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Joshua MacNeal

Posts: 6

Glen Ellyn, Illinois, US


I'm a fine art photographer but I blend fashion into my work too. I would like an honest critique, which images you like or dislike, and where you think I should go with my work.

Oct 13 12 04:32 pm Link



Posts: 9749

Minneapolis, Minnesota, US
You seem to compose with too much space above the models head
This is a very busy background

Wish you continued success

Oct 13 12 05:40 pm Link


DVP Photography

Posts: 2874

Broomfield, Colorado, US

My critique is don't ask for so many multiple critiques... three threads so far.  Makes me dizzy.

Oct 15 12 09:54 pm Link


David Kirk

Posts: 4820

Ottawa, Ontario, Canada

You have only one image which appeals to me:

So, for me I would say more like this and less of the others.

Oct 15 12 10:11 pm Link



Posts: 189

Fort Worth, Texas, US

Most of the works don't connect with me ... even on the basis of "art".  The BWs dont have a strong tonal range (they could be kinda hot) take a look at the "zone system"  and see if that improves your vision.

Oct 21 12 06:35 am Link