Forums > Critique > Does your Avatar make me want to see your port?

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6386

Champaign, Illinois, US

Eila Calvert wrote:
I would love any advice you can offer.

This is much better........probably yes

Jan 25 14 10:48 pm Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6386

Champaign, Illinois, US

I am resurrecting this if anyone wants to play

Feb 26 14 07:21 am Link

Photographer

Fernon

Posts: 1544

Annapolis, Maryland, US

Would love to hear your opinion.

Feb 26 14 07:42 am Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6386

Champaign, Illinois, US

Fernon wrote:
Would love to hear your opinion.

The lack of contrast in the B/W means probably no

Feb 26 14 07:46 am Link

Photographer

angjminer

Posts: 11

MAGNOLIA SPRINGS, Alabama, US

why not, gotta get em in. smile

Feb 26 14 10:06 am Link

Photographer

Southern Oregon Photo

Posts: 197

Klamath Falls, Oregon, US

What do you think?

Feb 26 14 10:27 am Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6386

Champaign, Illinois, US

angjminer wrote:
why not, gotta get em in. smile

Your subject is too small.......no

Feb 26 14 01:59 pm Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6386

Champaign, Illinois, US

Southern Oregon Photo wrote:
What do you think?

good curves and good lighting.....70% yes

Feb 26 14 02:00 pm Link

Photographer

Gerardo Martinez

Posts: 317

Anaheim, California, US

smile

Feb 26 14 02:15 pm Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6386

Champaign, Illinois, US

GerardoC91 wrote:
smile

good lighting and good model  65% yes....need more of a hook to up the ante though

Feb 26 14 02:37 pm Link

Photographer

Joris van der Ploeg

Posts: 134

Amsterdam, Noord-Holland, Netherlands

does this one do the trick?

Feb 26 14 03:28 pm Link

Photographer

angjminer

Posts: 11

MAGNOLIA SPRINGS, Alabama, US

Peach Jones wrote:

Your subject is too small.......no

smile

Feb 26 14 03:48 pm Link

Model

Ashlynn Dennington

Posts: 29

San Antonio, Texas, US

Honest opinion please, I am new big_smile

Feb 26 14 05:29 pm Link

Model

Katerina Marie

Posts: 43

Miami Beach, Florida, US

Meow?

Feb 26 14 07:35 pm Link

Photographer

arootphotography

Posts: 92

Thornton, Colorado, US

Hit me smile

Feb 26 14 07:50 pm Link

Model

LadyAsh

Posts: 17

Bloomington, Indiana, US

I'm a bit new, so I would love to play. big_smile

Feb 26 14 07:54 pm Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6386

Champaign, Illinois, US

Joris van der Ploeg wrote:
does this one do the trick?

Subject is too small in the avatar. Crop it in more and you have a much better shot. For now the answer is no

Feb 27 14 01:46 pm Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6386

Champaign, Illinois, US

Ashlynn Dennington wrote:
Honest opinion please, I am new big_smile

While I like the shot, it is too dark for an avatar IMO. You have others in your port that would serve you much better in being an avatar

Feb 27 14 01:49 pm Link

Model

christianjbarry

Posts: 16

Thousand Oaks, California, US

Let me know please!

Feb 27 14 01:51 pm Link

Photographer

John Malloch Caldwell

Posts: 2563

Hastings, England, United Kingdom

Does mine make you want to look further.

Feb 27 14 02:00 pm Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6386

Champaign, Illinois, US

Katerina Marie wrote:
Meow?

sorry but no

Feb 27 14 02:59 pm Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6386

Champaign, Illinois, US

arootphotography wrote:
Hit me smile

no. subject is too small. Plus you have at least one of 2 others that IMO would get more attention

Feb 27 14 03:00 pm Link

Photographer

Select Models

Posts: 36179

Upland, California, US

Hmmmm... does it?... wink

Feb 27 14 03:09 pm Link

Photographer

Canvassy

Posts: 199

Saint Paul, Minnesota, US

I'd love to know smile

Feb 27 14 03:14 pm Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6386

Champaign, Illinois, US

Lady Ash12 wrote:
I'm a bit new, so I would love to play. big_smile

You have great eyes, but they don't stand out very well in this shot. So I will go with 50/50

Feb 27 14 03:29 pm Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6386

Champaign, Illinois, US

christianjbarry wrote:
Let me know please!

sorry Christian but no

Feb 27 14 03:29 pm Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6386

Champaign, Illinois, US

John Malloch Caldwell wrote:
Does mine make you want to look further.

All I see is a bed and a large window.........probably not

Feb 27 14 03:30 pm Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6386

Champaign, Illinois, US

Select Models wrote:
Hmmmm... does it?... wink

The colors work very well to get my initial attention. However the subject probably would not draw me in. IMO you have some other great shots that I would say yes too

Feb 27 14 03:35 pm Link

Photographer

AE Photography

Posts: 102

Eugene, Oregon, US

I'm game! Do tell...

Feb 27 14 03:41 pm Link

Model

Ashlynn Dennington

Posts: 29

San Antonio, Texas, US

Peach Jones wrote:

While I like the shot, it is too dark for an avatar IMO. You have others in your port that would serve you much better in being an avatar

Thanks so much! Can I ask which one you think would work better??

Feb 27 14 04:36 pm Link

Model

Veronika Vitkina

Posts: 241

Brooklyn, New York, US

How about mine? Just put it up yesterday

Feb 27 14 04:41 pm Link

Model

LadyAsh

Posts: 17

Bloomington, Indiana, US

Peach Jones wrote:

You have great eyes, but they don't stand out very well in this shot. So I will go with 50/50

Awe. Lol. Well I need to find a better photo then. ;p

Feb 27 14 05:10 pm Link

Model

Jennifer Millikan Keene

Posts: 75

Asheboro, North Carolina, US

Curious

Feb 27 14 05:34 pm Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6386

Champaign, Illinois, US

Ashlynn Dennington wrote:

Thanks so much! Can I ask which one you think would work better??

this would be my #1 choice
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140218/17/530405dfdb043.jpg

Feb 27 14 06:27 pm Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6386

Champaign, Illinois, US

Allan Erickson wrote:
I'm game! Do tell...

Love her legs. Probably yes, but IMO if you crop it in a bit more and get rid of the negative space at the top it would be more effective

Feb 27 14 06:30 pm Link

Model

Tiffiney C

Posts: 570

Los Angeles, California, US

I'm interested.

Tiff
www.TiffineyC.com

Feb 27 14 06:34 pm Link

Photographer

Kev Lawson

Posts: 7813

Las Vegas, Nevada, US

Sure.. let me know. smile

Feb 27 14 06:36 pm Link

Photographer

Justin Bonaparte

Posts: 257

Charlotte, North Carolina, US

I'm game!

Feb 27 14 06:36 pm Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6386

Champaign, Illinois, US

Veronika Vitkina  wrote:
How about mine? Just put it up yesterday

the colors would at first get my attention, but not sure if there is enough there to make me want to open your port..........and that would be a shame because I did look and I must say your beauty is outstanding!

Feb 27 14 06:38 pm Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6386

Champaign, Illinois, US

Jennifer Millikan Keene wrote:
Curious

sorry, just not enough pop to draw me in

Feb 27 14 06:39 pm Link