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Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

GT3 wrote:
Hit me...

Yes. This is a fun image and I love the pops of vibrant color. The red dress and heels look great on the model and the swirls of blue in the background are a nice touch. Also think the model's pose is pretty good and she has a nice smiley expression.

Like:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121211/11/50c782b2ea10b_m.jpg

Jan 13 13 09:06 pm Link

Photographer

ultimate dream

Posts: 848

London, England, United Kingdom

Base on your av, not at this point in time

Jan 13 13 09:25 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Dontez Akins wrote:
go for it

Probably not.. While I like the bottom half of the model's face- nice smoothness, lovely neck, pretty earrings... The rest I don't. The hair is in the way- and covers too much of the model's face and would like to see the image in color.

Like Better:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121202/13/50bbce16344cd_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120601/15/4fc942da558b9_m.jpg

Jan 13 13 09:55 pm Link

Model

chellforte

Posts: 47

Glen Ellyn, Illinois, US

I'll have a go at this! big_smile

Jan 13 13 09:59 pm Link

Model

Alisia Michelle P

Posts: 3

Fort Walton Beach, Florida, US

why not smile

Jan 13 13 10:07 pm Link

Photographer

GT3

Posts: 4

Johannesburg, Gauteng, South Africa

Thanks!

Jan 14 13 08:55 am Link

Photographer

dd photography

Posts: 924

San Diego, California, US

Would you?

Jan 14 13 09:02 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Agustin_0 wrote:
How about me?

Probably not. The makeup is well done and model's skin/features look decent. But not sure I like the angle and that it's so dark.

Like Better:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130105/13/50e8a1e189eab_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130111/11/50f06b22aee05_m.jpg

Jan 14 13 11:40 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Audrian Aubri wrote:
Hello everyone! Just a fresh face, i would love to hear your comments on my pictures would you work with me?

No. It's clearly a snap shot and not a good one at that... Blurry, and weird gritty texture. Your expression isn't good either. Though your hair looks decent and the shirt is okay- Could be quite sexy if the bad quality of the image itself wasn't so distracting.

Jan 14 13 11:50 am Link

Photographer

Danel Photography

Posts: 124

New York, New York, US

Would you work with me???

Jan 14 13 01:54 pm Link

Photographer

Valenten Photography

Posts: 265

Balikpapan, Kalimantan Timur, Indonesia

me smile ?

Jan 14 13 03:25 pm Link

Photographer

Kyle T Edwards

Posts: 431

St Catharines, Ontario, Canada

Would you work with me in a house?
Would you work with me with a mouse?


(See, this is why I should not be allowed to post while on any medication that the pharmacist says "might make you dopey.")

Jan 14 13 03:43 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Lizzy Takahashi wrote:
Hey-o

No. I think you have a unique look, high cheekbones, nice facial features and lovely hair but you're not using it to your full advantage. You have a blank expression, pose is non existent - you're just there and arms are awkward. And the outfit is a bit boring at all black. I do like the blue background though.

Nicely done:
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31224145 18+

Jan 14 13 06:45 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

My name is Frank wrote:

Jan 14 13 07:24 pm Link

Model

Axana

Posts: 126

Mississauga, Ontario, Canada

Hit meh.

Jan 14 13 07:32 pm Link

Model

Shelly Sunshine

Posts: 67

Port Richey, Florida, US

smile

Jan 14 13 08:09 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Dan Brady wrote:
Yes please big_smile

Yes! I like the smooth finish of the image and the makeup is lovely. I also love the model's sleek silky brown hair with pretty blue eyes, as well as the tie in her hair- would've liked it to be a different color than olive green though. Other thing I dislike is the expression- kind of blank.

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121202/16/50bbf9330781a_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121209/09/50c4cab563edb_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121203/05/50bca93c14656_m.jpg

Jan 14 13 08:35 pm Link

Photographer

Dan Brady

Posts: 610

Perth, Western Australia, Australia

winking_wonder wrote:

Yes! I like the smooth finish of the image and the makeup is lovely. I also love the model's sleek silky brown hair with pretty blue eyes, as well as the tie in her hair- would've liked it to be a different color than olive green though. Other thing I dislike is the expression- kind of blank.

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121202/16/50bbf9330781a_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121209/09/50c4cab563edb_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121203/05/50bca93c14656_m.jpg

Thank you lady smile

Jan 14 13 11:14 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Brosius Photographics wrote:
well, how about it?

Yes. I like the soft, pale color scheme and the model looks lovely- I really like her hair and eyes/other facial features. The outfit also looks good on her and shows off a nice figure. Pose (especially the right arm is awkward) and expression (which is quite blank) could be improved though.

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121001/14/506a11106d4b8_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121007/07/507190b69e91d_m.jpg

Jan 15 13 08:23 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Autumn Rose Brightly wrote:
Me? smile

Yes. I like the softness of this image and the black/white tones are nice. The lingerie looks good on you and your pose is decent. Also, the expression is good- pensive.

Like:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121107/09/509a9dbb0e5c3_m.jpg

Jan 15 13 08:52 pm Link

Photographer

JVE Photography

Posts: 4

Waipahu, Hawaii, US

Me? smile

Jan 15 13 08:57 pm Link

Photographer

The Aperture Studio

Posts: 95

Toronto, Ontario, Canada

I'm game.

Jan 15 13 08:57 pm Link

Photographer

GRPhotos

Posts: 19

Calgary, Alberta, Canada

Ill try my luck!

Jan 15 13 09:16 pm Link

Photographer

richardsphotographybc

Posts: 415

Langley, British Columbia, Canada

Me plz.

Jan 15 13 09:46 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

RenaBeana wrote:
Me?

No. I don't really like the angle of the image- it's not all that flattering and your head looks big, looks like you have no neck and the crop is too tight. Pose is awkward. Also, your expression is definitely lacking. What I Do like is the purple- nice makeup and bra.

Jan 16 13 09:04 am Link

Photographer

Caveman Creations

Posts: 580

Fort Worth, Texas, US

Just changed mine. What do you think?

Jan 16 13 09:30 am Link

Model

NikkiVendetta

Posts: 24

Winnipeg, Manitoba, Canada

This could be interesting.

Jan 16 13 10:33 am Link

Model

Nadine-J

Posts: 133

Saarbrücken, Saarland, Germany

Let's have a try :-)

Jan 16 13 01:01 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Catalin Palosanu wrote:
me?

Yes even though the skin looks too retouched/porcelain doll-like, I still like that smooth quality and loove the model's lacy white top. And you've really captured the beauty of the model's face/features. The hair could look better, but makeup is top notch. Though placement of left arm is a little awkward, and expression pretty blank - though that might be on purpose?

Wow:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130110/07/50eee37eccf5b_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130108/03/50ec06df8ea85_m.jpg

Jan 16 13 05:11 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

MidnightSun Designs wrote:
me next

Perhaps. It's a decent image of the model and I like the sparkle effect on the necklace. The outfit is also quite sexy and the model wears it nicely. I think the pose and expression can be improved upon though and I dislike the spider eyelashes.

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/090829/07/4a993533dfc9b_m.jpg

Jan 16 13 06:07 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Photography by Daniel wrote:
Tell Me

No. First of all, it's an image of a male model which would make me wonder if you do indeed work with female models. I also don't really like the color scheme and sort of gritty quality. Though it does seem like the model has a nice physique, which you have captured. But not sure why he's wearing sunglasses while inside, and reading a magazine.

Jan 16 13 07:33 pm Link

Model

Nadia Selen

Posts: 37

Denpasar, Bali, Indonesia

Entertaining thread is, entertaining.

I lolled => "But not sure why he's wearing sunglasses while inside, and reading a magazine."

Jan 16 13 08:45 pm Link

Model

Christophercote

Posts: 2

Quebec, Quebec, Canada

What about me?smile

Jan 16 13 08:51 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Adamas Fluctus wrote:
cool

No. The image is poor quality- grainy and blurred a bit and the colors are weird. And I don't really like the pose or how in your face the model is. The model does look pretty though.

Jan 17 13 08:36 am Link

Photographer

outtamymind photo

Posts: 50

Calgary, Alberta, Canada

sure why not give it a try

Jan 17 13 08:40 am Link

Photographer

Milton Tan

Posts: 1

Singapore, Singapore, Singapore

Yep

Jan 17 13 08:40 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

George Ruge wrote:
Wow!! 91 pages!!!:-)

Let me know, please!

Yes. I normally don't like darker images but this one has a certain appeal- it's sexy without overdoing it. I love the fullness and style of the model's hair and the panties are lovely- look great on the model! The pose is well done- subtle and seductive, as well.

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120305/12/4f55227362bdd_m.jpg

Jan 17 13 08:52 am Link

Photographer

Az Skies Photography

Posts: 32

RIO RICO, Arizona, US

And now for something completely different...  I will try my luck.

Jan 17 13 08:58 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Translucent Skin wrote:
Photography, film, digital media, traditional media etc... I have to assume what we're all chasing is immortality. To breath life into something that will outlive us all. As with all life, it takes collaboration to make something from nothing. I hope to find some collaborators here. My name is RenDi. Nice to meet you all.

No. I would've liked to see something more representative of your painting/art. Even though what you're drawing in the image is art, I can't make out the details and overall doesn't work for me.

Jan 17 13 09:32 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

JHigdon wrote:
You might -maybe- if you like Diane Arbus sort of stuff :-)

No. The black and white is a bit too dark for my tastes especially the bottom part of the image and the model is also wearing dark clothes. I also think the POV and pose is not very good and the expression is lacking. I like the birdcage the model is holding though and the top part of the background is cool.

Better:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/100914/07/4c8f8dcbcfef9_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121204/05/50bdf89502b3e_m.jpg

Jan 17 13 11:05 am Link