Forums > Critique > Based on your Avatar... Would I work with you?

Photographer

Steven Due Photography

Posts: 29

Durham, North Carolina, US

How do I measure up?

Oct 07 12 07:04 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5743

New York, New York, US

Haynes Karuzas wrote:
Take a look.

Actually yes, even though it's tough to make out the details of the image in the regular view. But I really like the vibrant colors, lighting-- that sunspot in the background and on the gravel is just the type I like -- and the llama has a great pose- one of movement which can be hard to capture. Plus the location is awesome. I like her outfit as well- the makeup and expression could be improved upon though.

Well done:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110113/13/4d2f67e890ea8_m.jpg

Oct 07 12 08:14 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5743

New York, New York, US

Jade Honey wrote:
Would you?

Not based on this picture. I don't like the styling and I think our looks would clash. I'm not a fan of the dark makeup and the dark environment. And the pose is awkward. That being said, the dress is nice and looks good on you- especially the top half. And I like the color of your hair.

Oct 07 12 09:11 pm Link

Model

Layla Strickland

Posts: 5

San Antonio, Texas, US

DO tell smile

Oct 07 12 09:24 pm Link

Model

Isabella55

Posts: 152

West Hollywood, California, US

Ok!

Oct 07 12 09:28 pm Link

Model

Neaktarose

Posts: 3

Central City, Colorado, US

I am learning and growing in this industry and I would love your opinion!  Thankyou smile

Oct 07 12 09:46 pm Link

Model

steph amberlyn stewart

Posts: 34

Brantford, Ontario, Canada

id like to know:0

Oct 07 12 10:53 pm Link

Photographer

Irving Images

Posts: 24

Palm Beach, Florida, US

Fuck it, I'm curious!

Oct 07 12 11:06 pm Link

Photographer

Michael Knight

Posts: 53

Philadelphia, Pennsylvania, US

I'm game.

Oct 08 12 05:35 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5743

New York, New York, US

Bengali wrote:
???

No. The image is a bit dark, I don't like the crop and the expression is not very engaged.

Oct 08 12 07:11 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5743

New York, New York, US

Oscar Partida wrote:
not into guys  torsos

I would say probably. I like the color scheme- especially the blue of the model's dress (and it looks great on her!) and the lighting is lovely. Also nice pink flowers in the model's hair. I just don't really like the model's pose- she looks awkward and the expression is not good.

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121003/21/506d13de0153b_m.jpg

I like the picture on the left side:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120716/14/500484b537b55_m.jpg

Oct 08 12 07:29 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5743

New York, New York, US

Kimmi Fox wrote:
interesting

Yes. You have a really unique and beautiful look. I love your ice blue eyes with your milky skin and the orange hair looks good on you. I also like the way you've styled your hair and how the bangs look. And you have an interesting pose going on- as well as quite a few tattoos (they're lovely!) Nice makeup. Just think your expression could be more expressive.

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120927/06/50645b7257c01_m.jpg

Oct 08 12 07:55 pm Link

Model

NickiXoXoLee

Posts: 2

SOUTHINGTON, Connecticut, US

Ill play

Oct 08 12 08:06 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5743

New York, New York, US

Misa Ka wrote:
Lets hear it.

Probably. Though I think your face is a bit too made up -- too much blush but the eye makeup and lips look good. The dress is cute and the background is nice and neutral. Pose could be more in interesting though and your expression is okay- but could be more engaged.

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120901/16/504295009c73e_m.jpg

Oct 09 12 11:41 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5743

New York, New York, US

Karl Baxter wrote:
Shoot smile

Maybe. The black and white tones are lovely, as is the model's makeup, hair and general styling. I love how the model's face looks- it's flawless. But I'm not a huge fan of the pose.

Cool:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121005/09/506f10a69c233_m.jpg

Oct 09 12 12:26 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5743

New York, New York, US

Jean Pierre Betancur wrote:
Let me know smile

Yes. Though your pose is a little flat/uninteresting (as well as your expression), you have a lovely face- and great hair. You also have a nice muscled upper body and I like the black and white tones of the image.

This:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121001/20/506a5e8569240_m.jpg

Oct 09 12 09:28 pm Link

Model

MichAMORE

Posts: 36

Detroit, Michigan, US

i'll play!

Oct 09 12 09:35 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5743

New York, New York, US

MichAMORE wrote:
Go! smile

Yes. Though this image kind of looks like a snap shot, I like your look. Nice black curled hair, lovely makeup and features, interesting and cool dress. Pose could be better though to show off the dress more and also expression could be more engaged. Also, I like the color scheme.

Lovely:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121004/11/506dd1bee93f9_m.jpg

This is the better newspaper dress image:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121003/12/506c9104598c2_m.jpg

Oct 09 12 10:24 pm Link

Model

A M I T

Posts: 69

Los Angeles, California, US

Me? smile

Oct 09 12 10:27 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5743

New York, New York, US

Lanika Thomas wrote:
I would love your feedback.

Yes. Nice black and white image and a sexy outfit- shows off your figure well. You also have lovely features I think your pose is ok but the left arm sticking out like that is quite awkward and your expression is blank- Should be more engaged.

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120918/03/50584702d8d3b_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120929/07/50670860438e7_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120826/19/503ae1dcda715_m.jpg

Oct 10 12 01:51 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5743

New York, New York, US

Lauren Arcadia wrote:
I'll play!

Yes. Although setting looks unprofessional- as if it's in a living room, your pose and styling is great. The dress looks really good on you and shows of your figure well. Those high heels are hot as well. Decent makeup but your expression could be more engaged though.

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120815/02/502b6a291b847_m.jpg

Oct 10 12 09:49 pm Link

Model

ChaiNoir

Posts: 345

Adelaide, South Australia, Australia

i'll like to know big_smile

Oct 10 12 09:59 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5743

New York, New York, US

Steven Due Photography wrote:
How do I measure up?

Probably not. I don't love the crop of this- usually like to see the model's face.

Oct 10 12 10:16 pm Link

Model

SherelleS

Posts: 7

Birmingham, England, United Kingdom

Do I fit the bill? smile

Oct 10 12 10:21 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5743

New York, New York, US

Layla Strickland wrote:
DO tell smile

Probably not. The image looks like a snapshot and the pose is a bit awkward, and the expression is not that good- Needs more engagement. I do like the shirt you have on though and it seems like you have a decent figure.

Maybe this as your avatar:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120507/21/4fa89d2f4a50e_m.jpg

Oct 11 12 08:48 am Link

Photographer

Steven Due Photography

Posts: 29

Durham, North Carolina, US

Any comment on a better avatar?

Oct 11 12 06:02 pm Link

Photographer

Jaguar Photography

Posts: 519

Antioch, California, US

I'll play...

Oct 11 12 06:12 pm Link

Photographer

Tyler A Photography

Posts: 15

Pottstown, Pennsylvania, US

sure why not

Oct 11 12 06:15 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5743

New York, New York, US

Steven Due Photography wrote:
Any comment on a better avatar?

I like the one you've chosen now. Or possibly:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/071112/00/4737e9e88ede0_m.jpg

Oct 11 12 09:24 pm Link

Model

Amadea T

Posts: 3855

Columbus, Ohio, US

My turn?

Oct 11 12 09:30 pm Link

Model

Hillary K Frazier

Posts: 31

Savannah, Georgia, US

ok! big_smile

Oct 11 12 09:35 pm Link

Model

Brandy Alexandrea

Posts: 8

Barrie, Ontario, Canada

let me know wink

Oct 11 12 09:41 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5743

New York, New York, US

Isabella55 wrote:
Ok!

Maybe. This image looks a little snap shotty but I like the way your hair is curled and the makeup. Though it's nice that you have long neck, it seems like the way your head is tilted is not the most flattering. Overall, nice colors and choice of black outfit. However the expression can be much improved - more engaging.

Oct 12 12 08:26 am Link

Model

Donna DeFrance

Posts: 24

Hope, Alaska, US

I'd love some feedback! :-)

Oct 12 12 08:30 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5743

New York, New York, US

Neaktarose wrote:
I am learning and growing in this industry and I would love your opinion!  Thankyou smile

No. I don't really like the pose, expression (looks like you're just staring with a blank expression). Though the outfit is interesting and you do have lovely blue eyes.

Oct 12 12 09:35 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5743

New York, New York, US

steph amberlyn stewart wrote:
id like to know:0

I would say maybe. While I like the lighting, your hair and lovely features.. I don't like the pose and that you're all scrunched up- It makes you look short and I can't see how well your body photographs (since it's so close up). It looks like you have a cute dress on but since can only see a little bit, can't tell for sure. Also can't tell how it looks on you. I also don't like the crop -top and bottom. But you do seem to have a nice look. Your makeup and expression are decent.

Oct 12 12 09:54 am Link

Photographer

Jeff Lohne Photography

Posts: 1

Babylon, New York, US

Why not lets see what you have to say!  Always good to get info from models to see what we as photographers can do better..  thanks

Oct 12 12 10:01 am Link

Photographer

TampaFoto

Posts: 668

Tampa, Florida, US

Do tell ?

Oct 12 12 10:05 am Link

Photographer

isfotografia

Posts: 44

Mexico City, Distrito Federal, Mexico

ok

Oct 12 12 10:08 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5743

New York, New York, US

Irving Images wrote:
Fuck it, I'm curious!

I would say maybe. I do like the color scheme and the lighting. The eyeshadow looks good on the model - and I like her hair so you've done a good job capturing that. I also like the scarf on the model. Her expression is a little blank though and I do not like the circles under eyes- something to watch for especially when doing a closeup face shot.

I like:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120829/17/503eaf0db553a_m.jpg

Oct 13 12 10:40 pm Link