Retoucher

Ferrero

Posts: 28

Shanghai, Shanghai, China

This is my retouch ring ,how it can be improved upon?
Thank you!
http://farm6.staticflickr.com/5324/6936832100_73d3ebb3fe_b.jpg

Apr 15 12 10:18 pm Link

Digital Artist

Koray

Posts: 6688

Ankara, Ankara, Turkey

The lines look a bit jagged for some reason. maybe its the size or compression but that makes all your efforts useless cause its all I keep noticing wherever I look. I also think that you should bring the reflection underneath back and remove the colors on top.

Apr 16 12 05:58 am Link

Retoucher

Ferrero

Posts: 28

Shanghai, Shanghai, China

Koray wrote:
The lines look a bit jagged for some reason. maybe its the size or compression but that makes all your efforts useless cause its all I keep noticing wherever I look. I also think that you should bring the reflection underneath back and remove the colors on top.

Thank!''The lines look a bit jagged for some reason''
I should illustratour edit it maybe bit better
oh !The top colors of the diamond,I think it should be reserved!

Thank again!

Hope that  more Critique!

Apr 16 12 06:43 am Link

Retoucher

Eva Mizer Photography

Posts: 53

New York, New York, US

I love the mirror finish - what did you do to make it so smooth and clean?
I agree, I think the reflection should be brought back.

Apr 16 12 10:03 am Link

Photographer

Motordrive Photography

Posts: 3090

Lodi, California, US

the jaggies are most likely from compression, with so much contrast,
the look is now almost pure illustration, I think the reflection will help
alleviate that a bit.

Apr 16 12 04:30 pm Link

Retoucher

Ferrero

Posts: 28

Shanghai, Shanghai, China

Eva Mizer Photography wrote:
I love the mirror finish - what did you do to make it so smooth and clean?
I agree, I think the reflection should be brought back.

Thank you!

Apr 16 12 06:05 pm Link

Retoucher

Ferrero

Posts: 28

Shanghai, Shanghai, China

Motordrive Photography wrote:
the jaggies are most likely from compression, with so much contrast,
the look is now almost pure illustration, I think the reflection will help
alleviate that a bit.

Thank you so much!

I noticed this contrast,This is the root of the problem,
I should be to improve,Keep the black and gray and White!
Thanks again!

Apr 16 12 06:13 pm Link