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Model

Winnie L

Posts: 5867

Singapore, Singapore, Singapore

Love opinion on them please. smile

1
https://lh4.googleusercontent.com/-J4puGhv46Yc/UHKXHexQkeI/AAAAAAAAFMU/Xh6uBqXwodA/s720/palor4.jpg

2
https://lh6.googleusercontent.com/-VyfV6xCJSPY/UHKWwSRGbiI/AAAAAAAAFL8/RrCe6848puY/s512/palor3.jpg

3
https://lh4.googleusercontent.com/-n7KnCRj-tJ0/UHKWwxIqNmI/AAAAAAAAFME/CjnH1haETi8/s512/palor1.jpg

4

https://lh4.googleusercontent.com/-ulG8vkdKdi0/UHKXLA-N1fI/AAAAAAAAFMk/qgPKKZW1nIs/s512/palor2.jpg

and my avi big_smile

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pi … 0#30203860

All opinions welcome. Was thinking of adding one more to my portfolio, but not sure which.

Thanks!

Oct 08 12 02:09 am Link

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Model

Anna Adrielle

Posts: 18763

Antwerp, Antwerp, Belgium

totally love number 2!!

EDIT and the avi as well smile

Oct 08 12 02:10 am Link

Model

Victoria Gevorkov

Posts: 94

Kansas City, Missouri, US

NUMBER 2 - love love love

Oct 08 12 02:12 am Link

Model

Winnie L

Posts: 5867

Singapore, Singapore, Singapore

Thank you! I was digging 2 as well.

Oct 08 12 02:15 am Link

Photographer

dave phoenix

Posts: 1300

Phoenix, Arizona, US

i like 2, and 1 is not terrible either.

i'd suggest you be more intentional with your facial expressions, and try to make both hands visible.

i think 2 would be better if your hair was behind your shoulders so we could see more of what you're wearing, and it'd be nice to see your hidden hand, too.

Oct 08 12 02:51 am Link

Model

Winnie L

Posts: 5867

Singapore, Singapore, Singapore

dave phoenix wrote:
i like 2, and 1 is not terrible either.

i'd suggest you be more intentional with your facial expressions, and try to make both hands visible.

i think 2 would be better if your hair was behind your shoulders so we could see more of what you're wearing, and it'd be nice to see your hidden hand, too.

thank you smile I agree the hand should be shown more. And my expression too.

Oct 08 12 05:29 am Link

Photographer

Shirley Zhong

Posts: 2156

Singapore, Singapore, Singapore

1. I'm not very fond of it, due to how your neck is disappearing into your body.

Oct 08 12 07:16 am Link

Model

C A T H Y

Posts: 5464

Anaheim, California, US

love #2!! smile

Oct 08 12 10:57 am Link

Model

Winnie L

Posts: 5867

Singapore, Singapore, Singapore

Thanks all.

I have eh, another picture I got back that I was thinking of adding or replacing something else in my portfolio. Can anyone be so kind as to help? Thought that I need more casual looking looks.

https://lh3.googleusercontent.com/-TW9- … n09sml.jpg

Oct 08 12 09:13 pm Link

Photographer

Dannielle Levan

Posts: 12857

New Westminster, British Columbia, Canada

I love 1 & 2, but you need more strength and intensity in your expressions and poses.

Oct 08 12 10:56 pm Link