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Photographer

Thatchers Fine Art

Posts: 1265

Fort Worth, Texas, US

Mys Torri  Waters wrote:
Me please smile

Best - Rocked it with this mood! Nice!!!!!
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110802/18/4e38a71d9c41f_m.jpg

Worst - Lower lip is hanging to much. The hand in your hair looks like a strange ear due to placement.
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/091020/08/4addd205a5a50_m.jpg

Aug 04 13 09:07 pm Link

Photographer

Quentin Skyking

Posts: 296

Lancaster, Massachusetts, US

Thatcher Photography wrote:

Best - Love the light and comp! Great style!!!! WOW!!
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121227/04/50dc3b8683057_m.jpg

Worst - Just my least fav in your port.
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130217/12/5121389877977_m.jpg

THank you very much!

Aug 04 13 09:10 pm Link

Photographer

Thatchers Fine Art

Posts: 1265

Fort Worth, Texas, US

A Preppy Photography wrote:
Any thoughts?

Best - Hot! Love the glam factor on this!
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130415/12/516c5626cc31b_m.jpg

Worst - Nice comp! Adjust the white balance to warm it up and this would be AWESOME!!
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31161902 18+

Aug 04 13 09:53 pm Link

Photographer

Thatchers Fine Art

Posts: 1265

Fort Worth, Texas, US

Jimmy Watts wrote:
I'm Game

Best - Awesome model and pose! Sexy shot too!!
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/33434506 18+

Worst - This comp is not as strong as your others.
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31941076 18+

Aug 04 13 09:56 pm Link

Photographer

Thatchers Fine Art

Posts: 1265

Fort Worth, Texas, US

I Ference Photography wrote:
I'll play!  And please tell me why on my worst!

Best - Love the vanishing point!! Nice shot!!
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/33061588 18+

Worst - I don't feel that the location is on par with how you have shot many of the others.
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/32025302

Aug 04 13 09:59 pm Link

Model

Mystorri

Posts: 47

Melbourne, Victoria, Australia

Thatcher Photography wrote:

Best - Rocked it with this mood! Nice!!!!!
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110802/18/4e38a71d9c41f_m.jpg

Worst - Lower lip is hanging to much. The hand in your hair looks like a strange ear due to placement.
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/091020/08/4addd205a5a50_m.jpg

Thanks hunni smile xXx I will delete the worst one I think wink cheers

Aug 05 13 06:12 am Link

Photographer

A Preppy Photography

Posts: 333

San Jose, California, US

Thatcher Photography wrote:

Best - Hot! Love the glam factor on this!
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130415/12/516c5626cc31b_m.jpg

Worst - Nice comp! Adjust the white balance to warm it up and this would be AWESOME!!
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31161902 18+

Suh-WEET!!! Thanks for the input - I'll keep it in mind for future referencesas I shoot.

Aug 05 13 06:33 am Link

Photographer

SirKnowledge

Posts: 27

Richmond, Virginia, US

Thatcher Photography wrote:

Best - Awesome model and pose! Sexy shot too!!
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/33434506 18+

Worst - This comp is not as strong as your others.
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31941076 18+

Thank You

Aug 05 13 02:53 pm Link

Photographer

Thatchers Fine Art

Posts: 1265

Fort Worth, Texas, US

Not a problem!!

Aug 05 13 03:05 pm Link

Photographer

MidnightSun Designs

Posts: 363

WINSTON SALEM, North Carolina, US

i'll play

Aug 20 13 04:56 pm Link

Photographer

Thatchers Fine Art

Posts: 1265

Fort Worth, Texas, US

MidnightSun Designs wrote:
i'll play

Best - Love the model.. pose.. and dress!! WOW! Great light work and camera control as well.
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120301/18/4f5033f4bf2d9_m.jpg

Worst - I like the area.. I wish the model was set in a more finished out pose.
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120826/12/503a732944512_m.jpg

Aug 20 13 07:03 pm Link

Model

Azia Rose

Posts: 228

Portland, Oregon, US

yes!!

Aug 20 13 07:04 pm Link

Photographer

HO Photo

Posts: 575

Los Angeles, California, US

Sure!

Aug 20 13 09:49 pm Link

Model

Nicolette

Posts: 12718

Houston, Texas, US

smile

Aug 20 13 10:17 pm Link

Photographer

Adam J Caldwell

Posts: 290

London, England, United Kingdom

fire away buddy

Aug 21 13 04:22 am Link

Model

E L I N

Posts: 199

Montreal, Quebec, Canada

big_smile

Aug 21 13 12:35 pm Link

Photographer

Visual Creations LV

Posts: 72

Las Vegas, Nevada, US

Please let me know

Aug 21 13 02:04 pm Link

Photographer

Thatchers Fine Art

Posts: 1265

Fort Worth, Texas, US

Azia Rose wrote:
yes!!

Best - Love the comp on this one! Great hair and super sexy top!!
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130621/10/51c4925d3dfac_m.jpg

Worst - Cute, I just think the one next to it is stronger.
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130612/10/51b8ad09882ce_m.jpg

Aug 21 13 03:39 pm Link

Photographer

Thatchers Fine Art

Posts: 1265

Fort Worth, Texas, US

HO Photo wrote:
Sure!

Best - So sexy!! Great BW!! Nice comp and model!!!
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130331/23/51592b37aee2f_m.jpg

Best 2 - Great model and shot!
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120606/22/4fd03968e5293_m.jpg

Worst - I do like the shot... I just wish she had a bit more light on her face.
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130711/08/51dec8f7445bc_m.jpg

Aug 21 13 03:45 pm Link

Photographer

Thatchers Fine Art

Posts: 1265

Fort Worth, Texas, US

Nicolette wrote:
smile

Best - Love the light!! Very sexy strip shot too!!
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/27174786 18+

Worst - I would like to see more light on you for this and not being able to see your face does not help it either. There is also a clash of styles here.
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/111022/14/4ea33a6648d21_m.jpg

Aug 21 13 03:51 pm Link

Photographer

Thatchers Fine Art

Posts: 1265

Fort Worth, Texas, US

Adam J Caldwell wrote:
fire away buddy

Best - I want about 20 of these for my office!! Ha!! Love the model! Who is it?? I can't say enough great things about this shot!! Move it up!!!!!
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/32909612 18+

Worst - Just my least fav.
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130715/12/51e452d143ac9_m.jpg

Aug 21 13 03:54 pm Link

Photographer

Thatchers Fine Art

Posts: 1265

Fort Worth, Texas, US

E L I N wrote:
big_smile

Best - Nice comp and cool reflections!! Sexy too!!!
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130820/18/52141193a72b5_m.jpg

Worst - I don't think it does much for your port.
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/33243877 18+

Aug 21 13 03:57 pm Link

Photographer

Thatchers Fine Art

Posts: 1265

Fort Worth, Texas, US

Visual Creations LV wrote:
Please let me know

Best - Nice!! Great comp and light work!
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130622/10/51c5e4bd4c9e9_m.jpg

Worst 1 - Just one of my least favs. I think seeing more curve in the small of her back would help.
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130622/11/51c5e8196408b_m.jpg

Worst 2 - Sexy model... the legs are foreshortened in this shot and it makes them look strange to me.
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130505/17/5186fb03a38c7_m.jpg

Aug 21 13 04:03 pm Link

Model

TaylerMcKenzie

Posts: 78

Scottsdale, Arizona, US

Please let me know why on my best and worse so I can improve

Aug 21 13 04:16 pm Link

Photographer

Adam J Caldwell

Posts: 290

London, England, United Kingdom

Thatcher Photography wrote:

Best - I want about 20 of these for my office!! Ha!! Love the model! Who is it?? I can't say enough great things about this shot!! Move it up!!!!!
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/32909612 18+

Worst - Just my least fav.
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130715/12/51e452d143ac9_m.jpg

The model is Darling (2236845)

Thanks man!

Aug 22 13 12:56 am Link

Photographer

Lamont W Photography

Posts: 8

Kingsland, Georgia, US

I'm down to hear what you got for me!

Aug 22 13 01:21 am Link

Model

Skyler Bleu

Posts: 527

San Jose, California, US

I'm in! I would love to know my best/worst. I'm waiting on pics from 4 photoshoots and have to replace my worst pictures! Thanks

Aug 22 13 09:16 am Link

Photographer

Gran Via 536

Posts: 343

Barcelona, Catalonia, Spain

Please do me, if you have time

Aug 23 13 04:47 am Link

Photographer

Mecia G Photography

Posts: 31

Addlestone, England, United Kingdom

Would love to know your opinion.

Aug 23 13 08:57 am Link

Photographer

Thatchers Fine Art

Posts: 1265

Fort Worth, Texas, US

TaylerMcKenzie wrote:
Please let me know why on my best and worse so I can improve

Best - Great pose - sexy style!! I would have stood you up and done a 3/4 crop on this to help keep it from bunching up on the bottom. Also, a lot more mood would help this image out a great deal. You have a casual facial expression with a style that requires a ton of confidence and sexy attitude to complete the look/shot.
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130810/21/52071a287ff8f_m.jpg

Worst - The style is very sexy - Your bra is amazing on you! - I would not have unbuttoned your pants for this pose. Save that for the strip tease style shoot. I also don't like selective color for most shots. I feel the bike having all the color takes away from you. It also does not make sense for a bike to be in this shot. If you had to use a bike, I would have gone to a nice trail this way the background would tie in to the story you are trying to show.
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130722/05/51ed290574a0d_m.jpg

Good job on getting out of the "one mood" portfolio! Your top row shows off that you can create several different moods. Keep that up! Also, try to line up a HS, MUA, and better photographers for you next shoots. It will move you up very quickly once you get some AWESOME work in your port! Let me know if you are ever in the DFW area. I will help you out.

Aug 26 13 10:26 am Link

Photographer

Thatchers Fine Art

Posts: 1265

Fort Worth, Texas, US

V I V I D wrote:
I'm down to hear what you got for me!

Best - Great comp and model. Nice style work too!
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120621/16/4fe3b4c670b8f_m.jpg

Worst - Try to keep the feet in the shot so you show the whole look on full body shots. The model needed to keep her left are up on the knee or leg to help show off her figure with a bit of a window in her pose. There is also to much open space above your model. I would either crop it or frame shots like this with your model higher in the frame. I would also brighten this shot up to show her off better.
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120630/13/4fef66258f046_m.jpg

Worst 2 - Not your fault!! Great camera work and location! The model chose a pose that makes her look like she lost her legs in an accident.
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120831/21/50418f6070a6d_m.jpg

Aug 26 13 10:36 am Link

Photographer

Thatchers Fine Art

Posts: 1265

Fort Worth, Texas, US

Skyler Bleu wrote:
I'm in! I would love to know my best/worst. I'm waiting on pics from 4 photoshoots and have to replace my worst pictures! Thanks

Best - Great pose and style! Try to match your mood with the look and location. I would like to see a flirty happy confident mood for this one.
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130803/14/51fd71d99f527_m.jpg

Worst - Way to much post work on this shot - you are beautiful and you don't need to be worked over in PS like this. Also, your hand on the wall does not help this one out. It is in a position that does not make sense for this comp and being on white makes it more strange.
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130814/18/520c34fed9465_m.jpg

Worst 2 - Great shot... The only problem is the pose of your hand. It is very forced/unnatural. Finding natural positions for your hands can be very tricky.
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130801/15/51fadeee23b41_m.jpg

Aug 26 13 10:46 am Link

Photographer

Thatchers Fine Art

Posts: 1265

Fort Worth, Texas, US

Gran Via 536 wrote:
Please do me, if you have time

Best - Great model and comp on both of these! Nice light and location too.
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130818/10/52110862759d1_m.jpg

Worst - I don't' think this one helps out your port much.
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130818/10/5211097ac8171_m.jpg

Aug 26 13 10:49 am Link

Photographer

Thatchers Fine Art

Posts: 1265

Fort Worth, Texas, US

Mecia G Photography wrote:
Would love to know your opinion.

Best - Great model comp and post work! Love the tones!!!
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130808/15/520415cc5b6b7_m.jpg

Worst - To much forehand on this shot. Great mood from your model though!
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120623/13/4fe626dc2e85d_m.jpg

Aug 26 13 10:51 am Link

Model

Meghan Congdon

Posts: 706

Austin, Texas, US

Your images are wonderful!

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130506/15/5188309ca02ba_m.jpg

This one isn't quite on par with the rest, although that's only my opinion.

smile

Aug 26 13 11:50 am Link

Model

Thomas1990

Posts: 6

Newcastle upon Tyne, England, United Kingdom

Yes! Let me know

Aug 26 13 12:33 pm Link

Photographer

Gamma Photography

Posts: 232

Ottawa, Ontario, Canada

I'm always keen to know what I'm doing wrong: Let 'er rip smile

Aug 26 13 05:44 pm Link

Model

Aftan Noon

Posts: 25

Dallas, Texas, US

Go for it!

Aug 26 13 09:26 pm Link

Model

no mayhem

Posts: 12

Albany, New York, US

take a look!

Aug 27 13 01:26 pm Link

Model

Madeline Model

Posts: 11

New York, New York, US

I'd love to know! And know the reasoning?

Aug 27 13 05:25 pm Link