Forums > Critique > Based on your Avatar... Would I work with you?

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Taj Robb wrote:
why not... would you?

No. Though you have a fairly handsome face, this seems more of a snapshot to me. I'm not feeling the pose- and the hands especially are awkwardly placed and your expression isn't quite there either.

Feb 09 13 09:50 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Braden Granard wrote:
Hello there wink

I would say maybe. I like the black and white tones and you have some nice features- I like your eyes, though would like to see what color they actually are. I also like your hair. And the outfit on you but expression should be more engaging.

Feb 09 13 10:55 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

RachelYDooley wrote:
Interested! Let me know what you think!

Thanks so much,
Rachel Dooley

No. This is really not my style - a bit too weird and alternative for me. Also I dislike the color scheme. Your pose is decent though- shows off your nice legs, though I don't like the crop at the bottom.

Like Better:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121207/16/50c28d00e48b8_m.jpg

Feb 09 13 02:01 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Ramon Bryce wrote:
I'll add to the one of the longest forum topics! smile

Yes! I love the color scheme and lighting. The model looks good- not so sure about the outfit itself though the shirt with rainbow on it is cute. And the shorts definitely show off lovely legs/figure. I dislike the placement of arms in the pose though. Other than that, I like the model's makeup - she has lovely features and beautiful hair- So nice styling. But expression looks a bit sad/blank.

Love your port:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/111115/19/4ec32dccbff33_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110821/00/4e50b4fc95f7c_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110225/01/4d67730b06aa9_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110401/23/4d96c73a142f3_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110704/12/4e12197092af1_m.jpg

Feb 09 13 03:22 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Nixivix wrote:
Yay or nay? smile

Maybe. You have nice facial features and I like the makeup you have on. Plus your hair looks great (I like the style and cut) with your greenish eyes and red lips! And the nice lingerie- but the posing could be improved. Especially the right arm is awkward. Also, expression could be more engaged. I do like your tattoos though - they're very pretty.

Feb 09 13 07:41 pm Link

Photographer

WJ Photography

Posts: 43

Pine Beach, New Jersey, US

Go for it smile

Feb 09 13 08:23 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Camabs wrote:
please tell me smile

No. Though I think the lighting is interesting- it's a bit too dark for me and the model's expression too intense.

I like:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110826/07/4e57ac3fa467b_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110709/03/4e18307463263_m.jpg

Feb 10 13 09:15 pm Link

Model

CL-Panda

Posts: 7

Kelowna, British Columbia, Canada

Being a complete noobie, I'm always down for criticism smile

Feb 10 13 10:10 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

255 West wrote:
Woof! Pet me.

Yes. Even though this isn't an image of a human being, I love dogs and I really like the background- colors, lighting is lovely. Though placement of dog in the center is a bit boring.

Feb 10 13 10:21 pm Link

Photographer

Lone Pine Photography

Posts: 38

Savannah, Georgia, US

I'm interested.

Feb 10 13 10:25 pm Link

Photographer

CallmeMikeyB

Posts: 6

Brampton, Ontario, Canada

I'm interested in your opinion smile

Feb 11 13 06:50 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Edward Shaw Photography wrote:
Me please!
What do you think of my brand-new avi?

Yes. Because I like the color scheme and I like the makeup (nice blue eyeshadow and lovely long lashes but I do not like the lip color) except that you can see the white that is put on her face- it doesn't match the rest of her skin. Hair is beautiful though and so is the tiara, rest of the jewelry and outfit. Expression is not good, however,... she looks angry.

Feb 11 13 11:26 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Zowie Williams wrote:
Interested.... Yes/no x

Maybe. I like the softness of the image and the bra looks good on you. Also the photo captures your lovely figure, hair and other features. Color scheme is okay- Nice that the red in the background etc matches your lips. Expression is kind of blank though.

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110417/13/4dab48aa8abb2_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110417/14/4dab5522ac128_m.jpg

Feb 11 13 12:06 pm Link

Photographer

Court Room Media

Posts: 53

Greensboro, North Carolina, US

i'll try it

Feb 11 13 12:17 pm Link

Photographer

Vance Photo

Posts: 21

Wilmington, North Carolina, US

a little out of my league but i still want to play!!!

Feb 11 13 12:23 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

HEATHER 19 wrote:
Take a look smile

Yes. The dress looks great on you - shows off your great shape but the placement of your left arm behind your back is awkward. The movement of your hair is hot and you do it well but it also covers some of your face -- Would like to have seen more of that.
Also the black and white is a bit on the darker side- I'd be interested in seeing the image in color.

Feb 11 13 12:28 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Francesca Weichselbaum wrote:
what do you think about mine?

Maybe. This seems a bit snapshotty but I kind of like the softness of the image and the background- especially the 3Dish bubbles. Also you look pretty good, though I don't like the blurriness of the feet. Pose of the legs are nice- really shows them off but placement of arm not great. Lovely makeup and pretty eyes/hair though expression should be more engaged especially for that type of intimate setting of the photo.

Cute:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120507/08/4fa7ecc137fc9_m.jpg

Feb 11 13 12:38 pm Link

Photographer

Jim Tincher Photography

Posts: 4

Frankfort, Kentucky, US

Mine's not much, but I never really bought into using the picture of a subject unless it was myself…. Since I'm not much to look at I opted for something rather simple yet related….

Feb 11 13 12:38 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Pixyst wrote:
Well?

I would say yes. I don't usually like images what are too dark- especially black background and black outfit but in this one I can clearly make out the shape of the model which is a testament to your work. Very good lighting on the model and a very sexy image without being too much. And lovely figure/pose of the model.

Lovely:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120315/09/4f621db6c0147_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/100715/10/4c3f434e476cf_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120903/13/504512aca4428_m.jpg

Feb 11 13 12:56 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Emilie Turner wrote:
This is an odd post.

Not sure why it's an odd post. Anyway, it's a maybe. You do have a nice look- I love the  color of your hair and the hair style plus your eyes are pretty. Also, the butterfly wing tattoo is beautiful and well placed. I also like the shirt and gold ring on you. Pose is decent as well but expression is a bit blank- should be more engaged.

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130205/01/5110cf8de7928_m.jpg

Feb 11 13 01:11 pm Link

Photographer

Velvet Paper Photo

Posts: 468

Lexington, Kentucky, US

Wow! 97 pages! Well... Why not?! Would you work with me?

Feb 11 13 01:12 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Thommy Panic wrote:
Since I'm trying something very new to me, I would welcome an honest opinion.
My top row are wet plate tintypes. No digital, with minimal contrast boost in post due to my shitty scanner. My avatar is my favorite plate so far.

Yes. It's a unique style- almost old photograph type but I like it. Nice soft image, and I like the layers of white material around the model's face which looks especially good around the neck.

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/111231/19/4effcdb6ee51f_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/111016/15/4e9b59fa6a309_m.jpg

Feb 11 13 01:32 pm Link

Photographer

Lesia Joukova

Posts: 4

Saint Petersburg, Saint Petersburg, Russia

I'm curious smile

Feb 11 13 01:44 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Jackson frontier photos wrote:
Got a new one up so thought I'd see what you thought.

No. The angle and pose is not flattering to the model and her expression is lacking. Also placement of model smack dab in the middle of the image is kind of boring and the color scheme a little drab.

Better:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130206/22/51134e4d62520_m.jpg

Feb 11 13 08:06 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

DanRobinsonGB wrote:
Well i've been active for about 8days now, just looking for feedback and comments maybe even south east england photographers who pay expenses to add to my portfolio! But for now I would really appreciate some positive feedback on my profile! smile

Probably. Nice black and white tones on your avatar image. And it's a decent image of your profile and the expression is okay- looks pensive, yet a bit worried/intense. But overall you have a good look.

Feb 11 13 08:31 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

samsationalphotos wrote:
I'm game try me

Probably not. I don't really like the crop -- too tight at the top and bottom and seems like the model is trying too hard with the expression needing improvement. And not sure that the lingerie fits her the best- though I do like the lacy camisole, I don't think the black lace bra works with it.

Feb 11 13 09:28 pm Link

Photographer

Michael McGraw

Posts: 23

Beaumont, California, US

All right, I'll take a swing

Feb 11 13 09:40 pm Link

Photographer

RachelReilly

Posts: 1730

Washington, District of Columbia, US

Yeah, why not

Feb 12 13 01:03 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Al Lock Photography wrote:
Let's hear it...

Maybe. Though the 2 main images of the model are very similar to each other-- I think the images should at least have a different pose. Overall I think the image on the left side is better- Posing is pretty good but arms are awkward in both- shows off the model's nice figure. And I like her hairstyle/hair in general, as well as the makeup. Also the bikini looks good on her. Expression could be more engaging though.

Better:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/100811/11/4c62efadc7604_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/100811/11/4c62f1d2859fd_m.jpg

Feb 12 13 05:39 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

JeproxShots wrote:
So...

No. This is not really my style and I don't like the dark lighting or the darker color scheme. Plus can't make out the model too well especially face. I do think the feeling of movement in the photo is good though.

Maybe:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121017/16/507f42967dd49_m.jpg

Feb 12 13 05:52 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Al Reid Photography wrote:
If you're basing off of an avatar, then probably not.

No. I don't think the pose looks good, especially arm facing the camera, legs look short etc and the crop is weird. The model's look is okay - lovely makeup but the expression is blank and the pursed mouth doesn't look good.

Maybe:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121226/14/50db7da7eb435_m.jpg

Feb 12 13 07:09 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Jeff Goodwin wrote:
Interested

Maybe. Though I think it might be stronger if it's just the one model (the one in front) in the frame. The front model is lovely, and in a natural pose. I like the details of model's figure, ballet shoes, lovely long hair and other features.

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130125/04/510275d4a8887_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110414/02/4da6c174bf730_m.jpg

Feb 12 13 08:42 pm Link

Model

Nicki Micki

Posts: 267

Charleston, South Carolina, US

Okay big_smile

Feb 12 13 08:55 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Isis Davenport wrote:
Interested in knowing.

No. I think our styles would clash. Also don't really like the crop and the pose is a little ehh... Though I do like the ring on your finger and the hot pink (favorite color) in your hair.

Feb 12 13 09:01 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Gabrielle Giovani wrote:
Hmmmmmm

Maybe. I like the warm colors and lighting and it seems like you have a lovely look- love the color of your hair and how there's movement in it from the wind. Also the bathing suit looks good on you. Expression is kind of blank though- should be more engaged.

Feb 13 13 09:00 am Link

Photographer

SH PhotographyAndDesign

Posts: 170

Chester, Virginia, US

Sure, I'll chime in too!

Feb 13 13 09:08 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Dontez Akins wrote:
i will give it a go

Yes. I like the lighting on the model and she looks good- definitely a great angle and pose for her. She also has lovely skin, long neck and pretty hair and eyes. The paint is just okay though. The expression pretty good- she definitely connects with the camera.

Also nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120601/15/4fc942da558b9_m.jpg

Feb 13 13 09:23 am Link

Photographer

Jackson frontier photos

Posts: 531

Joplin, Missouri, US

I won't give up until you tell me yes.  New avatar.  :-)

Feb 13 13 09:30 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Faceless Illusions  wrote:
Try me smile

I would say maybe. The only reason it isn't a yes is because the image is a bit blurry and I don't like the gritty texture. But the composition- placement of model in the photo is good and I like her look. She has lovely blue eyes, hair and beautiful facial features. Her expression can be improved upon though- to be more engaged/connected.

Feb 13 13 10:07 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Ashayla Webster wrote:
What do you think of my avatar?

Yes. Pretty color scheme and lighting. Also like the softness of the image you look beautiful- her hair and eyes are lovely. Though I dislike the crop at the bottom - cuts off your hands etc. And the expression makes the model look strong but sort of blank -- would like to see more engagement/connection with the camera.

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120131/20/4f28bb2175848_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110109/21/4d2a966073226_m.jpg

Feb 13 13 10:54 am Link