for each of these three categories: (total of 3 ratings :])
Relevance of photos in regards to my goals (getting signed to a commercial/print agency/getting paid work) (1-10)
Overall appeal and uniqueness of the concepts/images (1-10)
MY look (1-10)
Any written critiques and suggestions are more than welcome!
Oct 08 12 11:15 pm Link
Minneapolis, Minnesota, US
Logos across a model are never a good thing
This is a better image from your port but it has some issues
Model appears to have no neck, lower shoulders
Show your eyes, point nose at camera
Over all hair looks messy
Nice feel, but awkward cropping of your arms, if you show your elbows include the hands
Glare is washing out your hair
Crazy distracting thing upper left corner of photo
Best image in portfolio, but top of eyes are in shadow
Great work on your part
Wish you success!
Oct 09 12 05:02 am Link
Catskill, New York, US
Overall I like your work. Great variety, nice versatility.
I agree with the watermark. Stand out like a sore thumb and ruins the image.
Additionally, I don't get this picture.
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pi … 0#23728720
It's very colorful but there's no depth and it's a little over saturated.
Oct 09 12 06:34 am Link
Oct 09 12 11:40 am Link
Very helpful, thanks so much!
Aaron Lewis Photography wrote:
Oct 09 12 11:41 am Link