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Photographer

Felipe Jimenez

Posts: 407

Chicago, Illinois, US

Landy wrote:
If its still going..would very much love to hear your thoughts!

I feel you're trying to be too sexy in your photos, and it can really take away from your look. Work on that. Try to tone it down a bit.

Oct 05 12 08:48 am Link

Retoucher

MSL Retouch

Posts: 244

Miami, Florida, US

I know it could be stronger, but critique away =]

Oct 05 12 08:48 am Link

Photographer

Felipe Jimenez

Posts: 407

Chicago, Illinois, US

Avarra LaRoux wrote:
I'm interested. Definitely want to be taken seriously and know where I need to improve!

Go in beauty. I think you'd make some good $$ off of that. smile

Oct 05 12 08:49 am Link

Photographer

Felipe Jimenez

Posts: 407

Chicago, Illinois, US

Sarah Hermann wrote:
Still going? I'm so indecisive as to which shots to get rid of. Help please?

Most of your work is a bit too amateurish. If you want to be considered for more professional work, you have to be willing to get professional work done first. Try to avoid doing cheesy/corny themes. Those really make you look amateurish.

Oct 05 12 08:50 am Link

Photographer

Felipe Jimenez

Posts: 407

Chicago, Illinois, US

Eva Mizer Photography wrote:
I have been putting this off for awhile, but it's time. I'm tired to being stuck in my rut and would appreciate a fresh set of eyes.

Thank you in advance.

Some of your work is phenomenal. And then other stuff made me think "Oh... the same photographer did this?" Take this one for example:

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120821/13/5033eb24bc17e_m.jpg

It's stunning! I feel you need to continue building work like this. smile Keep going at it though. I want to see more of your work.

Oct 05 12 08:52 am Link

Photographer

Felipe Jimenez

Posts: 407

Chicago, Illinois, US

Kittykt wrote:
Let's do this!be honest,I'm just gettin started,and have yet to post the Realy good ones

I'm not really sure where you can start... Probably try getting some headshots of yourself that don't involve you being almost naked. Then you can work your way up.

Oct 05 12 08:53 am Link

Photographer

Felipe Jimenez

Posts: 407

Chicago, Illinois, US

Funck Photography wrote:
playtime!

I would stay away from vignettes. They're a bit overdone and overrated. Your pics are a bit too bland for me. I think it's the quality of the camera you shoot with though.

Oct 05 12 08:54 am Link

Photographer

Felipe Jimenez

Posts: 407

Chicago, Illinois, US

Saedcantas wrote:
Had a big cull and new shots on my port, I'd love to hear your thoughts smile

Beautiful eyes, and love the hair. Keep working though. I want to see variety. smile

Oct 05 12 08:57 am Link

Photographer

Felipe Jimenez

Posts: 407

Chicago, Illinois, US

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Tyler[/url] Brad] Me please

Good start. Just watch out with your expression. There seems to just be one throughout.

Oct 05 12 09:21 am Link

Photographer

DAN CRUIKSHANK

Posts: 1786

Vancouver, British Columbia, Canada

Still going?

Oct 05 12 09:30 am Link

Photographer

CNSPhotography

Posts: 1

London, England, United Kingdom

Oct 05 12 09:39 am Link

Model

Virginia Ann

Posts: 53

Eastland, Texas, US

I can always use help smile

Oct 05 12 09:52 am Link

Model

Cyn Michelle

Posts: 80

Vallejo, California, US

I'd like to hear what you'd have to say smile

Oct 05 12 09:58 am Link

Model

_____a_____

Posts: 9

ALIX, Arkansas, US

Me, please. I am definitely interested. Just curious as to which photo is my weakest and which is my strongest. I am learning more each day and love to model. Thank you so much in advance!

Oct 05 12 10:20 am Link

Model

PositiveEnergy

Posts: 8

Miami, Florida, US

Me me me!  Please smile 

Thank you

Oct 05 12 10:25 am Link

Model

StacieMaria

Posts: 373

Hollywood, Florida, US

I'm in!!  smile

Oct 05 12 10:27 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Sure!

Oct 06 12 11:07 am Link

Model

Nikita Rumyantseva

Posts: 343

Cardiff, Wales, United Kingdom

Please! smile

Oct 06 12 11:40 am Link

Photographer

Massi

Posts: 19

Los Angeles, California, US

I'm up for a critique if you're still at it.

Oct 07 12 01:37 am Link

Photographer

Felipe Jimenez

Posts: 407

Chicago, Illinois, US

Alyson Pink wrote:
go ahead smile

Good stuff. Great poses, love the expressions. Just work with better photographers please. They make you seem amateurish.

Oct 07 12 09:25 am Link

Photographer

Felipe Jimenez

Posts: 407

Chicago, Illinois, US

Miss Bond wrote:
big_smile

Wow. Great stuff missy. Love your work. I'd say to get rid of your avatar. It doesn't do your beauty justice. smile

Oct 07 12 09:27 am Link

Model

Alivia Autumn

Posts: 610

Albuquerque, New Mexico, US

What say you?

Oct 07 12 10:14 am Link

Makeup Artist

Makeup Hair by Dani B

Posts: 746

Los Angeles, California, US

Yes, please.

Oct 08 12 01:42 am Link

Photographer

Michael Knight

Posts: 53

Philadelphia, Pennsylvania, US

I'm game.

Oct 08 12 05:38 am Link

Model

Jean Pierre Betancur

Posts: 38

Los Angeles, California, US

Let me know what you think

Oct 08 12 05:43 am Link

Model

Amy-Dawn

Posts: 17

Bath, England, United Kingdom

Wouldn't consider myself very experienced yet, but critique me please smile

Oct 08 12 05:52 am Link

Model

Mea Culpa

Posts: 353

Brisbane, Queensland, Australia

I would really appreciate some feedback and do let me know if you think I'm lacking anywhere. smile

Oct 08 12 05:54 am Link

Model

Beth Chambers

Posts: 465

London, England, United Kingdom

Me please? smile

Oct 08 12 04:27 pm Link

Model

Niece Waidhofer

Posts: 201

Houston, Texas, US

Me, please?

Oct 09 12 08:59 pm Link

Model

Natalie Kay Stokes

Posts: 12

Adelaide, South Australia, Australia

I'm new to the modeling world and have my first shoot on friday but i would love to know what you think of my port so far

Oct 09 12 09:06 pm Link

Model

Amelia Rouge

Posts: 114

Anaheim, California, US

How about me?

Oct 10 12 03:29 pm Link

Model

Kristie Mcleery

Posts: 1

Jacksonville, Florida, US

me? smile

Oct 10 12 03:35 pm Link