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Photographer

Fotografica Gregor

Posts: 4122

Alexandria, Virginia, US

Hi All -   I am looking to create a different style - would appreciate feedback -  am I going in a good direction?  Appreciate constructive suggestions.

Original "high colour" edit, typical of my existing style

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120527/11/4fc270a6357e8_m.jpg

Re-edit, looking to create something different

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120527/11/4fc270a758ac2_m.jpg

May 27 12 11:30 am Link

Photographer

Motordrive Photography

Posts: 3090

Lodi, California, US

my opinion is no, not a change for the better. the overcooked original
should be warmed up and tamed a bit, (legs need more help). the re-edit
is now more bland, but color is farther from ideal, not closer.

May 27 12 02:02 pm Link

Model

Emilee Adams

Posts: 1

Morgantown, West Virginia, US

I like it.. personally.

Jul 08 12 04:51 am Link

Photographer

HollyStringer

Posts: 12

Billericay, England, United Kingdom

I prefer your first edit, the re-edit is too lacking in colour and I don't think it works for that particular photo because of the colouring of the model. The style of edit may work on other photos though, but In my opinion I don't think it works for that photo smile

Jul 08 12 08:18 am Link