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Photographer

P O T T S

Posts: 5471

Lake City, Florida, US

DEREX Art wrote:
Welcome in.

You have some great work, but I am kind of confused by your portfolio. Maybe you need more than one? Are you trying to make paintings that look kind of like photographs or are you making photogrpahs that are kind of looking like paintings?

Jul 22 12 06:30 am Link

Photographer

P O T T S

Posts: 5471

Lake City, Florida, US

Kaylie Jo wrote:
maybe my avatar?

Not yet, but there are some great photographers out there. You will find one htat you click with and get one.

Jul 22 12 06:32 am Link

Photographer

P O T T S

Posts: 5471

Lake City, Florida, US

Black Stallion Photo wrote:
I'll jump into the mix...

Not yet.

Jul 22 12 06:32 am Link

Photographer

P O T T S

Posts: 5471

Lake City, Florida, US

Dimitrio wrote:
Tell me if anything wows you.

Not yet, but you are getting close. You have great locations and models. Keep at it.

Jul 22 12 06:33 am Link

Photographer

P O T T S

Posts: 5471

Lake City, Florida, US

Ainsley Alexandra wrote:
I'll have a go!

Gettin gthere. Neil Snape was just up there clsoe to you, I think. Would have loved to seen what he would have done with you. You appear to have a dance background and I am sure he would have something brilliant with you.

Jul 22 12 06:35 am Link

Model

Ainsley Alexandra

Posts: 266

Saint John's, Newfoundland and Labrador, Canada

P O T T S wrote:

Gettin gthere. Neil Snape was just up there clsoe to you, I think. Would have loved to seen what he would have done with you. You appear to have a dance background and I am sure he would have something brilliant with you.

That I should be so lucky!

I believe he was in Ontario, though, which is unfortunately too far from me for that to have even been a possibility.

Jul 22 12 06:19 pm Link

Photographer

Paul Tirado Photography

Posts: 4363

New York, New York, US

Take a look. I don't think I have played.

Jul 22 12 09:00 pm Link

Photographer

P O T T S

Posts: 5471

Lake City, Florida, US

Paul Tirado Photography wrote:
Take a look. I don't think I have played.

Great work Paul

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/081109/01/49168008ca25a_m.jpg

Another portfolio that needs its own list.

Jul 23 12 11:37 am Link

Photographer

Paul Tirado Photography

Posts: 4363

New York, New York, US

P O T T S wrote:

Great work Paul

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/081109/01/49168008ca25a_m.jpg

Another portfolio that needs its own list.

Thank you for the compliment.

Jul 23 12 11:43 am Link

Photographer

David Scott

Posts: 5617

Marion, Iowa, US

Anything?

Jul 23 12 12:32 pm Link

Model

Natalie Swift

Posts: 1582

Naples, Florida, US

maybe?

Jul 23 12 12:41 pm Link

Photographer

Dan Olek

Posts: 156

Rochester, New York, US

Surely!

Jul 23 12 12:48 pm Link

Photographer

Julian W I L D E

Posts: 1831

Portland, Oregon, US

Drop on by.  If you're not Exhausted by now!  big_smile  -JULIAN

Jul 23 12 12:57 pm Link

Photographer

No Solution

Posts: 82

Austin, Texas, US

I'm interested...

Jul 23 12 01:13 pm Link

Photographer

P O T T S

Posts: 5471

Lake City, Florida, US

David Scott wrote:
Anything?

A lot of good work David, but nothing jumped out and wowed me.

Jul 23 12 01:26 pm Link

Photographer

P O T T S

Posts: 5471

Lake City, Florida, US

Natalie Swift wrote:
maybe?

Wow.

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/9681814 (18+)

Jul 23 12 01:28 pm Link

Photographer

P O T T S

Posts: 5471

Lake City, Florida, US

Dan Olek wrote:
Surely!

This model works very well with you. Loved this one.

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/25057335 (18+?)

Jul 23 12 01:31 pm Link

Model

Toria Pardoe

Posts: 113

Stoke-on-Trent, England, United Kingdom

I'd be interested to know if anything stands out enough?

Jul 23 12 01:41 pm Link

Photographer

P O T T S

Posts: 5471

Lake City, Florida, US

Julian  W I L D E wrote:
Drop on by.  If you're not Exhausted by now!  big_smile  -JULIAN

Julian, when I open someone's portfolio, my eyes move very quickly, waiting for something to grab me. So, for yours, they all do.  So I then look, what of your work do my eyes keep going back to. Most of them were of one model - I don't know how often you work with her, but you get amazing results from her.

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/23211409 (18+)

Also, in this thread, there are many models who could make a giant leap forward in their portfolio by working with you. Great work as always.

Jul 23 12 01:42 pm Link

Photographer

P O T T S

Posts: 5471

Lake City, Florida, US

Tims Solution wrote:
I'm interested...

You have some very good work, just not in the wow category yet.

Jul 23 12 01:43 pm Link

Photographer

P O T T S

Posts: 5471

Lake City, Florida, US

Toria Pardoe wrote:
I'd be interested to know if anything stands out enough?

You have a great start. Keep shooting, just no wows yet.

Jul 23 12 01:45 pm Link

Photographer

Chris Maxwell

Posts: 684

Sterling, Virginia, US

Any interests?

Jul 23 12 02:01 pm Link

Photographer

Brett Fish

Posts: 426

Seattle, Washington, US

Bitch'n list!  I've already poached from it twice.

Jul 23 12 11:30 pm Link

Model

n e e c o l e

Posts: 172

Morton Grove, Illinois, US

me?

Jul 24 12 01:17 am Link

Model

CamiAnn

Posts: 794

Los Angeles, California, US

P O T T S wrote:

You have a good beginning. I think if you worl with some more photographers you will get some wow shots.

Thanks!...am working on it...any suggestions in particular to get that "wow" factor?

Jul 24 12 01:24 am Link

Photographer

P O T T S

Posts: 5471

Lake City, Florida, US

Chris Maxwell wrote:
Any interests?

Several great ones. I loved this,

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/111218/19/4eeea95147b14_m.jpg

Jul 24 12 02:05 am Link

Photographer

P O T T S

Posts: 5471

Lake City, Florida, US

Brett Fish wrote:
Bitch'n list!  I've already poached from it twice.

Wow.

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/27081354 (18+)

Jul 24 12 02:07 am Link

Photographer

P O T T S

Posts: 5471

Lake City, Florida, US

n e e c o l e wrote:
me?

You have some cool images, but nothing made me go wow.

Jul 24 12 02:09 am Link

Photographer

P O T T S

Posts: 5471

Lake City, Florida, US

CamiAnn wrote:

Thanks!...am working on it...any suggestions in particular to get that "wow" factor?

In the mirror, work on expressions. Be able to get a little more dramatic. You have a dance background, so instead of posing, be a little more fluid. I think if you do those, and get with the right photographer, you will get some wow.

Jul 24 12 02:16 am Link

Photographer

Brett Fish

Posts: 426

Seattle, Washington, US

Oops.

Jul 24 12 11:18 am Link

Photographer

Brett Fish

Posts: 426

Seattle, Washington, US

P O T T S wrote:

Wow.

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/27081354 (18+)

Thank you.

Jul 24 12 11:19 am Link

Model

Keko Maura

Posts: 101

Los Angeles, California, US

I updated my portfolio. I have a LOT of shots, all very diverse, but choosing what goes into the limited space I have on MM is difficult for me.

Jul 24 12 11:19 am Link

Photographer

Brick Wilson

Posts: 373

Palatine, Illinois, US

??

Jul 24 12 12:59 pm Link

Photographer

BYNW

Posts: 442

Oak Harbor, Washington, US

Do I offer any WOW?

Jul 24 12 03:05 pm Link

Model

Jenn Lynn T

Posts: 65

Laurel, Maryland, US

perhaps....have a look

Jul 24 12 05:49 pm Link

Photographer

P O T T S

Posts: 5471

Lake City, Florida, US

Keko Maura wrote:
I updated my portfolio. I have a LOT of shots, all very diverse, but choosing what goes into the limited space I have on MM is difficult for me.

Listed. I like this a lot.

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120723/20/500e11f7424a7_m.jpg

Jul 25 12 04:04 pm Link

Photographer

P O T T S

Posts: 5471

Lake City, Florida, US

Brick Wilson wrote:
??

I love this. Listed.

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/090915/23/4ab083fd95d8f_m.jpg

Jul 25 12 04:05 pm Link

Photographer

P O T T S

Posts: 5471

Lake City, Florida, US

BYNW wrote:
Do I offer any WOW?

Some cool stuff, but no wow yet.

Jul 25 12 04:07 pm Link

Photographer

P O T T S

Posts: 5471

Lake City, Florida, US

Jenn Lynn T wrote:
perhaps....have a look

Not yet, but keep shooting!

Jul 25 12 04:08 pm Link

Photographer

Raw and the cooked

Posts: 956

London, England, United Kingdom

P O T T S wrote:

Honestly, I like this in the small version better than the large. In the large version, parts of her skin turned out waxy looking. But in the small version, I listed it. I am a sucker for black and white and cheek bones!

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110704/10/4e11f96d999f2_m.jpg

Many thanks!

Jul 26 12 12:46 am Link