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Photographer

Orcatek Photography

Posts: 1689

Tempe, Arizona, US

Winnie L wrote:
Hope I made it

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/111114/21/4ec1fd3dcce39_m.jpg

Was the jewelry on your hand so heavy you couldn't do something pretty with it.  Let me just flop my arm across my body to show the jewelry.  Everyone loves a boring straight arm and flat hand - WRONG.  There's movement in the photo and an arm that looks glued onto your body.  Ruins it.  Don't do that again.

Jan 31 12 05:07 am Link

Photographer

Orcatek Photography

Posts: 1689

Tempe, Arizona, US

Gasoline Photography wrote:
Hurt me.

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110819/04/4e4e44607f640_m.jpg

I'll hurt you like you did your model.  Bend your neck till it hurts - that's a pretty look.  Then I'll just shove you centered in the frame, that will remove any tension or interest.  And why add a rim/hair light to separate her from the back ground, a big black blob is what you were going for.  You are one frame away from being labeled a GWC with this photo.

Jan 31 12 05:13 am Link

Photographer

T-D-L

Posts: 10303

Los Angeles, California, US

Orcatek Photography wrote:

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120117/01/4f15407c4079c_m.jpg

Another annoying trend.  No idea how to pose the model, so have her stand there like she is in a daze.  Shows anybody can be model.  Can you stand-up, you're a model.  And I will make you famous because I am a photographer.  See my portfolio - you don't even have to show your boobies  *wink wink*.

lol, well that was good for a laugh.  Thanks for the insight wink

Jan 31 12 05:23 am Link

Model

Renae Model

Posts: 3

Perth, Western Australia, Australia

Sure smile

Nov 07 12 02:45 am Link

Model

Autumn Rose Brightly

Posts: 1097

Crowley, Texas, US

Go for it big_smile

Nov 07 12 07:52 am Link

Model

Angelique Model

Posts: 28

London, England, United Kingdom

*deep breath* go for it wink

Nov 07 12 09:15 am Link

Photographer

RAY JOHN PILA

Posts: 138

West Hollywood, California, US

OK-  ME ALSO-PLEASE!!!!

Nov 07 12 10:20 am Link

Model

Amelia Rouge

Posts: 114

Anaheim, California, US

How about me?

Nov 07 12 05:29 pm Link

Model

BreezyCoverGirl

Posts: 51

Pomona, California, US

ready yikes

Nov 07 12 05:39 pm Link

Model

Brittney Denea

Posts: 285

Oceanside, California, US

Oh my, how far you went past ten!  Still going?

Nov 07 12 06:18 pm Link

Model

Jalanis

Posts: 323

NORTH HOLLYWOOD, California, US

Me Next!

Nov 07 12 06:26 pm Link

Model

Brightonn

Posts: 234

New Orleans, Louisiana, US

Lay it on me!  I have some new work that I'm considering posting anyway.

Nov 08 12 01:19 pm Link

Model

Agent_Zero

Posts: 108

New York, New York, US

me me!

Nov 08 12 01:27 pm Link