Forums > Critique > Based on your Avatar... Would I work with you?

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Nostalgia Studios wrote:
I'd like to know!

It's a bit tough to make out the image but I like the colors and the background is cool. However, the styling is not something I personally would like to do so I'm going to say maybe. I think the pose could be stronger- the current pose makes the model look quite short and the expression seems a bit tense.

Nice:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30510866 18+

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/19329226 18+

Feb 17 14 05:07 pm Link

Photographer

Fred Scholpp photo

Posts: 74

Norge, Virginia, US

Sure! I'd like to know!

Feb 17 14 05:19 pm Link

Model

Prosper Taruvinga

Posts: 1

Melbourne, Victoria, Australia

Me?

Feb 17 14 05:25 pm Link

Model

Lexx LeBlaze

Posts: 1

Portland, Oregon, US

Are you still responding to people? I am curious.

Feb 17 14 05:30 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Krissy Topaz wrote:
Alright give it to me!!

Yes! I really like the color scheme in this image and the different patterns/textures between the background and your dress is very cool. Very pretty sparkly background and the dress looks good on you. I also like your curly hair and makeup. Pose could be more dynamic though and expression is decent- but looks like the smile doesn't meet your eyes.

Feb 17 14 06:52 pm Link

Model

Brent Williams

Posts: 10

Chicago, Illinois, US

I'd love to know.  I love your port to BTW.

Feb 17 14 07:00 pm Link

Photographer

Shmoo Media

Posts: 3

Asheville, North Carolina, US

I'm curious to see if anyone would work with me

Feb 17 14 07:27 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

GNapp Studios wrote:
Certainly.

Probably not. I don't love the styling and the model's pose is not the best. I do like the white background though. Model's eyes are pretty- expression quite blank though.

Much better:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140122/01/52df8dcce199d_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130907/07/522b338cadba0_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/080803/06/489584bc4bba3_m.jpg

Feb 17 14 07:45 pm Link

Photographer

Faulty Focus

Posts: 696

Kamloops, British Columbia, Canada

???? Let me have it !

Feb 17 14 07:47 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Josh Patterson Photogra wrote:
Hello everyone

Maybe. This is a decent head shot- I just don't love the way it is cropped but nice capture of the model who has lovely wavy red hair, eyes and shadow. The expression is too blank though.

Like:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/131110/09/527fbf1ed5337_m.jpg

Feb 17 14 08:21 pm Link

Model

Arian R

Posts: 12

Toronto, Ontario, Canada

ooh pick me smile

Feb 18 14 12:37 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Mel Heflin wrote:
I'm game.

Yes. I love the hair in the wind look and you've got a great outfit on, nice posing, pretty hair color/features and makeup. Expression is also decent.

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/090916/16/4ab1790e1059a_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121124/11/50b1197f9c837_m.jpg

Feb 19 14 09:21 am Link

Model

Leone P

Posts: 515

Batley, England, United Kingdom

Do you like mine? x

Feb 19 14 09:44 am Link

Model

Vi Verunya

Posts: 16

Brooklyn, New York, US

I would like to know smile

Feb 19 14 01:04 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Eric Slodysko wrote:
I'd like to know.

Yes you have a sort of brooding look about you with nice features- I especially like your blue eyes. Nice tattoos and pretty good posing- you look comfortable. Expression could be more emotive though

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121002/23/506bd5cf63159_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121017/14/507f202f3eb80_m.jpg

Feb 19 14 01:20 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

DJR Pictures wrote:
Guess I'll give it a whirl...

Yes. I like the lighting and the color scheme. Model is very pretty as well- I really like the color of her hair and her blue blue eyes. The makeup is nice too. I also like the white outfit she has on, but placement of her arm is awkward and her expression is really blank.

Feb 19 14 10:22 pm Link

Photographer

Boris M Struk

Posts: 1182

Melbourne, Victoria, Australia

Go for it...

Feb 19 14 10:26 pm Link

Photographer

Renato Alberto

Posts: 1052

San Francisco, California, US

OK. I'm in please smile

Feb 19 14 10:44 pm Link

Model

Nestor Martinez

Posts: 47

Garfield, New Jersey, US

me please smile

Feb 19 14 11:36 pm Link

Model

Lisa Sirinunthikul

Posts: 9

Woodland Hills, California, US

I am still a newbie so please let me know your opinion!

Feb 20 14 12:37 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

CireStudios wrote:
I'm in.

I would say probably. I like the smooth feeling of the image, but the model's skin looks way too retouched and too brown- Also the coloring is off on arms and legs. I love the model's hair and blue eyes. The makeup looks nice, but expression looks not comfortable/upset.

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110128/04/4d42afc501737_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/111230/09/4efdf5d047e4a_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/101203/14/4cf96b6043fa2_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/100418/09/4bcb30012b158_m.jpg

Feb 20 14 11:58 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Denis Rule wrote:
I'm game, are you?

I would say yes. I like the lighting and the color scheme. I just am not a fan of the crop- The full image in your port looks better. Model has really nice red hair and blue eyes- Makeup is done well. Expression is a little blank though.

Lovely:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130623/20/51c7b86e1182d_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110912/13/4e6e6bfb55ad5_m.jpg

Feb 20 14 01:05 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

PixelMixer wrote:
I like the concept... When I'm looking for models, I always begin with the Avatar.  If it does not grab me for whatever I'm seeking, I move on or come back later if all other options don't feed my need.


Maybe. I like the color scheme- Not sure what the brown diagonal strip is for though. I do like the texture/smoothness of the model's face but the expression is very blank- Should be more engaged.

Feb 21 14 09:45 am Link

Photographer

RD Photos

Posts: 440

Garden Grove, California, US

would love to know

Thanks

Feb 21 14 10:01 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Misty Autery wrote:
I wanna play!!! big_smile

Yes, you have a nice look. I really like the dress on you- pretty colors and flattering though the jewelry doesn't really go with it. Pose is good but your expression is very blank- should be more engaged. Background is cool.

Lovely:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130720/11/51ead95a122e7_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110918/09/4e761893ef1ac_m.jpg

Feb 21 14 01:30 pm Link

Photographer

Photos by J P

Posts: 6

Asheville, North Carolina, US

OK, I'm in... got for it.

Feb 21 14 02:37 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Niel Galen wrote:
Sure.  Curious. smile

Yes. Very pretty color scheme. Awesome makeup - especially really like the glitter on the model's eyes, as well as the glittery necklace. Also love the swirly silver prop and the lovely blue background. Expression is decent- quite intense.

Wow:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130417/20/516f6da5b13e0_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/131204/07/529f4c89bf04e_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140113/08/52d417922efef_m.jpg

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/35259945 18+

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/33893651 18+

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/33309207 18+

Feb 21 14 09:08 pm Link

Photographer

Niel Galen

Posts: 10

New Brunswick, New Jersey, US

Thanks Ms Wonder!   Let's work together sometime! smile

Niel

Feb 21 14 09:32 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Niel Galen wrote:
Thanks Ms Wonder!   Let's work together sometime! smile

Niel

Sounds great! When are you coming to NYC? smile

Feb 22 14 06:30 am Link

Photographer

Mike Meadows

Posts: 55

Tempe, Arizona, US

No disrespect, I'm not sure I would really care.

Feb 22 14 06:49 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Mike Meadows wrote:
No disrespect, I'm not sure I would really care.

That's fine. Why are you posting here then?

Feb 22 14 10:03 pm Link

Photographer

RD Photos

Posts: 440

Garden Grove, California, US

would love to know

Feb 22 14 11:31 pm Link

Photographer

250465

Posts: 134

Amsterdam, Noord-Holland, Netherlands

new one!

Feb 23 14 02:23 pm Link

Model

CalvinMcGraw

Posts: 1

Atlanta, Georgia, US

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140220/11/530659e9a2080_m.jpg

Feb 23 14 02:43 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Official_Cat wrote:
now?

Maybe. I really like the lighting and color scheme, as well as your overall look- Lovely hair style and the way it falls over your face, pretty features. The bra/sweater looks good on you but I dislike the pose. It makes you look stout and your legs larger than they are. Also your expression is a bit too intense- would've liked to see a softer expression from you in this particular shot.

Love:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110317/09/4d8234e9e3d5d_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130118/14/50f9cd9289453_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/111014/02/4e980226db3ec_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140216/05/5300bda0e3f37_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140216/05/5300c0b7b8de7_m.jpg

Feb 23 14 06:08 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Fred Scholpp photo wrote:
Sure! I'd like to know!

Possibly. I like the color scheme and soft lighting but the image of the model's face is a tad blurry and the background is not that interesting. I like the model's hair style/color and expression though.

Feb 23 14 09:36 pm Link

Photographer

Kristopher Grubbs

Posts: 11

Washington, District of Columbia, US

Do I stand a chance?

Feb 24 14 06:20 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Prosper Taruvinga wrote:
Me?

No. This image sort of looks like a snap shot and the pose is a bit boring, expression quite blank. I do like the shirt you have on though.

Feb 24 14 11:36 am Link

Photographer

Enmerkar Zedek

Posts: 192

Manila, National Capital Region, Philippines

How about me?

Feb 24 14 01:55 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Ruby Wood wrote:
Are you still responding to people? I am curious.

No. This is clearly a snap shot and not a very good one. The outfit is raggedy though I do like the blue feather earring. Also I can't see your face at all so I have no idea what you look like!

Feb 24 14 08:59 pm Link