Forums > Critique > New Photos in "Unassigned" Album. your thoughts?

Model

Tris C

Posts: 12

Newport, Rhode Island, US

hi everyone, i just added some new photos to my port in the "unassigned" album and was wondering if i could get your thoughts on them... the newest ones are the 3 on the right of the top row and the 3rd photo from the left in the 3rd row. thank you smile

Oct 08 12 01:36 pm Link

Model

Tris C

Posts: 12

Newport, Rhode Island, US

also NEW AVI

Oct 08 12 01:36 pm Link

Photographer

Lee_Photography

Posts: 8831

Minneapolis, Minnesota, US

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121008/12/5073308b3cc48_m.jpg
Nice eyes
Looks like a stick sticking out of the right side of your head
Missing most of models left wrist


http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121008/13/50733102a5e22_m.jpg
Best not to show whites of eyes to camera
Placing the arms behind is not a positive model pose

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121008/13/507330ff91460_m.jpg
Skin looks over processed
Model has locked her right leg

Oct 08 12 05:41 pm Link

Photographer

The Effective Image

Posts: 3943

Lansing, Michigan, US

"just added some new photos to my port in the "unassigned" album"

Hmmm... there is NO 'unassigned' album. Forget to add it?

EDIT: Oh, you probably mean in the 'Tris C's photos' area.

The avatar image has two issues.

The first is that bright spot just to the left of your face. Unfortunately, that bright spot pulls the viewer's eye off your face and what do they see... a branch coming out of your head! A little Photoshop effort can easily remedy both problems.

The cut arm doesn't bother me that much... your face is what I'm looking at... not the arm. Woulda been nice to see your right thumb though.

Oct 08 12 06:16 pm Link