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Nikki Cole Photography

Posts: 34

New York, New York, US

Ok, I have been away from PS for ages and barely remember how to work with it lol
Please let me know your opinion on this http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pi … 8#29436268

I know some of the problems but I want to here from you before further work. I'm not quite happy with the tones either. What do you think?

Aug 05 12 05:59 pm Link

Photographer

Motordrive Photography

Posts: 3075

Lodi, California, US

I think pretty good, but needs refinement. Some skin has too much texture,
some, too little without a good transition between the two . I'd like to see
more carving, teeth also look pink to me.

Aug 06 12 03:11 pm Link

Photographer

Nikki Cole Photography

Posts: 34

New York, New York, US

Motordrive Photography wrote:
I think pretty good, but needs refinement. Some skin has too much texture,
some, too little without a good transition between the two . I'd like to see
more carving, teeth also look pink to me.

Lee, thank you so much. The skin needs work for sure. I haven't yet learn how properly to carve but I will be practicing. As for the teeth, you are right. I haven't noticed but they are pink for some reason.

Aug 06 12 06:12 pm Link