Forums > Critique > Based on your Avatar... Would I work with you?

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Dwight Smalls wrote:
Me me me?

I would say yes, though this is a totally different style than anything I've done before.. I like the white fabric wrapped around the model and the white filmy veil, as well as the capture of motion in the image. Model's pose is a bit stiff but beautiful lines and I like the makeup from what I can see though would've liked to see the face a bit more.

I like:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130111/12/50f07c79c4e35_m.jpg

Feb 21 13 10:21 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Faceless Illusions  wrote:

Thanks... I'll have to see later if you would or not

Sure, no problem!

Feb 21 13 12:25 pm Link

Photographer

John Lafferty

Posts: 636

Post Falls, Idaho, US

sounds good to me. smile

Feb 21 13 12:35 pm Link

Photographer

BDQMedia LLC

Posts: 547

Atlanta, Georgia, US

Would you work with me based on my profile pic?

Feb 21 13 01:42 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Chris Angelo wrote:
Me?

I would say probably. I really like the balloon idea and like the overall color scheme. Also love the model's outfit - very cute top but the pose is a bit awkward, as is the expression. And why is she holding onto the sunglasses like that?

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130214/15/511d73cec7b32_m.jpg

Feb 22 13 08:03 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

CallmeMikeyB wrote:
Your insight would be awesome!

Here you go:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/po.php?thre … st18032930

Feb 23 13 11:29 am Link

Model

Tiffiney C

Posts: 570

Los Angeles, California, US

I'll play

Tiff
www.TiffineyC.com

Feb 23 13 11:34 am Link

Model

Trey Fleming

Posts: 1470

Las Vegas, Nevada, US

Not sure if I participated or not but i'd like to know.

Feb 23 13 11:39 am Link

Photographer

Steves Photo works

Posts: 418

Courtenay, British Columbia, Canada

New Avi as of last night...what do you think?

Feb 23 13 11:46 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Le Raie wrote:
Ohhh mee!!

I would have to say maybe. The angle isn't the greatest your pose is okay but right arm is awkward and looks like you don't have a neck. Also the expression is not good- pouty and no connection to camera etc. It does look like you have a decent figure though, and I like the background but colors are a bit off.

Cute:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120606/11/4fcfa708e7547_m.jpg

Feb 23 13 12:55 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

-fpc- wrote:
possibly ?

Yes. I like the color scheme and model looks great in the image-- Great hair style and color, and she also has nice facial features. I also like the shininess of the red jacket. Pose is okay- I don't like the placement of right arm and I notice the model is holding a cigarette which doesn't seem to really go with the image.

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121118/16/50a97a90e4820_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120919/18/505a709a61359_m.jpg

Feb 23 13 02:06 pm Link

Photographer

-fpc-

Posts: 893

Boca Raton, Florida, US

yeah, she likes her smoking shots
but I ended up liking it too..


thank you doll

Feb 23 13 02:13 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

sensual light studios wrote:
?

Maybe, though seeing as this is not an image of a model, I wonder how your shots with people would look like. But I do like the clear capture, color scheme and textures going on in the image. The rose is beautiful and the high heels nicely arranged at least.

Well done:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31543666 18+

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31693183 18+

Feb 23 13 08:08 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Philip from Scotland wrote:
What do you think?

Maybe. Overall, it's an decent image but the hand by the model's face looks quite large and my eyes are drawn to her hand first, when I should be drawn to the model herself. And the model is quite pretty- I like the red of her hair and how it's framed around her face. Though it does cover a lot of the face. But I like the bra, necklace on her and the tattoo is nice as well.

Feb 23 13 10:29 pm Link

Photographer

beyond-the-surface

Posts: 96

New York, New York, US

would you work with me?

Feb 23 13 10:42 pm Link

Model

Justen Phelps

Posts: 6

Los Angeles, California, US

Did I miss the show!?

Feb 23 13 11:51 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Sky Donohue wrote:
Me? I just updated it and I'm not sure if I like it or not.

Probably not. I don't really like the color scheme- greenish is not my favorite color. But the effect of the image is cool- kind of looks like a painting. Your expression is really blank though and takes away from the image.

Feb 25 13 09:06 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Michael Keene wrote:
Oh gosh... this is going to be painful, but how about me?

Probably not. Though I do really like the style of the white dress and how it looks on the model - I don't like the frame that the model is holding. I guess it kind of goes with the overall image but not feeling it. Also the model's expression is not good and the posing could be more interesting/flattering.

This if it weren't for the posing of the right arm:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130223/08/5128ed0123aaa_m.jpg

Feb 25 13 10:13 am Link

Model

Leone P

Posts: 515

Batley, England, United Kingdom

Can i play please? xx

Feb 25 13 10:22 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Ultralicious wrote:
I'll play!

Maybe. Not really my style- Don't know about the gold items that the model is holding and the posing of arms is kind of in your face. But model's outfit/figure looks good. Model's eyes are pretty, especially with her dark hair and the makeup looks nice. Expression is not great though.

Feb 25 13 11:13 am Link

Model

Emily Smiles

Posts: 295

Columbia, South Carolina, US

Please let me know. My avatar was taken last night, so feedback is appreciated.

Feb 25 13 11:27 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Ginger Rothestein wrote:
Do Me Please smile

Yes. You look good in the outfit - shows off your figure well. The pose is decent- placement of hands a bit awkward though. You have a beautiful facial features and I especially like your light green eyes- goes well with your pale blond hair. Though I don't think all the colors work together but I like the turquoise top with jeans.. The underwear should probably not be bright purple/pink though. And the expression doesn't show much-- would like to have more connection in there.

Like:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130220/07/5124f07fbf678_m.jpg

Feb 26 13 07:11 am Link

Model

MandiePistol

Posts: 7

Jacksonville, North Carolina, US

Interested in your opinion smile

Feb 26 13 07:19 am Link

Photographer

Nate C Photography

Posts: 43

Toowoomba, Queensland, Australia

would like to hear you thoughts?

Feb 26 13 07:53 am Link

Photographer

Matt Forma

Posts: 373

Denver, Colorado, US

?

Feb 26 13 09:46 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Steve Lim wrote:
fun thread..
how bout me? smile

Maybe. It's a bit tough to see the details of your image and I'm not really sure about the photo overall. I think the outfit is cool and love the model's tattoo on her back. Plus her skin looks great as does the makeup. But the pose could be better and angle/POV of shot is not *that* flattering. And I don't really like the crop, especially at the bottom where the shoe is cut off. Also the deep red background clashes with the blue/green of the dress.

Feb 26 13 11:40 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Will Topham wrote:
let me know about mine please!! smile

Yes even though this looks a bit snapshotty, you have a nice look. I like the muscles in your abdomen and really nice hair, strong jaw and facial features. Expression does show some depth and emotion but the pose looks like you're just standing there.

Feb 26 13 12:46 pm Link

Photographer

Xplicit Impressions

Posts: 22

Bloomington, Illinois, US

I would love to know your thoughts on my work by looking at my avatar.

Feb 26 13 04:52 pm Link

Model

Foxy Tokala

Posts: 257

Atlanta, Georgia, US

Me please! :3

Feb 26 13 06:20 pm Link

Photographer

Smitty s Photography

Posts: 80

Fayetteville, North Carolina, US

Would you???   :-)

Feb 26 13 06:27 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Whatelse wrote:
I?

Yes. You have a high fashion face and it looks great. Lovely black and white tones, great editing and shows off your facial features well. I think the expression is a little surprised though.

Feb 27 13 12:22 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

John Lafferty wrote:
sounds good to me. smile

No. Seems a bit blurry to me and the pose/angle is just okay. Though the bikini does look good on the model. Background is too busy and model's expression is very blank.

Maybe:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/100128/11/4b61df7fdb525_m.jpg

Feb 27 13 01:13 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

shooterfoto wrote:
Would you work with me based on my profile pic?

Yes because I like the colors and the model's outfit- Looks really good on her. Actually wish I had something like that! And the bag is cute but not sure the red and that pattern matches the outfit all that well though. The makeup looks nice but expression- eyes too closed needs improvement. And the background on top part of photo is nice, though on bottom part of image it gets a little cluttered but I do like the overall clarity of the image.

Feb 27 13 08:42 pm Link

Model

Mae Martin

Posts: 10

Chatan, Okinawa, Japan

Yes No Maybe?

Feb 28 13 12:01 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Tiffiney C wrote:
I'll play

Tiff
www.TiffineyC.com

Yes. Nice black and white. And I like lingerie-y outfit you have on. It looks great on you! Plus you have some good poses going for you- I especially like the curves your body makes. Expressions are okay- the one on right side shows emotion but the other one on left side is not as good esp with your mouth open like that. 

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120404/07/4f7c58c15d138_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/111210/12/4ee3c1a2017fc_m.jpg

Feb 28 13 12:22 pm Link

Model

Sameer Nawaz

Posts: 7

Sheffield, England, United Kingdom

winking_wonder wrote:
Simply what the subject states. If no, I might let you know which photo I like better (if any).

Open to everyone: Photographers, models, MUA, retouchers etc


Note: It may take a few days, but I *will* get to you.

Sounds Fun! smile Let me know what you think :p

Mar 01 13 07:09 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Trey Fleming wrote:
Not sure if I participated or not but i'd like to know.

Yes, even though the image is quite dark, lighting on your face and body is good. I can clearly make out your features and I like the outfit you have on as well as the guitar you're holding- adds to the overall image.

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120526/16/4fc1685902c15_m.jpg

Mar 01 13 08:51 pm Link

Photographer

Envied Images

Posts: 18

Milwaukee, Wisconsin, US

OK! I'd like to know.

Mar 01 13 08:57 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

New Image Creations wrote:
New Avi as of last night...what do you think?

Yes. Very clear close up- I like the smoothness of the image and makeup is subtle but lovely especially the lashes. But eyes look a bit unreal. Also expression is lacking and the pose makes the model look like she has no neck.

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120412/09/4f870033db9c1_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120408/12/4f81e2056fe33_m.jpg

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/27939707 18+

Mar 01 13 10:28 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

beyond-the-surface wrote:
would you work with me?

No. The pose is not flattering and there is way too much hair in the model's face- can't make out what she really looks like. I do like the outfit though and I love pink/white colors but overall not a great shot.

Nicely done:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31762055 18+

Mar 02 13 10:09 am Link