Forums > Critique > Based on your Avatar... Would I work with you?

Model

mzchicana619

Posts: 19

Temecula, California, US

Ok.lets hear it

Jun 23 14 12:16 am Link

Photographer

International2014

Posts: 97

Ashburn, Virginia, US

I'm in!!

Jun 23 14 12:27 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

SoftLights wrote:
How about me?

Yes. I like the clean, crisp style and the clarity of the image. Nice colors and background. The lingerie looks great on the model -- Lovely vibrant red color and the rose is a nice touch. Pose is basic and only other thing is that the model looks kind of bored- expression should be more expressive especially for this type of shot.

I like:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110215/05/4d5a7a694414e_m.jpg

Jun 23 14 02:26 pm Link

Model

Joshua Williams

Posts: 40

Birmingham, England, United Kingdom

Sure

Jun 23 14 02:39 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

unity MAYA wrote:
I'm down to play!

No. This image looks like a snap shot- The quality is poor, it's grainy and a bit blurry. It is also not the most flattering.. The pose is okay though the arms are awkward. Expression is blank.

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140424/21/5359deac95413_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140424/21/5359dde85354c_m.jpg

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/26964505 18+

Jun 23 14 03:07 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Class Act  Photography wrote:
Would you and why or why not? I am open to suggestions.

Possibly. I think the image would look better without the magazine cover layout. It's an okay image of the model but it looks stretched out and her pose is not the most flattering. Pretty colors/style of dress though and I like her shoes. Her expression is not very good though.

Better:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140618/12/53a1e311debed_m.jpg

Jun 23 14 04:39 pm Link

Model

Nitasha

Posts: 679

Forest Park, Illinois, US

interested...

Jun 23 14 09:05 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Freeze69 wrote:
hit me

Yes I like the black and white tones and both the models look good. I also really like the styling- beautiful dress and the interesting cool background. Expressions look real/happy (especially on the female).

Jun 24 14 12:39 pm Link

Model

mariaparkis

Posts: 18

Jakarta, Jakarta, Indonesia

love to know

Jun 25 14 06:56 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Zelle  wrote:
Your opinion please ....

Yes. I think you have a nice look- pretty long hair, nice figure and the lingerie looks good on you. However, the pink necklace cheapens your look and your expression is very blank. Decent posing though.

Maybe:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140410/01/53465762390fb_m.jpg

Jun 25 14 09:28 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

n a t a l i e  wrote:
Would you? (:

Yes. Beautiful beauty image of you- really accentuates your face shape, cheekbones, long neck and I love the pale pink makeup. Pretty hair/curls as well.

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140407/21/53437a3431376_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140212/11/52fbc5f6d7054_m.jpg

Jun 25 14 09:56 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

amandalepore wrote:
What do you think? smile

Yes. I like your look- pretty blue eyes and nice hair. Your outfit is lovely and I also enjoy looking at the background- just the right amount of blurriness. The pose is just okay though and would've liked to see more engagement with the camera.

Jun 26 14 07:30 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Erik Manwaring - Philly wrote:
I'm curious.

Yes. Beautiful capture of the model's shape- I like the styling as well. The leotard, high heels, jewelry, head piece looks great! The pose is fantastic and expression highly emotive. I don't love the face paint though.

Lovely:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140222/20/5309800c31b3a_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/131011/22/5258d95c0372d_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/131218/13/52b211b2b338b_m.jpg

Jun 26 14 07:59 pm Link

Model

cnicole

Posts: 60

Laurel, Maryland, US

Curious.

Jun 27 14 08:11 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Tori Alice wrote:
What do you think?

Yes I like your look and it looks like you have a great figure. Nice posing and decent expression

Lovely:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140626/18/53accbbbd7c6f_m.jpg

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/36054978 18+

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/36218797 18+

Jun 28 14 08:05 am Link

Model

carl davino 75

Posts: 5

Shelton, Connecticut, US

So would u work with me ?

Jun 28 14 09:11 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

roger alan wrote:

I would say yes.. It's quite a sexy shot and the model's pose is great. Nice dress as well. There's just the right amount of water splashed on and I like the background/location.

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130812/20/5209a99fa96e0_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140602/21/538d5068e68de_m.jpg

Jun 29 14 07:52 pm Link

Photographer

C A Bridges

Posts: 200

Orange City, Florida, US

Let's go for it.

Jun 29 14 08:08 pm Link

Photographer

Revolver X

Posts: 64

Honolulu, Hawaii, US

I'll play...

Jun 29 14 08:16 pm Link

Model

Meghan Wilson

Posts: 3

Saint Louis, Missouri, US

I'd like your opinion!

Jun 29 14 08:38 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Scott DeVine wrote:
Sure.  Love to hear your thoughts.

I would say maybe. I like the lighting but the focus is a little soft and the pose is not something I can do and it just looks too weird for me. Also I do not like the expression - looks mean!

I like better:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140621/12/53a5db915b141_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140531/12/538a27820b747_m.jpg

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/36210432 18+

Jun 29 14 08:59 pm Link

Model

MissKatieMarie

Posts: 135

Sarasota, Florida, US

I just changed mine so sure!

Jun 29 14 10:01 pm Link

Model

Alexandra Spencer

Posts: 64

Sydney, New South Wales, Australia

Go for it

Jun 30 14 06:21 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Tasimaging Photography wrote:
I am in☺

Yes. I like the clarity of the image, the vibrant colors and the way you've framed the shot. Also, you've captured the model's great figure well and the bikini looks cute on her. Love the curly hair, makeup and sensual expression.

Jun 30 14 12:56 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Azlyn wrote:
I'd like to play. smile

Yes. Very nice look! You've got a great figure and great posing skills. I like the lighting/colors of the image and your outfit. Lovely face and makeup too. Decent expression.

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140511/12/536fd2c0c4528_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140608/06/53945eecf31a7_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140620/07/53a44ac37d98c_m.jpg

Jun 30 14 01:06 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Penumbra Photography wrote:
How bout it?

I would say yes. I really like the lighting- rays of the sun coming into the image and it's a nice capture of the model. Expression is too blank though.

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130929/09/52485009a94ed_m.jpg

Jun 30 14 01:18 pm Link

Photographer

roger alan

Posts: 1192

Anderson, Indiana, US

winking_wonder wrote:

I would say yes.. It's quite a sexy shot and the model's pose is great. Nice dress as well. There's just the right amount of water splashed on and I like the background/location.

Thank You

Jun 30 14 01:30 pm Link

Artist/Painter

Glitterartsi

Posts: 29

Liverpool, England, United Kingdom

I was wondering about my avatar please?
Thank you x

Jun 30 14 02:34 pm Link

Model

Jasmine Tooley

Posts: 60

London, England, United Kingdom

Your feedback is highly welcomed - thank you

Jul 01 14 12:44 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

KBStudio wrote:
Give it a go.

I would say maybe. The pose is not the best/most flattering for the model but I do like the makeup, styling especially jewelry and background is cool. Expression is pretty good.

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130603/12/51acee8724bad_m.jpg

Jul 02 14 06:57 am Link

Model

Nikki Aleece

Posts: 10

Durham, North Carolina, US

I'm new to MM. Your feedback is welcomed - thank you

Jul 02 14 09:18 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Pure Emotions Photo wrote:
My turn :-)

Yes! I really like the smoothness of the image and the color scheme, as well as the lighting. The styling- dress, makeup, hair all looks beautiful and model's expression is quite emotive. Only thing is her skin looks too porcelain...

Love:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140619/07/53a2f6d2f1d92_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140619/07/53a2f6b8947bc_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121026/06/508a947d442bd_m.jpg

Jul 02 14 01:57 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

justinp wrote:
Oh I'm curious now

I would say maybe. I don't love the color of the background but I do like the lighting and the model's hair moving in the wind look. The jacket looks good on her and you've captured her face well. However, the pose is kind of boring- just there and the expression is blank.

Better:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140608/20/5395263219ace_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140608/20/5395257bda1a1_m.jpg

Jul 03 14 11:37 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Nellie Anger Design wrote:
Well? smile

Yes! This image is gorgeously done- Perfectly smooth, great close up and capture of the model's eye and decorative material around the eye. Pretty colors and great makeup.

Lovely:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140621/22/53a6665aafec9_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140522/18/537ea01f555ed_m.jpg

Jul 03 14 11:57 am Link

Model

Jechs

Posts: 3

Beaverton, Oregon, US

I'm definitely curious, I just overhauled after a shoot and want to make sure I've got the best as the avatar.

Thanks!

Jul 03 14 10:18 pm Link

Model

Anita1993

Posts: 316

Venlo, Limburg, Netherlands

Okay smile

Jul 04 14 12:13 am Link

Model

Minnie Alice

Posts: 2

Brisbane, Queensland, Australia

Would love to know!

Jul 04 14 05:09 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

mzchicana619 wrote:
Ok.lets hear it

No. The pose is awkward, your expression is weak and the outfit is just all black...

Replace avatar with one of these:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140612/20/539a7116aa544_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140612/20/539a6f79b71a8_m.jpg

Jul 04 14 09:29 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

International2014 wrote:
I'm in!!

Yes, I like the smooth quality of the image, nice soft lighting and pretty color scheme. The model is also lovely and I love the black dress - It looks really good up top but the bottom is not the best capture because of the pose. Nice expression.

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140619/21/53a3bbf8b54fc_m.jpg

Jul 04 14 11:20 am Link

Photographer

International2014

Posts: 97

Ashburn, Virginia, US

winking_wonder wrote:
Yes, I like the smooth quality of the image, nice soft lighting and pretty color scheme. The model is also lovely and I love the black dress - It looks really good up top but the bottom is not the best capture because of the pose. Nice expression.

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140619/21/53a3bbf8b54fc_m.jpg

Thanks for the critique! The original shot was landscape, so I crop portrait for Avatar.

Good eye! I didnt notice as much until you mentioned it. Even with the original crop, I wasn't 100% happy with. Here's orig:


https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140702/01/53b3bfc8db0f9.jpg

Jul 04 14 12:27 pm Link