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Lifestyle_Images

Posts: 3998

Albuquerque, New Mexico, US

Andrea Rosu wrote:

I like the simplicity of the image...and the stark colors.  But I feel like there's something missing.  Perhaps energy...I feel like the image is kind of stagnant overall (and not because she's bound and unable to move!).

Thanks,

I was going for a kind of isometric, grounded feel, but I appreciate the feedback.

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ESP NY

Posts: 450

Southampton, New York, US

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Rays Fine Art

Posts: 6305

New York, New York, US

It's really non-sexual, but I consider my avatar to be erotic in nature.  I'd be delighted to have your thoughts.

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varton

Posts: 2369

New York, New York, US

This can be perceived as erotic to some  http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/28966262 +18

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Andrea Rosu

Posts: 1669

San Francisco, California, US

BkkDan wrote:
Here are mine 18  so not showing directly:
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pi … 8#29000821
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pi … 8#29000428
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pi … 8#28972529

I rather enjoy a pretty girl in rope...but I'm not going to lie when I say that these are boring.  The model has the most bored expression (or at best, mundane) in the first two.  Compositionally, they're kinda poor.

The last one is the most interesting because of the angle and proximity to the model.  But I have to admit, that the woman's poor skin is really distracting, especially because it's so pronounced from the angle.

I'm sorry for my harshness....

Jul 08 12 06:35 pm Link

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Andrea Rosu

Posts: 1669

San Francisco, California, US

Professor Oni wrote:

Thanks,

I was going for a kind of isometric, grounded feel, but I appreciate the feedback.

You're welcome.

I see that in the framing and perspective...and I like those aspects.  Perhaps it's her somewhat nonchalant facial expression?

Jul 08 12 06:36 pm Link

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Andrea Rosu

Posts: 1669

San Francisco, California, US

ESP NY wrote:
http://www.eroticoverdrive.com/post/120 … -a-swinger

I rather like it!  It's different, and cheeky!! wink  I like that it's playful, making it endearing.

It's so easy to get caught up in the sumptuousness of sex and sexuality...and forget about the silly playfulness of it all.

Jul 08 12 06:38 pm Link

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Andrea Rosu

Posts: 1669

San Francisco, California, US

Rays Fine Art wrote:
It's really non-sexual, but I consider my avatar to be erotic in nature.  I'd be delighted to have your thoughts.

I would agree with you.  It easily falls into the fine art nude category...but there's something about her body language and peering over her shoulder that struck me.  There's a sensuality in it.

Jul 08 12 06:40 pm Link

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Andrea Rosu

Posts: 1669

San Francisco, California, US

varton wrote:
This can be perceived as erotic to some  http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/28966262 +18

I like the time lapse aspect of it, and I like the subject matter.  I think there's a lot of potential in it. 

But there are two glaring problems for me...
the bed spread is pretty fucking ugly...and it's hard to not notice it.  It's very distracting.

I'm not a fan of the framing.  It feels like it's trying too hard and takes away from the subject of the imagery.  I think it's completely unnecessary, imho.

Jul 08 12 06:42 pm Link

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NYC Erotica

Posts: 65

New York, New York, US

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Rays Fine Art

Posts: 6305

New York, New York, US

Rays Fine Art wrote:
It's really non-sexual, but I consider my avatar to be erotic in nature.  I'd be delighted to have your thoughts.

Andrea Rosu wrote:
I would agree with you.  It easily falls into the fine art nude category...but there's something about her body language and peering over her shoulder that struck me.  There's a sensuality in it.

Thank you.  I also feel that the slightly Japanese feel contributes to the eroticism, "Mystery of the Orient", I suppose.

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Damon Banner

Posts: 85305

Hayward, California, US

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russphoto

Posts: 9

Leeds, England, United Kingdom

Please comment / critique. Thank you

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/13 … d6beed.jpg

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russphoto

Posts: 9

Leeds, England, United Kingdom

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balm in Gilead

Posts: 27

San Diego, California, US

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Tracy Zabriskie

Posts: 41

Los Angeles, California, US

I would say this is my most erotic image:

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/26447828   18+

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HHPhoto

Posts: 940

Atlanta, Georgia, US

OP's last reply was in July of 2008.
I don't think she is still looking for examples of erotic images in this thread.

Feb 12 13 06:57 pm Link

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Rousing Images

Posts: 3

Portland, Oregon, US

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