Forums > Critique > Fun and Games > I'll tell you what HAS to GO.

Photographer

AWHill Photography

Posts: 151

New York, New York, US

I've been enjoying my time on the MM forums of late and exploring other peoples portfolios. I see an abundance of good work and some stuff that GOT to GO.
I'll go through your port and tell you what needs to go.

Both models and photographers are welcome.

I am biased towards certain styles but I am not critiquing just telling
you what needs to go.

Have at it.

You don't have to remove the pictures but my rule of thumb is quality over quantity. Even my own port has to much right now!

Sep 26 12 06:04 pm Link

Photographer

Jorge Kreimer

Posts: 2393

Los Angeles, California, US

Sure, I have a lot to take out.

Sep 26 12 07:15 pm Link

Model

Eleanor Rose

Posts: 2287

Santa Rosa, California, US

Me please!

Sep 26 12 07:18 pm Link

Sep 26 12 07:41 pm Link

Photographer

AWHill Photography

Posts: 151

New York, New York, US

Eleanor R wrote:
Me please!

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29057513

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/28762284

These two  Got To GO!

! Some of your nudes are pure inspiration

Sep 26 12 07:49 pm Link

Photographer

TDSImages

Posts: 856

Salt Lake City, Utah, US

Me next?

Sep 27 12 06:55 am Link

Model

Jenny Jannetty

Posts: 449

Roanoke, Virginia, US

I'm game!

Sep 27 12 07:11 am Link

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Photographer

DAN CRUIKSHANK

Posts: 1786

Vancouver, British Columbia, Canada

Tell me! smile

Sep 27 12 08:39 am Link

Photographer

AWHill Photography

Posts: 151

New York, New York, US

DAN CRUIKSHANK wrote:
Tell me! smile

First let me say some of your dark landscapes are pure inspiration.

These...GOT to GOOO:)

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/28971489

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29068077

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29406881 (get rid of bottom one the top is waay stronger)

Sep 27 12 09:14 am Link

Photographer

DAN CRUIKSHANK

Posts: 1786

Vancouver, British Columbia, Canada

AWHill Photography wrote:

First let me say some of your dark landscapes are pure inspiration.

These...GOT to GOOO:)

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/28971489

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29068077

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29406881 (get rid of bottom one the top is waay stronger)

Mucho gracias!

Sep 27 12 09:22 am Link

Model

Cameron Mark Lewis

Posts: 337

San Francisco, California, US

What do you think has to go?

Sep 27 12 10:03 am Link

Photographer

AWHill Photography

Posts: 151

New York, New York, US

Cameron Mark Lewis wrote:
What do you think has to go?

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30038863

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30038799

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/27974014

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29519724

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29702063

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30038929

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/27973949

These..GOT to GO.

You sell yourself very well as a model - many strong shots but you can stand to cut down on some of your images to make it more concise. You have a lot of strong head shots so making some selections were hard but you're a pro and it shows.

Sep 27 12 10:22 am Link

Photographer

L Raye

Posts: 5028

Petaluma, California, US

WHich ones should go away?

Sep 27 12 10:29 am Link

Photographer

AWHill Photography

Posts: 151

New York, New York, US

L Raye wrote:
WHich ones should go away?

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/27135168

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/17372927

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/24888979

I think I can safely say these three GOT to GO!

This was truly hard as your port has an abundance of great nudes.
You have an eye for sure.

Sep 27 12 11:14 am Link

Model

Cynthia Serrano

Posts: 12466

Newark, New Jersey, US

??

Sep 27 12 11:15 am Link

Photographer

Macphotography

Posts: 47

London, England, United Kingdom

Try me :-)

Sep 27 12 11:18 am Link

Photographer

AWHill Photography

Posts: 151

New York, New York, US

Cynthia Serrano  wrote:
??

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29762129

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/14564710

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/13769365

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29825693

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29902502

These..Got TO GO!

I'm basing my pics on what showcases you best as a model and the styling involved. As a former model I wanna say you have some great expressions and strong poses. Branch out and work with some more people and you'll have some gold.

Sep 27 12 11:38 am Link

Sep 27 12 11:41 am Link

Model

Cameron Mark Lewis

Posts: 337

San Francisco, California, US

AWHill Photography wrote:

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30038863

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30038799

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/27974014

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29519724

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29702063

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30038929

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/27973949

These..GOT to GO.

You sell yourself very well as a model - many strong shots but you can stand to cut down on some of your images to make it more concise. You have a lot of strong head shots so making some selections were hard but you're a pro and it shows.

Much appreciated, thank you! smile

Sep 27 12 11:51 am Link

Retoucher

Beauty Retouched

Posts: 130

Philadelphia, Pennsylvania, US

How bout me smile

Sep 27 12 11:52 am Link

Photographer

Maria J Campos

Posts: 252

Tilburg, Noord-Brabant, Netherlands

sure, do it!

Sep 27 12 12:05 pm Link

Model

Cynthia Serrano

Posts: 12466

Newark, New Jersey, US

AWHill Photography wrote:

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29762129

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/14564710

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/13769365

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29825693

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29902502

These..Got TO GO!

I'm basing my pics on what showcases you best as a model and the styling involved. As a former model I wanna say you have some great expressions and strong poses. Branch out and work with some more people and you'll have some gold.

Thanks it's funny you picked pretty much all of my newest shots smile

Sep 27 12 12:20 pm Link

Photographer

AWHill Photography

Posts: 151

New York, New York, US

Beauty Retouched wrote:
How bout me smile

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/8558456

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/8553108

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/8553114

These..Got..TOOooo..go! A bit hard to do a beauty retoucher - I understand you are trying to showcase your work in before/after - I don't think these three highlight your port like the rest of the images.

Sep 27 12 12:59 pm Link

Photographer

AWHill Photography

Posts: 151

New York, New York, US

Maria J Campos wrote:
sure, do it!

Can I say nothing? Your port is elegant, concise and is my soft spot.

Though..the name of the game is got to go..and..if I was on a desert island and something gots to go it would be..

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/26270291

Sep 27 12 01:04 pm Link

Model

Rainbow misi

Posts: 6

Bratislava, Bratislavsk√Ĺ, Slovakia

interested in your opinion..smile

Sep 27 12 01:11 pm Link

Model

Axioma

Posts: 6793

Gent, East Flanders, Belgium

smile

Sep 27 12 01:12 pm Link

Photographer

AWHill Photography

Posts: 151

New York, New York, US

Rainbow misi wrote:
interested in your opinion..smile

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30022214

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29772930

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29772904

Those three...GOT...TO ..GO. You have great dynamic poses but those do nothing for your port.

Sep 27 12 01:23 pm Link

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Photographer

I Ference Photography

Posts: 1152

Rochester, New York, US

And I?

Sep 27 12 04:53 pm Link

Model

steph amberlyn stewart

Posts: 34

Brantford, Ontario, Canada

id lke to know your input

Sep 28 12 07:36 pm Link

Photographer

Serendipitous Studios

Posts: 32

Beaverton, Oregon, US

I am always looking for some honest feedback.

Sep 29 12 09:55 am Link

Model

LauraPaige

Posts: 204

Asheville, North Carolina, US

Sure. Let me know. smile

Sep 29 12 10:05 am Link

Photographer

Monday Morning

Posts: 338

Norman, Oklahoma, US

I'm sure there are lots that need to go... smile

Sep 29 12 10:15 am Link

Model

Cashe Monet

Posts: 378

Los Angeles, California, US

Have at it!

Sep 29 12 10:24 am Link

Photographer

Camera Obscura Photogra

Posts: 12

Cincinnati, Ohio, US

I'm interested in what you think... Do mine!  Thank you!

Sep 29 12 10:28 am Link

Model

Chad Sterling

Posts: 38

College Station, Texas, US

Me please, and an explanation please!

Sep 29 12 10:32 am Link

Model

Egle Aida Damulyte

Posts: 375

London, England, United Kingdom

me please smile

Sep 29 12 10:36 am Link

Photographer

AWHill Photography

Posts: 151

New York, New York, US

Out and about NYC today. I'll be able to go through people's ports in a few hours.

Sep 29 12 01:16 pm Link