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Model

Avalon Fell

Posts: 75

Rowland Heights, California, US

I'm in

Aug 13 12 01:18 pm Link

Photographer

ikonas Boston

Posts: 720

Boston, Massachusetts, US

Latiera G wrote:
I'd love to know smile

Danger tape is a cliche get rid of the image. Plus the image is visibly overphotoshopped
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120209/18/4f34816b72897_m.jpg

I recommend you also delete (or at least hide) this image as your photgrapher did a sloppy job photoshoppping your right breast. I advise you to CAREFYLLY check your photog's work in the future prior to posting an image.

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110821/12/4e515cf370ea7_m.jpg

I very much like your sultry expression and vision and projection of exotic beauty here

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/111026/19/4ea8c59bc4baa_m.jpg

Aug 13 12 02:29 pm Link

Model

NoemiLeighton

Posts: 24

Bedford, England, United Kingdom

got skipped hmm x

Aug 13 12 02:40 pm Link

Makeup Artist

Scintilla Makeup

Posts: 18

Edison, New Jersey, US

Interested

Aug 13 12 02:46 pm Link

Model

Lakin S

Posts: 308

Ashland, Kentucky, US

ikonas wrote:

Not a fan of car images. It devalues your port.
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120628/11/4feca93d38960_m.jpg

Also remove this one as you are abviously posing for the camera.


http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120628/11/4fec9e590ecac_m.jpg

This B&W is artistic, I love your emotive expression, your fabulous hair and slim waist

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120628/11/4feca03e20419_m.jpg

Thank you!!
I do appreciate the input. I agree with you just need better photos to fill those spots which I am in the process of working on wink

Aug 13 12 02:48 pm Link

Photographer

ikonas Boston

Posts: 720

Boston, Massachusetts, US

NoemiLeighton wrote:
got skipped hmm x

Sorry to skip you Noemi, trust me it was not intentional smile
I propose delteting at least one, or two images from SoulStealerPhotography. Not because there is anything wrong with them, its just you posted three similar images. Remember, in photography, LESS IS MORE.

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/100102/01/4b3f164c0e4a1_m.jpg

Not a fan of composites, but I do love your expressive face and connection with the viewer here

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/091111/03/4afaa21aa2b66_m.jpg

Best wishes ~Julius

Aug 13 12 02:54 pm Link

Photographer

Better Souls

Posts: 128

Cleveland Heights, Ohio, US

Lot of input output. Looking forward.

Aug 13 12 02:56 pm Link

Model

Landy

Posts: 67

La Crosse, Wisconsin, US

Would love to hear it thanks smile

Aug 13 12 03:43 pm Link

Photographer

ikonas Boston

Posts: 720

Boston, Massachusetts, US

Mandi1993 wrote:
I'm in

Hi Mandi and welcome to MM! Delete this one as you already posted another image (my favorite listed below) from the same scene. Remember, less is more.
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120812/17/50284e9df0888_m.jpg

Below is another image to be deleted  because you do not look relaxed in this forced pose.

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120809/17/50245ab681e82_m.jpg

This one is sultry and clearly shows you beautiful facial  features.
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120809/17/5024598908443_m.jpg

Aug 13 12 03:47 pm Link

Makeup Artist

SD Makeup Artisty

Posts: 184

Hicksville, New York, US

I'm interested if you're still doing it. (:

Aug 13 12 03:49 pm Link

Photographer

ikonas Boston

Posts: 720

Boston, Massachusetts, US

Christina Vanity MUA wrote:
Interested

Variant  images from the same scenes must be avoided like the plague. This one should go as its sister image shows the model in a much better light and her breast shape look more appealing than here..

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120803/22/501cae3486ea5_m.jpg

Take this advice throughout your port and get rid of another 10-20 images.

Here is my favorite. The makeup is creative and the photography is good. Make sure you delete the sister images.

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120803/21/501ca82db110f_m.jpg

Aug 13 12 03:55 pm Link

Photographer

ikonas Boston

Posts: 720

Boston, Massachusetts, US

Better Souls wrote:
Lot of input output. Looking forward.

Pretty model, lovely figure, but her poose is hunched, I dont like cigarettes and I dont see a clear concept here. Let her go.
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/22788068

I like the light and the vintage rendering below.

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120405/10/4f7dd14c6b93f_m.jpg

I do like your image captions throughout your port

Aug 13 12 04:04 pm Link

Photographer

Better Souls

Posts: 128

Cleveland Heights, Ohio, US

You're the second to say. This is fine, as she just returned to Cleveland from France this week, we're trying to set up another shoot. That photo was taken 2 years ago and I have improved immensely. smile

Thank you.

Aug 13 12 04:21 pm Link

Model

Audrey Dasia

Posts: 120

Santa Rosa, California, US

Got skipped

Aug 13 12 04:31 pm Link

Photographer

Kerri Jean Photography

Posts: 588

Indianapolis, Indiana, US

ikonas wrote:

Welcome to MM Kerri. The following image should go. It is just a snapshot with no concept behind it.
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120811/15/5026dee68f6bc_m.jpg

Also get rid of this one of Yas'Ming as you have posted two much better images of her.

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120811/15/5026e0039698e_m.jpg

As a rookie, you are having a great start doing portraits and you seem to do well on composition. My favorite one is your heart image. While your photographic technique nor her expression shine, you are showing interest in creating concepts. Keep it up and you will do great.

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120630/22/4fefe4d742f49_m.jpg

Thank you very much.  I appreciate the feedback!

Aug 13 12 04:44 pm Link

Photographer

ikonas Boston

Posts: 720

Boston, Massachusetts, US

Audrey Dasia wrote:
Got skipped

Your skin fold under your breast is rather unflattering.
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29482242

"Me and my pussy" [LOL] you look significantly heavier than in the rest of your port.

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29078100

You should delete (or hide) perhaps 10-20 more images as your port is getting out of control. Remember, less is more. Ask other photographers for advice.

Love your figure, pensive expression, flying hair and the natural scene adds to the overall beauty of this image:

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120721/21/500b82722f195_m.jpg

Aug 13 12 05:20 pm Link

Photographer

ikonas Boston

Posts: 720

Boston, Massachusetts, US

SD Makeup Artisty wrote:
I'm interested if you're still doing it. (:

Delete this one as the photo does not clealy show that this lovely lady  is wearing any makeup.

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120616/16/4fdd1cb1cb9ff_m.jpg

My favorite is this one. Your creative colorful makeup and her beauty make a truly sublime image.

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120413/08/4f8848ac06299_m.jpg

Aug 13 12 05:26 pm Link

Model

Landy

Posts: 67

La Crosse, Wisconsin, US

I was skipped as well,

Aug 13 12 06:44 pm Link

Model

Audrey Dasia

Posts: 120

Santa Rosa, California, US

ikonas wrote:

Your skin fold under your breast is rather unflattering.
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29482242

"Me and my pussy" [LOL] you look significantly heavier than in the rest of your port.

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29078100

You should delete (or hide) perhaps 10-20 more images as your port is getting out of control. Remember, less is more. Ask other photographers for advice.

Love your figure, pensive expression, flying hair and the natural scene adds to the overall beauty of this image:

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120721/21/500b82722f195_m.jpg

Thank you for the input, I deleted over 20 wink I knew it was getting crazy, but those are the only kinds of photos I have, I need more variety I guess?

Aug 13 12 06:45 pm Link

Photographer

By His Hands

Posts: 9

Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania, US

ooo im inn smile

Aug 13 12 06:45 pm Link

Model

Miss Andria

Posts: 46

Phoenix, Arizona, US

Hmmmm...why not!

Aug 13 12 06:48 pm Link

Model

Terrance Rahl

Posts: 7

Bellingham, Washington, US

I would love if you could tell me.

Aug 13 12 07:30 pm Link

Model

Avalon Fell

Posts: 75

Rowland Heights, California, US

ikonas wrote:

Hi Mandi and welcome to MM! Delete this one as you already posted another image (my favorite listed below) from the same scene. Remember, less is more.
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120812/17/50284e9df0888_m.jpg

Below is another image to be deleted  because you do not look relaxed in this forced pose.

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120809/17/50245ab681e82_m.jpg


This one is sultry and clearly shows you beautiful facial  features.
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120809/17/5024598908443_m.jpg

Thanks:) will do.

Aug 13 12 07:38 pm Link

Model

Alyson Pink

Posts: 32

Los Angeles, California, US

I would like to know

Aug 13 12 08:02 pm Link

Retoucher

LauraErsoy

Posts: 15

New York, New York, US

criticize away! but can you message to me, please? smile

Aug 13 12 08:02 pm Link

Makeup Artist

Kristen Mussari

Posts: 8

Berwyn, Illinois, US

I'd like to know please.

Aug 13 12 09:38 pm Link

Model

Lyhanna Dihann

Posts: 1

Los Angeles, California, US

I would like to know.! Always game for some constructive criticism. smile

Aug 13 12 10:14 pm Link

Model

Sylph Sia

Posts: 35

Canberra, Australian Capital Territory, Australia

I'm interested! big_smile

Aug 13 12 10:21 pm Link

Model

NoemiLeighton

Posts: 24

Bedford, England, United Kingdom

ikonas wrote:

Sorry to skip you Noemi, trust me it was not intentional smile
I propose delteting at least one, or two images from SoulStealerPhotography. Not because there is anything wrong with them, its just you posted three similar images. Remember, in photography, LESS IS MORE.

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/100102/01/4b3f164c0e4a1_m.jpg

Not a fan of composites, but I do love your expressive face and connection with the viewer here

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/091111/03/4afaa21aa2b66_m.jpg

Best wishes ~Julius

Thanks x

Aug 14 12 12:55 am Link

Model

Sarah_Elisabeth

Posts: 278

Sydney, New South Wales, Australia

What do you think my worst is?

Aug 14 12 02:44 am Link

Photographer

ikonas Boston

Posts: 720

Boston, Massachusetts, US

Miss   Andria wrote:
Hmmmm...why not!

THis image renders you beyond your age. Get rid of it.
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120428/10/4f9c245e856bc_m.jpg

Here you nicely display all your assets and I like your attitude. Great photography too.
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120624/18/4fe7c516eae0e_m.jpg

Aug 14 12 05:57 am Link

Photographer

ikonas Boston

Posts: 720

Boston, Massachusetts, US

Landy wrote:
I was skipped as well,

Here you are just posing. Nothing outstanding to take one's breath away
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120812/11/5027f02eecfda_m.jpg

A great portrait, alluring display of your cleavage
genuine smile, beautiful soft light

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120524/21/4fbf0c7698163_m.jpg

Aug 14 12 06:02 am Link

Photographer

ikonas Boston

Posts: 720

Boston, Massachusetts, US

By His Hands  wrote:
ooo im inn smile

You are pushing your breasts inward forcing them too close together. In cases like these, I use surgical tape to keep them farther apart. Delete it. Besides, your other self prtrait is much better, I especially like your spunky expression.
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120809/04/50239f1dad201_m.jpg

Here you have great light producing cinematic quality image with superb display of emotion. Great job
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120813/18/5029b0330e879_m.jpg

Aug 14 12 06:09 am Link

Photographer

Katie Jane Photography

Posts: 4

Camborne-Redruth, England, United Kingdom

I'd like to know your opinion, if it's not too late? x

Aug 14 12 07:22 am Link

Model

Jason Rahim

Posts: 32

Miller Place, New York, US

next please smile

Aug 14 12 08:42 am Link

Photographer

By His Hands

Posts: 9

Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania, US

ikonas wrote:

You are pushing your breasts inward forcing them too close together. In cases like these, I use surgical tape to keep them farther apart. Delete it. Besides, your other self prtrait is much better, I especially like your spunky expression.
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120809/04/50239f1dad201_m.jpg

Here you have great light producing cinematic quality image with superb display of emotion. Great job
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120813/18/5029b0330e879_m.jpg

thank you! I'll probably end up deleting that one once I get a little more time to be on the site =]

Aug 14 12 09:17 am Link

Photographer

In Balance Photography

Posts: 3374

Boston, Massachusetts, US

I'll play!

Aug 14 12 09:22 am Link

Model

Anjie

Posts: 17

Oxford, Mississippi, US

*I can do this* (2x)

Can you critique me next?

smile

Aug 14 12 09:32 am Link

Photographer

MVK Photo

Posts: 463

Augusta, Georgia, US

me please!  [:

Aug 14 12 11:18 am Link

Model

Landy

Posts: 67

La Crosse, Wisconsin, US

ikonas wrote:

Here you are just posing. Nothing outstanding to take one's breath away
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120812/11/5027f02eecfda_m.jpg

A great portrait, alluring display of your cleavage
genuine smile, beautiful soft light

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120524/21/4fbf0c7698163_m.jpg

Thank you so much, very helpful smile !

Aug 14 12 11:25 am Link