Forums > Critique > Based on your Avatar... Would I work with you?

Photographer

JGarza Photography

Posts: 17

Houston, Texas, US

Would ya! Could ya! Wont you be my neighbor...

Oct 22 12 06:44 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Elise Noel wrote:
If your still going...

I'm not really sure.. I dislike that I can't see your face but props for The tough looking and dance like pose. But the lighting is a bit too drastic, I don't like the hand that's cropped out and black and white may not have been the best choice.

I like:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121017/08/507ed3a5beaac_m.jpg

Oct 22 12 07:12 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Semele wrote:
would love to know!

Yes you have a beautiful look and a great intense expression. I think the way your hair frames your face and curls a little is lovely And you have nice eyes. Also cool sepia cooring in this image.

Lovely:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120325/04/4f6f083e9016b_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120210/11/4f356d8ede46e_m.jpg

Oct 22 12 07:39 am Link

Photographer

Garry Spight

Posts: 49

Potters Bar, England, United Kingdom

Well would you?

Oct 22 12 07:43 am Link

Model

Elise Noel

Posts: 28

Midvale, Utah, US

winking_wonder wrote:

I'm not really sure.. I dislike that I can't see your face but props for The tough looking and dance like pose. But the lighting is a bit too drastic, I don't like the hand that's cropped out and black and white may not have been the best choice.

I like:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121017/08/507ed3a5beaac_m.jpg

Thank you!

Oct 22 12 02:17 pm Link

Photographer

That Redhaired Girl

Posts: 1280

Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania, US

Im curious

Oct 22 12 02:21 pm Link

Model

Dina Modelina

Posts: 23

Boston, Massachusetts, US

?

Oct 22 12 02:22 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Vicenza wrote:
Ready, Set, Go!

No. I dislike the expression- should be more engaging and the coloring if your skintone is not even. The makeup especially the pink lips don't go with your coloring but it does seem like you have pretty green eyes. The posing is ok but arms are a little awkward. The outfit is cute though and shows Off your petite figure.

Better:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121004/19/506e48f67064b_m.jpg

Oct 22 12 05:18 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Katie ORear wrote:
sure lets try

Yes you have a high fashion look. I love the sophisticated makeup with your dark mysterious eyes and the curly tousled hair is sexy. Your placement of hands is good And I love the necklace on you. Expression looks a bit mad... Would be good to look more engaged.

Oct 22 12 06:12 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Aerynia wrote:
I'd be interested in your thoughts on this, and especially on an alternate avatar. Thanks! smile

Yes you have a lovely look. That's quite a graceful pose though your arms/hands are a little awkward. Rest of the body looks good and the outfit shows off your figure well. I also love your hair and the way it falls on your face as well as the curliness. Also the black and white looks good.

Also like:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120618/03/4fdf0199f1170_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121014/03/507a9616a4cdd_m.jpg

Oct 22 12 06:30 pm Link

Photographer

John Serratelli

Posts: 451

Beachwood, New Jersey, US

Sounds fun. Let's do it

Oct 22 12 06:35 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Erin Bartek wrote:
just changed it, what do you think?

Yes you have a lovely look. I like the warm coloring, light color of your eyes and the way you hair is styled over one shoulder. The makeup is also nice especially your lips and the bare shoulders add a subtle amount of sex appeal. Though expression could be improved.

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120930/20/50690906eecaf_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121018/20/5080c2fa5f364_m.jpg

Oct 22 12 09:11 pm Link

Photographer

Adam Mohammed

Posts: 39

Sydney, New South Wales, Australia

I would love to hear your thoughts, thanks

Oct 22 12 10:19 pm Link

Makeup Artist

R Roberts

Posts: 78

Los Angeles, California, US

winking_wonder wrote:

Ohmygosh yes! It looks a little bit photoshopped but I love this makeup.. The color-eyeshadow is lovely, as well as the lip color are perfectly picked. And I absolutely love long eyelashes like that. Your work is exquisite.

Awww yay! Thank you so much for the very wonderful words big_smile I'm responding to this a bit later than I would have liked, but I got lost in the forums lol, so I vaguely have an idea of what my avi was when I posted lol...it's changed a lot since then haha.

Oct 22 12 10:26 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Mystical Beauty wrote:
How about tattoos?

No I'm not into cuts and I think our styles would clash. Also your hand looks quite weird But I do like the colored flower tattoo on your stomach. Seems like you have a decent body but I really would like to see your face.

Better:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121016/13/507dc04eec7ee_m.jpg

Oct 23 12 07:30 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

PhoenixFX wrote:

Awww yay! Thank you so much for the very wonderful words big_smile I'm responding to this a bit later than I would have liked, but I got lost in the forums lol, so I vaguely have an idea of what my avi was when I posted lol...it's changed a lot since then haha.

You're very welcome. Nice new work too. Your avi at the time was:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121005/03/506eb041c68f1_m.jpg

Oct 23 12 07:37 am Link

Photographer

FHS Photography

Posts: 16

Hamilton, Ontario, Canada

Ok I am in.

Oct 23 12 07:44 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Brightonn wrote:
Would like your opinion.

Yes. While I don't love the expression I love almost everything else about it. The makeup.. The smoky purple eyes and nude lips look good on you and go well together. The lighting is great.. Illuminates your skin and your pose is lovely- emotional. Also the accessories look good too.

Lovely:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/111210/14/4ee3d7680320b_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120920/09/505b3df86d4fe_m.jpg

Oct 23 12 08:41 am Link

Model

Suumaki

Posts: 16

Portland, Oregon, US

Would I be worked with or not>?

Oct 23 12 08:55 am Link

Makeup Artist

R Roberts

Posts: 78

Los Angeles, California, US

winking_wonder wrote:

You're very welcome. Nice new work too. Your avi at the time was:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121005/03/506eb041c68f1_m.jpg

ah! ok, lol. yeah i love that pic too...one of my favorites in my port big_smile

Oct 23 12 09:09 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Polina PP wrote:
Take a look!

No. Well maybe but The image is too dark so that I can't make out how you look that well which is a shame because I love your outfit and it seems like you have nice features. The pose is all right but I dont like Placement of arms.

Lovely:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120827/19/503c28802ce80_m.jpg

Oct 24 12 08:32 am Link

Model

Jes K

Posts: 15

Ann Arbor, Michigan, US

i would like to know!

Oct 24 12 08:59 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

PictureItYakima wrote:
Me please?
I just had to change mine due to being, gasp, banned by a mod  wink

Ah I know how you feel. I had an image taken down by a mod as well.

Id work with you. I like the models outfit especially the lace black top, makeup and pose. The outdoor location is pretty cool too but really dislike the expression.

Better image:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120913/19/50529417d6be6_m.jpg

Also like:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120903/20/504570a6605f3_m.jpg

Oct 24 12 09:13 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

KeithDewey3 wrote:
Please take a look at mine and let me know.  I am trying to shoot more strong images that work as avatars for myself and the model.

Yes I think it's sexy without being overly so and sophisticated. I think the bare skin with red lips look great and love the jewelry especially the earring. Nice clear capture.

Love:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/101129/19/4cf4732fd0c28_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110714/16/4e1f793e2e2ee_m.jpg

Oct 24 12 09:22 am Link

Photographer

David Kilper

Posts: 505

Saint Louis, Missouri, US

You've said yes before, but now I have a new avatar... so now I'm curious about it all over again.

Oct 24 12 10:48 am Link

Model

Sir Prepster

Posts: 80

New York, New York, US

Let Me Know wink

Oct 24 12 10:49 am Link

Photographer

KeithDewey3

Posts: 1425

Plattsburg, Missouri, US

winking_wonder wrote:

Yes I think it's sexy without being overly so and sophisticated. I think the bare skin with red lips look great and love the jewelry especially the earring. Nice clear capture.

Love:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/101129/19/4cf4732fd0c28_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110714/16/4e1f793e2e2ee_m.jpg

Thank you! 
BTW, I would work with you as well!  Let me know if you ever get to the KC area.

Oct 24 12 02:22 pm Link

Photographer

Jason Lee Photography

Posts: 110

Kissimmee, Florida, US

winking_wonder wrote:
Simply what the subject states. If no, I might let you know which photo I like better (if any).

Open to everyone: Photographers, models, MUA, retouchers etc


Note: I *will* get to you; it just might take a few days.

how about me

Oct 24 12 02:27 pm Link

Model

Ashley Riot

Posts: 120

Chicago, Illinois, US

I'd like to know!

Oct 24 12 03:21 pm Link

Model

Professor Awesome

Posts: 12

PARLIN, New Jersey, US

Ill give this a try.

Oct 24 12 03:43 pm Link

Photographer

foreverloved

Posts: 170

Ottawa, Ontario, Canada

wow you're a roll! let me know!?

Oct 24 12 03:49 pm Link

Model

Christina Josephine

Posts: 121

Warsaw, Indiana, US

*Timidly points to self* smile

Oct 24 12 04:02 pm Link

Model

KP24

Posts: 2

Aurora, Colorado, US

Would love to hear your opinion

Oct 24 12 04:12 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

KeithDewey3 wrote:

Thank you! 
BTW, I would work with you as well!  Let me know if you ever get to the KC area.

Thank you- good to hear you would work with me as well! Also let me know if you're ever in NYC!

Oct 24 12 11:27 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Depthpersuasion wrote:
Can we try again?

No. The image is a bit blurry and the coloring of face/skin seems a bit off. Also I think the pose is a little awkward and not too sure about the expression.

My favorites are still the same:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110915/19/4e72b9c3bf0f7_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/090119/20/49754d2915595_m.jpg

Oct 24 12 11:34 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

JLC Images wrote:
I am curious

No I'm not really a big fan of the slightly blurry look of the image and I don't really like the coloring that much. The llama's hair and facial features look pretty nice though and the expression is okay.

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/090703/23/4a4ef50a0501f_m.jpg

Oct 25 12 01:26 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Brit Long wrote:
Would love your input as well!

Yes. You have a lovely look - nice blond hair (cut and style is pretty) and brown eyes. Makeup looks good as well and I like the pose but not the crop on the top and the right side that cuts off your arms. Also like your blue shirt but wide eyed expression- looks like you're startled so expression needs improvement.

Oct 25 12 01:48 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Meg Waldron wrote:
Curious!

I would say maybe. The image is fun and I like the background and color scheme. Your hair looks good but don't like the red spots all over your face and the tears from your eyes- Not really show how that goes with the overall theme. Expression is okay.

Oct 25 12 03:34 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Joris van der Ploeg wrote:
That depends, do you like avedon lighting?

Yes. I love the black and white tones in the image, the location is lovely as is the model even though I can't see her face. I like the dress, hairstyle and pose of the model- sweet and serene.

Also nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120211/11/4f36c2deba454_m.jpg

Oct 25 12 03:40 am Link

Model

Jo Rayne

Posts: 1

Manchester, England, United Kingdom

Yeah why not .

Oct 25 12 01:48 pm Link