Forums > Critique > Based on your Avatar... Would I work with you?

Photographer

Theik Smith Photography

Posts: 10

Brooklyn, New York, US

Hi Winking Wonder - I'd love some feedback as well!

Oct 13 12 11:48 pm Link

Makeup Artist

NY Reflections

Posts: 3

Greensboro, North Carolina, US

I'm open for feedback, what do you think about my Avatar selection?

Oct 14 12 09:16 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5716

New York, New York, US

Michael Knight wrote:
I'm game.

Yes. This image is fierce- love the expression and intensity of the model and looks quite good in black and white. The styling is also pretty cool and the outfit is unique but awesome. Though not sure about the ball/electricity effect that's added in.

Wow:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120708/13/4ff9ee01eead7_m.jpg

Oct 14 12 09:33 pm Link

Model

Lila McGreggor

Posts: 19

Nashville, Tennessee, US

Lets just see...

Oct 14 12 09:37 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5716

New York, New York, US

NickiXoXoLee wrote:
Ill play

Maybe. Though this seems like a snap shot- you're quite photogenic. You have a really sexy body, great smooth milky skin, and love the curls in your hair. The outfit is also cool, as is the tattoo on your back! Expression could be more engaged though, especially for that type of shot

Oct 14 12 10:08 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5716

New York, New York, US

A M I T wrote:
Me? smile

Yes. I like the smooth quality of the image, your outfit- love the jean jacket, you have nice features and your hair is slicked back quite nicely. The background works well and is blurred perfectly. Your expression could be more engaging though.

Also like:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/100711/10/4c39fd07d912a_m.jpg

Oct 15 12 06:24 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5716

New York, New York, US

ChaiNoir wrote:
i'll like to know big_smile

No. I can't make out the details of the image well in the small profile view- Looks like a big head of hair on top of something. While it is unique, I can't make out how you actually look but it does seem like you have quite a well muscled figure and I think we would clash.

Oct 15 12 07:19 pm Link

Model

Winnie L

Posts: 5868

Singapore, Singapore, Singapore

Sure, what a long thread. smile

Oct 15 12 07:24 pm Link

Photographer

Ross Bagley

Posts: 11

Philadelphia, Pennsylvania, US

I would...the Avatar is the front cover of a CD, Book, LP, etc.  I may like the way it looks but open it up and find I don't like anything.  At least I opened it.  It's all about our curious nature.....JS

Oct 15 12 07:24 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5716

New York, New York, US

Sherelle_Nicole wrote:
Do I fit the bill? smile

No. This image is too much of a snap shot - The background is unprofessional and the entire image is a little blurry. The lingerie looks sexy on you though- at least the image shows off your figure. The hat doesn't really go with the outfit though. And while I like the long lashes and color of your lips, the expression is not great. Your hair is cool though.

Better:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121010/08/5075958482278_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121010/08/507595a60d6c0_m.jpg

Oct 15 12 07:49 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5716

New York, New York, US

Ross Bagley wrote:
I would...the Avatar is the front cover of a CD, Book, LP, etc.  I may like the way it looks but open it up and find I don't like anything.  At least I opened it.  It's all about our curious nature.....JS

There is only one person who should be answering these and that is ME!

Oct 15 12 07:52 pm Link

Photographer

SamSmith Photography

Posts: 5

Fort Worth, Texas, US

Ok

Oct 15 12 07:53 pm Link

Model

D A N I

Posts: 4592

Little Rock, Arkansas, US

Putting my face in here...

Oct 15 12 07:55 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5716

New York, New York, US

Jaguar Photography wrote:
I'll play...

Yes. I really like the bright fun color scheme- pink is one of my favorite colors and the outfit looks great on the model. I really like the tights and lace part as well as the heels and so on. Very sexy look and she certainly pulls it off well. The pose is great as well and nice makeup and hair style. Only thing is expression could be better.

Love:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120205/18/4f2f37e9a1e31_m.jpg

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/20749185 18+

Oct 15 12 09:23 pm Link

Photographer

Timeless Shutter

Posts: 68

Denver, Colorado, US

Would you or would you not?

Oct 15 12 10:42 pm Link

Model

app

Posts: 6

West Palm Beach, Florida, US

still playing? what do you think? smilesmile

Oct 15 12 11:20 pm Link

Photographer

Odins Eye

Posts: 1925

West Wendover, Nevada, US

I can guess but I'm curious tongue

Oct 15 12 11:26 pm Link

Model

Samantha Elise

Posts: 443

New York, New York, US

go

Oct 16 12 12:51 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5716

New York, New York, US

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No. The image is way too dark for me- background and shirt all black is not the greatest idea (though colors on the scarf is nice), and can't make out the model that easily.

Oct 16 12 09:32 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5716

New York, New York, US

Eurocat wrote:
My turn?

Yes. You have a lovely figure and I like the warm lighting and color scheme. Also the cat you're holding is so adorable- goes well with the image, and lovely background. Your hair and eye color is also quite nice. Expression could be improved though- should be more engaged.

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121013/11/5079b668597d6_m.jpg

Oct 16 12 10:51 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5716

New York, New York, US

Hillary K Frazier wrote:
ok! big_smile

No. You have sort of a darker look especially with the makeup with the starkness of your white skin and the overall darkness of the photo so I think our styles would clash. It's also a bit of a grainy photo and your expression is quite intense- too much so. Though the red dress does look good on you and it seems you have a decent figure.

Maybe this as your avatar:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121008/10/507313b150fc2_m.jpg

Oct 16 12 01:30 pm Link

Model

Lea Eden

Posts: 32

Glastonbury, England, United Kingdom

Would you ?

Oct 16 12 02:08 pm Link

Photographer

noir

Posts: 378

Crewe, England, United Kingdom

Curious. Especially since my avatar model appeared in a previous poster's avatar which got a thumbs down ;

Oct 16 12 02:40 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5716

New York, New York, US

Brandy Alexandrea wrote:
let me know wink

No. This image is a snap shot and quite blurry. Also not a great angle as the camera is too close and makes your head/face larger than the rest of your body. Seems like you have a decent body and nice blond hair/blue eyes, as well as overall features but this image doesn't showcase that. And expression is not good at all

Somewhat better:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121009/08/507446137bbb4_m.jpg

Oct 16 12 06:30 pm Link

Model

JennyFromTheBlock1

Posts: 25

Kansas City, Missouri, US

I'd like to know smile But just on my avatar because I am working on my port smile

Oct 16 12 06:54 pm Link

Photographer

sydney alex photography

Posts: 3

Sacramento, California, US

yes, this is interested. Im interested on feedback

Oct 16 12 06:59 pm Link

Model

Asia Perez

Posts: 51

Las Vegas, Nevada, US

Feel free to take at look smile

Oct 16 12 07:33 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5716

New York, New York, US

Donna DeFrance wrote:
I'd love some feedback! :-)

No. Not sure I'm a fan of the vampire look- but you have lovely light colored hair and facial features. Would like to see your face and body more though- Looks like you have a nice outfit on. Also dislike the angle of the shot- your head is larger than the rest of you and you have no neck. Your expression is quite good for the look you're going for at least.

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/100708/22/4c36b06050003_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120518/03/4fb629a0a14e1_m.jpg

Oct 16 12 08:58 pm Link

Photographer

RawMediaLabs

Posts: 11

Lancaster, Pennsylvania, US

first post on the forums, count me in.

Oct 16 12 09:05 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5716

New York, New York, US

Jeff Lohne Photography wrote:
Why not lets see what you have to say!  Always good to get info from models to see what we as photographers can do better..  thanks

Yes. Interesting black and white image- great capture of light and shadows. You've captured the model's features- cheekbones and neck especially well. Posing is decent. The expression is also quite emotive. I just don't like the crop at the top, where it cuts off the fingers.

Like:
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29061877

Oct 16 12 09:18 pm Link

Model

Lakin S

Posts: 308

Ashland, Kentucky, US

If you have the time

Oct 17 12 09:38 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5716

New York, New York, US

TampaFoto wrote:
Do tell ?

Yes. Love this color scheme (and lighting) especially the very cool purple/blue background. And the model's dress looks great on her - Nice posing as well, though model's expression could be more engaged.

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110224/07/4d667635296d1_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110201/09/4d483de772e7b_m.jpg

Oct 17 12 11:15 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5716

New York, New York, US

isfotografia wrote:
ok

Maybe- I like the color scheme and it's quite a sexy image. Nice outfit and decent posing by the model. Hair and makeup also looks good- Expression is okay. Not sure I like the crop at the bottom though and would like to see a more interesting background though.

I like this version:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/080829/23/48b8be30964a7_m.jpg

Oct 17 12 01:10 pm Link

Photographer

Photos by Tina

Posts: 7

Calgary, Alberta, Canada

I am interested in your thoughts about my choice in avatars.

Oct 17 12 01:13 pm Link

Model

Elise Noel

Posts: 28

Midvale, Utah, US

If your still going...

Oct 17 12 02:18 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5716

New York, New York, US

Theik Smith wrote:
Hi Winking Wonder - I'd love some feedback as well!

No. The image is a bit too dark for me and I dislike the grainy texture of it. The pose is also a little awkward- I can't make out too well what's on the model's left side- I think it's an arm. Also, would like to see more of the model's face. And the model's expression isn't that great.

Somewhat better:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121010/23/507662c06a168_m.jpg

Oct 18 12 11:09 am Link

Model

Semele

Posts: 161

Brussels, Brussels, Belgium

would love to know!

Oct 18 12 11:23 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5716

New York, New York, US

NY Reflections wrote:
I'm open for feedback, what do you think about my Avatar selection?

I would say maybe. I like colorful but it's a bit much on this model -especially the blush is too red, and the lips a bit too pink. The eye makeup is pretty nice though- I like that blue (with greenish) color and the purple as well.

Pretty (would be nice if the model is smiling):
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121010/14/5075e210541b3_m.jpg

Oct 18 12 11:25 am Link

Model

Kayla Shani

Posts: 5

Upper Marlboro, Maryland, US

Ready, Set, Go!

Oct 18 12 11:31 am Link

Model

Katie ORear

Posts: 104

Farmington Hills, Michigan, US

sure lets try

Oct 18 12 11:31 am Link