Marietta, Georgia, US
Did I do a good job? Is it to much?
Dec 29 11 09:21 pm Link
Wenatchee, Washington, US
I think some contouring would make this picture a lot better!
I would also work a little more on her body (from the neck down).
Hmmm... I'm not loving those eyes; her right eye is too bright even though it's on a shadow.
Hope that helps!
Dec 29 11 09:45 pm Link
Toronto, Ontario, Canada
It's not a flattering image composition/technically speaking...Personally I would ditch it and start over.
The exposure is very hot on the arms etc...fly away hairs, poor posing..
Dec 29 11 09:53 pm Link
Seattle, Washington, US
As someone already pointed out, her right eye just stands out for the bad. Start over with a better exposed shot. Probably should use a longer lens as well.
Th texture of the hair is quite good.
Dec 29 11 10:45 pm Link
New York, New York, US
Jan 01 12 10:45 am Link
Tarragona, Catalonia, Spain
Jan 03 12 06:38 am Link
Paris, Île-de-France, France
The eye in the shadow is just to PS lit. The stray hairs, well you have to do it 100% either keep em or loose them, Not sure if the thing that is coming out of her top on her back should stay, looks like a shoe horn. Overall it's okay, but lacks character. When you have such brilliant colour, you have to push for a balance , a play on soft hard, bright dark , saturated, desat, etc to make it work.
Ex of lots of clr
ex of a side gel'd shadow but with less imapct
Jan 03 12 07:31 am Link