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Photographer

Joshua MacNeal

Posts: 6

Glen Ellyn, Illinois, US

Hi,

I'm a fine art photographer but I blend fashion into my work too. I would like an honest critique, which images you like or dislike, and where you think I should go with my work.

Oct 13 12 04:32 pm Link

Photographer

Lee_Photography

Posts: 8828

Minneapolis, Minnesota, US

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121010/10/5075b1e6d02a3_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121010/10/5075b12bb3c8a_m.jpg
You seem to compose with too much space above the models head

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121010/10/5075b37debfa4_m.jpg
This is a very busy background

Wish you continued success

Oct 13 12 05:40 pm Link

Photographer

DVP Photography

Posts: 2862

Broomfield, Colorado, US

My critique is don't ask for so many multiple critiques... three threads so far.  Makes me dizzy.

Oct 15 12 09:54 pm Link

Photographer

David Kirk

Posts: 4501

Ottawa, Ontario, Canada

You have only one image which appeals to me:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121010/10/5075b1e6d02a3_m.jpg

So, for me I would say more like this and less of the others.

Oct 15 12 10:11 pm Link

Photographer

ImageFusionStudio

Posts: 189

Fort Worth, Texas, US

Most of the works don't connect with me ... even on the basis of "art".  The BWs dont have a strong tonal range (they could be kinda hot) take a look at the "zone system"  and see if that improves your vision.

Oct 21 12 06:35 am Link