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The WJ Image

Posts: 32

Raleigh, North Carolina, US

I have been shooting for a while now and I am still shooting a lot of TFP. First can I get some feed back on my work...good bad and ugly is welcome. Second would you say my work warrants me limiting my TFP and increasing my paid work.

Oct 05 12 07:33 pm Link

Photographer

Robert Jewett

Posts: 2463

al-Marsā, Tunis, Tunisia

I see some strong elements in your work.

However, it's kind of all over the place, and I don't see a consistent look or even a consistent level of quality.

I can't tell from your profile/portfolio who you are, what you bring to the table or why I should shoot with you if I was a model (let alone pay you).

Personally, I'd narrow it down to the best 5 images, pay 5 more top models from your area, and exhibit nothing but strengths in your portfolio.

Oct 06 12 02:40 am Link

Photographer

dave phoenix

Posts: 1300

Phoenix, Arizona, US

which one of these do you think is good, and which one is bad?

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121005/18/506f8b46d15ef_m.jpg http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/091106/10/4af46bc568658_m.jpg

Oct 08 12 02:13 am Link

Photographer

Lee_Photography

Posts: 8850

Minneapolis, Minnesota, US

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/090427/17/49f64a944571e_m.jpg
Loose the logo
One of your better images

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/091101/08/4aedb3f48a9c5_m.jpg
Model too centered in photograph
Solid green grass not dirt for the background

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/091106/10/4af4691c242f2_m.jpg
Move away from the wall
Do not cut off the finger tips

Oct 08 12 10:05 am Link