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Photographer

Georgia Models

Posts: 18

Atlanta, Georgia, US

Oct 06 12 02:55 pm Link

Photographer

Mark

Posts: 2893

New York, New York, US

I don't think this is a very good shot- busy back ground and distracting couch.If you shot more looking down it would be better as it stands now - arent his eyes out of focus?  The jeans area is too prominent- were you trying for some kind of play girl shot?  Then maybe a hand on his belt,  The light is too flat as well.  There is no mystery in the pic- perhaps with some indirect lighting you would get some interesting shadows.

might have been better to shoot on a bed with some crumpled plain sheets

Oct 06 12 05:17 pm Link

Model

Cole Morrison

Posts: 3958

Portland, Oregon, US

Nothing special, unique, or memorable about it.

Oct 07 12 10:02 am Link

Photographer

dave phoenix

Posts: 1300

Phoenix, Arizona, US

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121006/14/50709f4658365_m.jpg

not flattering, sorry

Oct 08 12 03:13 am Link