind As Water wrote:

ALWAYS!

I would say maybe. The feel of the image is a bit hard- for example, the expressions are both very rough and the female model's expression looks a bit confused/angry, while the male model's expression is more strong. I do like the water droplets on the skin as well as the models' embrace and the contrast of skin colors. You've captured the details well.

I like:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/080909/00/48c5fc7a68e19_m.jpg

Dec 21 13 10:06 pm Link

Photographer

Tiger Tanaka

Posts: 3

Sydney, New South Wales, Australia

yes please!

Dec 22 13 12:10 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Kyle Glickman wrote:
Hey check me out!

Yes. Nice black and white tones, and very nice, buff physique. Expression should be more engaged with the camera though.

Dec 23 13 02:46 pm Link

Photographer

D. Brian Nelson

Posts: 5477

Rapid City, South Dakota, US

Plonk.

Dec 23 13 04:04 pm Link

Wardrobe Stylist

Angelina F Scantlebury

Posts: 44

Brooklyn, New York, US

winking_wonder wrote:

I would say yes. It's a little different from my usual style but I like the outfits- very form fitting, flattering cuts and the silver jewelry goes well with it all. The goggles also add a cool effect.

Lovely:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/131203/16/529e76b47c9ca_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/131203/16/529e7a1e82c23_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/131203/16/529e7a597bb08_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/131203/16/529e77182119d_m.jpg

Thanks!!! smile

Dec 23 13 05:30 pm Link

Photographer

Forty-Six and 2

Posts: 124

Melbourne, Victoria, Australia

Thanks for looking smile

Dec 23 13 06:21 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Alli Synn wrote:
Been curious for a while since I need to update my port.

Maybe. This is not really my style but I do like your outfit - looks great on you but the background is snapshotty and quite busy. And I would like to see your face/expression more.

Better:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130914/17/5234f8ae6c7ac_m.jpg

Dec 24 13 05:18 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

T Smalls Photography wrote:
I'd love to know.

Probably not. The image is just not really my style- it's too dark for me especially the background and tough to make out the model who does seem lovely. I like the dress on her and her pose-- Would have been nice to have more lighting on her in order to see her more clearly. Expression seems decent.

Cute:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/131110/21/52806f039ec90_m.jpg

Dec 27 13 06:47 pm Link

Photographer

Eric Peek

Posts: 1

Shelbyville, Kentucky, US

Is this post for real?

Dec 29 13 02:19 pm Link

Photographer

Brandow Photography

Posts: 1

Albuquerque, New Mexico, US

I would like to see this.

Dec 29 13 02:30 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Eric Peek wrote:
Is this post for real?

Um, yes and has been for 5,000+ posts..

Dec 29 13 11:09 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Alex Oquendo wrote:
Deal me in

No. This almost looks like a snap shot. There is too much white wall, the posing is awkward, model's expression is blank. I do like the model's outfit though (especially the bracelet)-- The colors go well together. And model's hair style looks good.

Maybe:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/131223/09/52b870b315380_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/131220/09/52b478dd81e85_m.jpg

Dec 29 13 11:18 pm Link

Model

AshleeMarie

Posts: 32

Austin, Texas, US

Would love to know smile

Dec 30 13 03:12 pm Link

Photographer

Trisha May Photography

Posts: 304

Colchester, Connecticut, US

moi?

Dec 30 13 03:25 pm Link

Photographer

SEI Photos

Posts: 312

Kalispell, Montana, US

I'll play if you're still up for it.

Dec 30 13 03:29 pm Link

Photographer

Vulpes Photography

Posts: 73

Seattle, Washington, US

Do me.. :-)

Dec 30 13 04:40 pm Link

Photographer

JQuest

Posts: 1453

Syracuse, New York, US

I'll play... smile

Dec 30 13 05:11 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Gabriel Sage wrote:
Lets see!

Yes. Even though the theme of the photo I don't love, I do like the color scheme and your style - Nice outfit and you have handsome features. Expression is a little blank though.

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130104/19/50e79885bb6ea_m.jpg

Jan 01 14 07:32 am Link

Model

Not interested

Posts: 75

Allison, Iowa, US

would love to know

Jan 01 14 11:00 am Link

Photographer

Depth Persuasion

Posts: 39

Los Angeles, California, US

Your honest advice is always welcome.

Thanks,

-DP

Jan 01 14 11:40 am Link

Photographer

ADOImaging

Posts: 139

La Porte, Indiana, US

Well if your still doing this. Love your opinion.

Jan 01 14 11:46 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Icesolation wrote:
Count me in

Maybe. It's not really my style and part of the model's skin looks way over-retouched but the model looks great- nice outfit and posing. I would just lose the hat and maybe the glasses. Expression is decent.

Maybe:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/131008/09/52543594ae30a_m.jpg

Jan 01 14 07:24 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Tiger Tanaka wrote:
yes please!

Yes! Good lighting and great capture of the model. She is gorgeous... Love the hair color and the look of your hair/the way it's shaped around her face. Also seems like the model has beautiful eyes and other facial features. Great posing as well.

Nice:
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/26150968 18+

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/22577120 18+

Jan 01 14 09:26 pm Link

Photographer

usb photography

Posts: 274

Memphis, Tennessee, US

refreashed my image

Jan 01 14 09:29 pm Link

Photographer

Manoj Ramanchira

Posts: 16

Duncan, South Carolina, US

Tada !! :-)

Jan 01 14 11:06 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

D. Brian Nelson wrote:
Plonk.

No. The black and white tones are a bit too dark for me and the texture is a bit too gritty for my tastes. Also I don't think the angle and pose of the model is that great- her head especially looks disproportionately larger than the rest of her body. And the model's expression looks quite blank. And not sure what's going on in the background...

Nicely Done:
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/14954712 18+

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/28098768 18+

Jan 02 14 02:20 pm Link

Photographer

nicholasdavid

Posts: 3

Singapore, Singapore, Singapore

Building up my portfolio, I'm still new here wink

Jan 02 14 04:32 pm Link