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Makeup Artist

Molotov Pigtails

Posts: 7

Melbourne, Victoria, Australia

Ooh! ooh! pick me!!

Jan 31 13 04:45 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Riot Grrl Photography wrote:
How about moi?

Maybe though I wouldn't put all 3 photos up. I think the last one is the best of the bunch, and the first one is just okay. In the first image, I like how you've filled the frame and the pose is interesting, decent. In the 2nd image, the angle isn't great and I dislike the POV. The last one shows off the model best - Nice simple pose and love how the outfit looks on her in this image. Though in all 3, expressions are kind of blank- should have more engagement and emotion.

Jan 31 13 07:09 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Lisa Agee wrote:
Interested in your comments.

Probably not. I do like the color of your eyeshadow but lashes don't look great. The top does look good on you though. But the smile doesn't reach your eyes. Also would be better if your finger wasn't in the shot.

Jan 31 13 08:03 pm Link

Photographer

Joris van der Ploeg

Posts: 134

Amsterdam, Noord-Holland, Netherlands

Maybe?

Feb 01 13 05:00 am Link

Photographer

James Burger

Posts: 19

Brooklyn, New York, US

Sure, I'm in...

Feb 01 13 09:21 pm Link

Photographer

Kerri Jean Photography

Posts: 588

Indianapolis, Indiana, US

Would love an opinion

Feb 02 13 09:04 am Link

Photographer

Mike Williams Photo

Posts: 125

Chattanooga, Tennessee, US

I'm in.

Feb 02 13 09:10 am Link

Photographer

Francisco Castro

Posts: 1735

Cincinnati, Ohio, US

I'm in.... what do you think?

Feb 02 13 07:11 pm Link

Model

Erika Muse

Posts: 286

Raleigh, North Carolina, US

Yes?
No?
Lol maybe soooooooooo? smile

Feb 02 13 08:04 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Drew Smith Photography wrote:
Well, would ya!

What do you mean I've asked before? Okay.. I was just fed up of reading forum posts about escorts and light meters. smile

I don't mind if you ask again, as long as you have a different avatar! And the answer is yes. Beautiful black and white tones - I love the smooth polished look of this image. The branches, leaves, pine cone on the model is well placed and looks great. And love the angle of the model's face. Nice capture of model's face- lovely features though expression seems a little startled.

Like:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/111211/12/4ee5143882906_m.jpg

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29245634 18+

Feb 02 13 11:33 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

DG at studio47 wrote:
What do you think?

Probably. Though I think the skin looks a bit white in the face area and not the same color as bare shoulder etc. But I do like the way the model has her hair- lovely reddish color with the blue eyes is very pretty. The makeup looks decent, and the lacy strap on shoulder is a good touch though I would take out the bra strap. I don't really like the hat on her though- looks too much, too large. And the expression is a bit intense.

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/100715/22/4c3fe83dc3c78_m.jpg

This (without the black surrounding the image):
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/100106/19/4b4554aa9a187_m.jpg

Feb 02 13 11:43 pm Link

Makeup Artist

Flawless Faces Studio

Posts: 9

Troy, Michigan, US

Maybe?

I'm not sure

Feb 03 13 11:06 pm Link

Makeup Artist

Flawless Faces Studio

Posts: 9

Troy, Michigan, US

Now, I'm very curious, please do me smile lol

Feb 03 13 11:16 pm Link

Model

AnneMarie Friedman

Posts: 93

Ventura, California, US

I'm in if you're still going! Thanks!

Feb 05 13 04:16 pm Link

Model

YanaModel

Posts: 44

Nogales, Arizona, US

I'm in, please!

Feb 05 13 04:57 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

julia00 wrote:
smile

Yes. I like the black/white tones here and your expression/pose is lovely. I also love your outfit -- It looks great on you! Nice hair as well!

Lovely:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130123/10/51002f872a305_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130123/10/51003024740f3_m.jpg

Feb 05 13 07:48 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Heartbar wrote:
Sure, why not, what do you think?

No. I don't like the theme of the image - hate guns and it's pointed right towards me. I also don't like the color scheme or the model very much.

Feb 05 13 07:54 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Samantha Emme wrote:
With as many pages as there are, I do not remember if I replied to this or not lol.
So if I haven't, me!
If I have, feel free to smack me lol

No worries! Maybe. The photo definitely shows off a bit of your personality which is great. The black and white tones are lovely and I like your hair style. The expression is a little intense- almost ugly-pretty. And the pose a bit awkward.

I like better:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110815/18/4e49cc7652329_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110424/09/4db44eefe7a3a_m.jpg

Feb 05 13 08:03 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Quentin Skyking wrote:
What do you think?

Probably. There is a lot going on in this image- looks like a movie poster. I like that the image is clear and in sharp focus. Quite a nice photo of the model in a good pose that embodies his character. And the color scheme is nice.

I like:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121227/04/50dc3c5d5a9ef_m.jpg

Feb 05 13 08:12 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Madison P Cook wrote:
I'd love to know! smile

I would say yes, more because I like your look than being compelled by your picture. You have lovely reddish hair and nice hazel greenish eyes but the hair is a little unkempt and your expression is very blank- Should be more engaged/have more emotion. Also the shirt is not my favorite though I do like the light blue color of it.

Better:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130129/10/510819392a851_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120831/11/50410232b7782_m.jpg

Feb 05 13 08:12 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Cameron J Wright wrote:
Go for it!

No. While the black and white tones are okay, it's a bit on the darker side and the image of the model has a gritty quality I don't like, and the background is too blurry. Also the model's arm is quite blurry as well and not really sure why.

Maybe:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130130/22/510a0a44e5fb6_m.jpg

Feb 05 13 09:21 pm Link

Model

Lee Loo La

Posts: 164

Paramus, New Jersey, US

Me? :-)

Feb 05 13 09:28 pm Link

Model

Taj R

Posts: 6

Houston, Texas, US

why not... would you?

Feb 05 13 09:32 pm Link

Model

Braden Granard

Posts: 1

San Francisco, California, US

Hello there wink

Feb 05 13 09:33 pm Link

Model

RachelYDooley

Posts: 12

Bothell, Washington, US

Interested! Let me know what you think!

Thanks so much,
Rachel Dooley

Feb 05 13 09:38 pm Link

Photographer

Ramon Bryce

Posts: 122

Los Angeles, California, US

I'll add to the one of the longest forum topics! smile

Feb 05 13 09:41 pm Link

Model

Nixivixx

Posts: 66

Arcola, Indiana, US

Yay or nay? smile

Feb 06 13 12:25 am Link

Photographer

Camabs

Posts: 323

Utrecht, Utrecht, Netherlands

please tell me smile

Feb 06 13 12:32 am Link

Photographer

255 West

Posts: 6468

New York, New York, US

Woof! Pet me.

Feb 06 13 01:50 am Link

Photographer

Edward Shaw Photography

Posts: 317

Birmingham, England, United Kingdom

Me please!
What do you think of my brand-new avi?

Feb 06 13 02:48 am Link

Model

Zowie Williams

Posts: 1

Manchester, England, United Kingdom

Interested.... Yes/no x

Feb 06 13 03:03 am Link

Model

HEATHER 19

Posts: 1156

Boston, Massachusetts, US

Take a look smile

Feb 06 13 03:38 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

AndyD10 wrote:
I'm not sure if I've asked before...

Maybe. You've captured the model's shapely body well but the pose (especially arms) are awkward and the model's expression is blank.

Feb 06 13 08:25 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Ceci L wrote:
Tell me tell me big_smile

Yes. I like the softness of the image though it is a bit blurry. You have a lovely look- Really nice hair style and beautiful facial features. I also like the necklace (so pretty!) and dress on you. However, your expression is a little lacking.

Very sexy:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121209/18/50c54368c29b4_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130114/13/50f47c31e7b70_m.jpg

Feb 06 13 10:26 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

aliceelou012 wrote:
I am intrigued by your opinion! smile

No. This is clearly a snap shot and a little blurry/out of focus. Background is clearly a living room- Not very professional. Nice hair and features though- you have HUGE blue eyes which are pretty but a bit comical because they are so big. Plus it looks like you have no neck. And the expression is very weak. The green shirt looks okay but the necklace is a bit too busy.

I Like:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120920/07/505b2befea35a_m.jpg

Feb 06 13 11:50 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

JOEL McDONALD wrote:
Just the Avatar alone? Sort of a first impression or gut reaction, eh. Ok ....

Maybe. The color scheme is a little saturated but I like the white sweater against the model's fiery red hair. She has a lovely look and decent pose. Expression can be improved though- looks like she's just staring into space, so should be more engaged.

Feb 06 13 12:19 pm Link

Model

Francesca Weichselbaum

Posts: 7

Zwettl-Niederösterreich, Niederösterreich, Austria

what do you think about mine?

Feb 06 13 12:19 pm Link

Model

Ceci L

Posts: 235

Villena, Valencia, Spain

winking_wonder wrote:

Yes. I like the softness of the image though it is a bit blurry. You have a lovely look- Really nice hair style and beautiful facial features. I also like the necklace (so pretty!) and dress on you. However, your expression is a little lacking.

Very sexy:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121209/18/50c54368c29b4_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130114/13/50f47c31e7b70_m.jpg

Thank you, it would be a pleasure smile
I appreciate your words, before I always have this avi:

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/13 … 9673e2.jpg

But wanted to take another kind of offers I changed it to that one, even its not the best or I have less visits to my port. And also hide many of my skin shoots.
Hopefully its working^^

Feb 06 13 12:53 pm Link

Photographer

Pixyst

Posts: 350

Phoenix, Arizona, US

Well?

Feb 06 13 12:55 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Merenda Morris wrote:
My curiosity has been peaked!!

Yes. I like the color scheme of this image and the makeup, while dark is very well executed, from the lashes to the the tear and black shadow. I love the lip color!

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120911/13/504fa35eeb006_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120730/20/501752e96c3ed_m.jpg

Feb 06 13 01:07 pm Link