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SugarSharai photography

Posts: 387

Edmonton, Alberta, Canada

Anything im missing?

Is my bio professional and informative? Is it lacking, or too much?

Are my shots well chosen and organized?

How can i IMPROVE as a model?

Oct 17 12 03:36 pm Link

Photographer

Orca Bay Images

Posts: 32234

Woodinville, Washington, US

For starters, get your email address and phone# out of your profile. Give that info out by request only.

~*~BOUNDARIES~*~

I will not be showing my "flower"  in Any of my shoots, it must be concealed by editing, shadows, angle, pose etc.
I like to keep a portion of my innocence in my portfolio/art.
i will only be doing nude shoots for my rates. I will however do TF nudes on rare occasaions!  Msg me for details.

Flower? You kidding? Refer to it as genitalia and leave it at that. "Flower" - totally unprofessional. This whole section is unprofessional. It suggests a nervous little hobby-model.

You want to maintain your innocence, but you'll give it up for money. But you'll also give it up for TF. I forsee shoot negotiations being a pain in the ass.



Edit: Seeing how this thread has progressed and how the OP has accepted hard advice with a surprising degree of grace, my opinion of and respect for this young model has skyrocketed.

Oct 17 12 05:48 pm Link

Photographer

Digitoxin

Posts: 13345

Houston, Texas, US

Sugar Sharai wrote:
Anything im missing?

Is my bio professional and informative? Is it lacking, or too much?

Are my shots well chosen and organized?

How can i IMPROVE as a model?

You have some very nice images in there but they are lost in the noise of the rest of them.  You should prune this book back to about 8-10 killer images (you some).

That said, your book presents you well.  If you were in Atlanta, I would want to talk to you about a shoot.  You can build a better book though if you cut.

Oct 17 12 06:16 pm Link

Photographer

The F-Stop

Posts: 1510

New York, New York, US

Edit your profile n get rid of your phone number and/or your e-mail address unless it is set up just for this.

.

Oct 17 12 07:04 pm Link

Photographer

SugarSharai photography

Posts: 387

Edmonton, Alberta, Canada

Ok guys took out lots more photos, edite my bio, got rid of my number, kept llamaling email,   What can i improve on NOW?

Oct 18 12 07:09 am Link

Photographer

sospix

Posts: 21391

Orlando, Florida, US

Hmmmmmm. what can you do to improve your port  .  .  .  howabout comin' ta Florida, and shootin' with "SOS"  .  .  .  wink  Just keep adding variety, and quality, you're headed in the right direction  .  .  .

SOS

Oct 18 12 07:49 am Link

Photographer

SugarSharai photography

Posts: 387

Edmonton, Alberta, Canada

sospix wrote:
Hmmmmmm. what can you do to improve your port  .  .  .  howabout comin' ta Florida, and shootin' with "SOS"  .  .  .  wink  Just keep adding variety, and quality, you're headed in the right direction  .  .  .

SOS

Thank you!!! smile keep in touch! Im considering colaborations worldwide in a year or two!

Oct 18 12 07:59 am Link

Photographer

sospix

Posts: 21391

Orlando, Florida, US

Sugar Sharai wrote:

Thank you!!! smile keep in touch! Im considering colaborations worldwide in a year or two!

You've got an open invite to shoot  .  .  .  just lemme know when you're headed this way  .  .  .

SOS

Oct 18 12 08:00 am Link

Photographer

SugarSharai photography

Posts: 387

Edmonton, Alberta, Canada

sospix wrote:

You've got an open invite to shoot  .  .  .  just lemme know when you're headed this way  .  .  .

SOS

Your the first on my list !! Youll be the first to know! wink

Oct 18 12 08:06 am Link

Photographer

MedievalIce

Posts: 223

Ithaca, New York, US

My opinion (for whatever it's worth), I would move this line further down in your bio, or remove it all together.  It comes off as hostile or argumentative from the beginning:

******** NOT INTERESTED IN EROTIC, PROVOCATIVE, FETISH, BONDAGE ART.****

I would soften this line a bit:

I will not be showing my genitalia in Any of my shoots, it must be concealed by editing, shadows, angle, pose etc.

Perhaps, "I'm not comfortable showing..."

This line is a huge turn off for me:

***i will only be doing nude shoots for my rates. I will however do TF nudes on rare occasions that benefit my portfolio!  Msg me for details. ***

partially because of the implications of "stripper rates" but also because the whole phrase is contradictory.  Also, my feeling is that it should go without saying that you wouldn't be willing to trade for something you don't feel would benefit your port (nude or not).  Perhaps you could say something like you're really selective about who you will trade for nude work.

Finally, go through your bio and clean up some small English details/typos. 

It looks like you're off to a good start, and best of luck!

Oct 18 12 08:09 am Link

Photographer

DAN CRUIKSHANK

Posts: 1786

Vancouver, British Columbia, Canada

I agree with the advice above regarding your profile. I like a concise, inviting profile.

As for your pics. You have some good ones! There were only two that really stuck out in a negative way.

This lacks a professional finish, and the lighting is harsh and uneven.
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120913/15/50525e7c652c8_m.jpg

And then the pic of the high heel in pulling on the thong. It's a cliche boudoir pose, and I don't like how your face is out of focus.

I would start by ditching those, and try to keep only the best as you move forward.

And I hope you give me a shout next time you are in Calgary because I would love to work with you smile

Oct 18 12 08:28 am Link

Photographer

M Pandolfo Photography

Posts: 12116

Tampa, Florida, US

I am interested in creative/artistic concepts, studio fashion, glamour and select artistic nude. I am adept at fluid posing.

Residing in Edmonton, Alberta but available for travel throughout BC.

I will accept alternate compensation - gas/gift cards, tear sheets, clothing, makeup in lieu of payment. Just ask.

LOCATIONS I TRAVEL OFTEN
-Alberta
-Calgary
-Red deer
-Fort Saskatchewan
-Jasper
-British Columbia

CONTACT INFO

*Facebook
http://www.facebook.com/pages/Sarah-thi

Message me for email

BODY MODIFICATIONS

*Naval Piercing
*Tongue Piercing
*Tattoo - Small Playboy Bunny on hip

*Please Note*

I am not interested in erotic or fetish work nor am I comfortable with full exposure of genitalia during nude shoots. I do require compensation for nude shoots.

/end

Notes:

(There's no reason to say you have a worldwide tour planned for 2015. I'm guessing it's something you want to do but haven't really planned. And not only does nobody care about something ANYBODY is doing 3 years down the road, it gives a negative impression).

That entire line about charging for nude then the fact that you'll do TF IF should be removed. You're saying you charge for nude but won't charge if the photographer is any good (implying if you quote a photographer your rates, you think the photographer sucks). Either say you charge for nude shoots or say "Select TF* only."

Remove your phone number and email (even if it only used for modeling. Especially if it's only used for modeling...to prevent scams.

There's no reason to list every location within BC you travel. Just list "BC" and let the photographer contact you about specific locations.

Remove the exclamation points - It's a modeling networking community, not an 8th grade yearbook quote.

As for your portfolio - remove all the old snapshots. They are all over the place and really bring down your recent work. They also look nothing like you in your recent images so I have to wonder how long ago they were taken. You look a lot younger in several of them. You also have 4 images of you in the jeans outfit...pick the best and use only one.

Oct 18 12 08:44 am Link

Photographer

Orca Bay Images

Posts: 32234

Woodinville, Washington, US

Portfolio...

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120727/09/5012c70cde4f2_m.jpg
I've suggested in prior feedback thread[s] that you remove this image. It's totally worthless for a model's portfolio. In the glare of the low sun, you barely register in this image.

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121010/19/507634e8ca08e_m.jpg
This isn't doing you any favors, either. Shots that do a better job of obscuring you than of showing you off are doing you a disservice. This might be suitable for a photographer's portfolio, but it's definitely not for a model's port.

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120913/15/505261ae6d2ad_m.jpg
Your port would gain by removal of this image, too, IMO. Big cheesy grin just doesn't look professional.

Heel hooked into the panties: cliche and poorly shot at that. Delete.


http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120913/15/505263f5df8bd_m.jpg
Love, love, LOVE this pose and expression. Too bad one foot's partially cut off, but the rest of you in this image I adore.

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30240266 18+
I wished this were a 4x6 landscape with all of you in the image, but what's there I like. IMO, your strongest nude work.

Oct 18 12 11:47 am Link

Photographer

SugarSharai photography

Posts: 387

Edmonton, Alberta, Canada

Oct 19 12 08:44 am Link

Photographer

SugarSharai photography

Posts: 387

Edmonton, Alberta, Canada

Oct 19 12 08:45 am Link

Photographer

SugarSharai photography

Posts: 387

Edmonton, Alberta, Canada

Oct 19 12 08:45 am Link

Photographer

SugarSharai photography

Posts: 387

Edmonton, Alberta, Canada

Orca Bay Images wrote:
Portfolio...

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120727/09/5012c70cde4f2_m.jpg
I've suggested in prior feedback thread[s] that you remove this image. It's totally worthless for a model's portfolio. In the glare of the low sun, you barely register in this image.

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121010/19/507634e8ca08e_m.jpg
This isn't doing you any favors, either. Shots that do a better job of obscuring you than of showing you off are doing you a disservice. This might be suitable for a photographer's portfolio, but it's definitely not for a model's port.

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120913/15/505261ae6d2ad_m.jpg
Your port would gain by removal of this image, too, IMO. Big cheesy grin just doesn't look professional.

Heel hooked into the panties: cliche and poorly shot at that. Delete.


http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120913/15/505263f5df8bd_m.jpg
Love, love, LOVE this pose and expression. Too bad one foot's partially cut off, but the rest of you in this image I adore.

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30240266 18+
I wished this were a 4x6 landscape with all of you in the image, but what's there I like. IMO, your strongest nude work.

Thanks for that! Yes some photos are 2 years old.    I didnt realize it was that important to have EVERY photo less then a year old... If thats the case, i wont have many photos!!! Ive only done 3 shoots this year, all of which all photos are up.

As for cheesy grin, im not a sensitive person, but i do take slight offence to that, as that was actually taken off gaurd while i was giggling, but it is a rather old photo i agree its a bit weak but it displays my true smile, i didnt realize it was cheesy, but i suppose most dont need giant laughing expressions in photos!

Also, i will edit my bio as well! I agree that there is too much written, and ill make that shorter and fine tuned tonight!  I wish i could have taken a lot of these photos myself, as i would have not cropped the shots out... Im STILL waiting to get some of the better shots from my more recent nude photoshoots... Both photographers are being extremely delayed. (Purposefully im sure, as theres always excuses as to why they couldnt supply me with more useful photos)


One random question, can you ASK to have certain shots ONLY? I mean i know it doesnt mean i will get them, but lately i havent been recieving the more useful portfolio shots, from these photographers that actually DO take decent useful shots!! Its rather frustrating when trying to improve and having lack of availability to continue shooting more and more.

Sorry for the rant! Thanks guys!!!! Wonderful impute! Ill be honest i agree with all of it!

Oct 19 12 08:45 am Link

Photographer

Supermodel Photographer

Posts: 3309

Oyster Bay, New York, US

Sugar Sharai wrote:
Is my bio professional and informative?

Not with this beginning, which tends to deplete readers' patience and consequently make them give up on you:

"******** NOT INTERESTED IN EROTIC, PROVOCATIVE, FETISH, BONDAGE ART.****"

Oct 19 12 08:55 am Link

Photographer

LA StarShooter

Posts: 1873

Los Angeles, California, US

As others have written, take out that banner of "not interested . . . erotic. . ." etc.

The profile is fine. Substitute world tour planned, rather than 2015. As someone else pointed out that is too far away a date to make an impact or stir interest.

The profile is fine, as it now reads, except for that banner.

Your portfolio: I saw only one shot that made me curious, a profile of you, done by some unknown and unsung Canadian. I have yet to look at your nudes but you and the photographers you have been working with may just not have had good luck: technical issues ruining the best angles and poses. It happens.

I wish you luck.

Oct 19 12 09:11 am Link

Photographer

SugarSharai photography

Posts: 387

Edmonton, Alberta, Canada

Michael Pandolfo wrote:
I am interested in creative/artistic concepts, studio fashion, glamour and select artistic nude. I am adept at fluid posing.

Residing in Edmonton, Alberta but available for travel throughout BC.

I will accept alternate compensation - gas/gift cards, tear sheets, clothing, makeup in lieu of payment. Just ask.

LOCATIONS I TRAVEL OFTEN
-Alberta
-Calgary
-Red deer
-Fort Saskatchewan
-Jasper
-British Columbia

CONTACT INFO

*Facebook
http://www.facebook.com/pages/Sarah-thi

Message me for email

BODY MODIFICATIONS

*Naval Piercing
*Tongue Piercing
*Tattoo - Small Playboy Bunny on hip

*Please Note*

I am not interested in erotic or fetish work nor am I comfortable with full exposure of genitalia during nude shoots. I do require compensation for nude shoots.

/end

Notes:

(There's no reason to say you have a worldwide tour planned for 2015. I'm guessing it's something you want to do but haven't really planned. And not only does nobody care about something ANYBODY is doing 3 years down the road, it gives a negative impression).

That entire line about charging for nude then the fact that you'll do TF IF should be removed. You're saying you charge for nude but won't charge if the photographer is any good (implying if you quote a photographer your rates, you think the photographer sucks). Either say you charge for nude shoots or say "Select TF* only."

Remove your phone number and email (even if it only used for modeling. Especially if it's only used for modeling...to prevent scams.

There's no reason to list every location within BC you travel. Just list "BC" and let the photographer contact you about specific locations.

Remove the exclamation points - It's a modeling networking community, not an 8th grade yearbook quote.

As for your portfolio - remove all the old snapshots. They are all over the place and really bring down your recent work. They also look nothing like you in your recent images so I have to wonder how long ago they were taken. You look a lot younger in several of them. You also have 4 images of you in the jeans outfit...pick the best and use only one.

Awesome advice!! Used it all!!! What photos do i get rid of now?!! I cant decide of the bodyscape figure nudes, and the headshots, and my jeans shots... But i limited it!! I feel like its lacking now though!! Is that just me?

Oct 19 12 10:49 am Link

Photographer

Orca Bay Images

Posts: 32234

Woodinville, Washington, US

Sugar Sharai wrote:
As for cheesy grin, im not a sensitive person, but i do take slight offence to that, as that was actually taken off gaurd while i was giggling, but it is a rather old photo i agree its a bit weak but it displays my true smile, i didnt realize it was cheesy, but i suppose most dont need giant laughing expressions in photos!

Personally, I'd far rather see a portfolio contain a big laugh than a grin. That grin might have been spontaneous to you, but it doesn't look that way to me.

One random question, can you ASK to have certain shots ONLY? I mean i know it doesnt mean i will get them, but lately i havent been recieving the more useful portfolio shots, from these photographers that actually DO take decent useful shots!! Its rather frustrating when trying to improve and having lack of availability to continue shooting more and more.

If you're shooting TF, you have an inherent right to get shots that benefit your portfolio. That doesn't mean that you'll shoot *only* shots for your benefit. It just means that you'll likely be shooting some stuff for the photographer's benefit and some other stuff for yours.

Some photographers shoot only what will benefit their port and give the model only those. If you're not getting useful shots, talk it over with the photographer (preferably in advance, not after the fact). If the photographer gets defensive or just refuses to accomodate your port's needs, find another photographer.

Oct 19 12 01:50 pm Link

Photographer

Mark

Posts: 2893

New York, New York, US

WHAT?? you got rid of that pic in the ruffled white skirt?  I really like that photographer and he makes you look quite damn good in nude pics 2,3 especially 3 with the vest on. 

More nudes- your body is your money maker.

No the pics are well selected.- that black hat-last pic?? You arent doing anything in it, that huge over whelming dress that makes you look fat in the woods, etc

Oct 20 12 12:45 am Link

Photographer

David Kirk

Posts: 4502

Ottawa, Ontario, Canada

Your profile/bio is concise and to the point.  Lots of info without any extra fluff - I like that.

You list your hair colour as blonde and have images which show you with both light and dark hair.  You might think about adding something to your profile to indicate which is the case at the moment - a quick snapshot on the profile page (or reference to a portfolio photo) which has your current hairstyle, colour and length would be good.

I know that lots of people include Facebook links.  I never use them.  If there is some pertinent information on your facebook page that I ought to know if I want to work with you then place it on your bio page.

You say you are interested in creative/artistic concepts, studio fashion etc.  It would be helpful to have a list of photos labelled similarly as these descriptions can be very broad.  I have no idea what you consider as creative or artistic.  The lists you have currently don't really help especially one of them has over 400 photos.  A short list of "stuff I'm looking to shoot" with 10-20 photos would be a great help for photographers.

In terms of photos, you seem to have a real mixed bag in terms of both style and quality.  There is also some repetition which you could eliminate. 

The three silhouette-like nudes are different, but similar.  I recommend including just one or two of them.

I think this is one of your better photos (very eye catching) and it is near the end of your portfolio.  I would move it up to the top.
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120913/15/5052636849e50_m.jpg

I would get rid of this one.  It is similar to the one beside it, but inferior.
18+  http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30240267

In fact, I would recommend you cut your portfolio down to the following:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120913/15/5052636849e50_m.jpg

18+   http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30240266

18+  http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30062719


http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120913/15/505264d672260_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120813/13/50296435acdc3_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120913/15/505263f5df8bd_m.jpg


I hope that's helpful.

Oct 20 12 07:07 am Link

Photographer

OmnyRa

Posts: 1029

Indianapolis, Indiana, US

This image should go.
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120921/04/505c4c7325f62_m.jpg

The post-production on the skin is bad (splotchy), and the eyebrow and lashes that were sharpened almost look as if they were pasted on afterward. Overall, it's not horrible and is eye-catching, as all the comments will attest to, but when you get down to the details, it falls short.

Oct 20 12 07:44 am Link

Photographer

M Pandolfo Photography

Posts: 12116

Tampa, Florida, US

Sugar Sharai wrote:
Awesome advice!! Used it all!!! What photos do i get rid of now?!! I cant decide of the bodyscape figure nudes, and the headshots, and my jeans shots... But i limited it!! I feel like its lacking now though!! Is that just me?

Edited bio looks great and I think your revised portfolio is much stronger. I know you're impatient to have better images and that's good but your portfolio has already improved from when you first started by leaps and bounds.

Every new addition should be an upgrade and you've done that so far. Very nice.

Oct 20 12 07:57 am Link

Photographer

B R U N E S C I

Posts: 25319

Bath, England, United Kingdom

MedievalIce wrote:
it should go without saying that you wouldn't be willing to trade for something you don't feel would benefit your port (nude or not).  Perhaps you could say something like you're really selective about who you will trade for nude work.

+1

I'd go further: simply say you will be very selective about trade shoots. Period.

You shoot nudes and (sensibly) you are open to TF nude shoots if they will benefit your portfolio, so in that sense they are no different than clothed shoots.

By reducing and generalising what you say in your profile you will actually give yourself more wiggle room to quote rates or decline altogether without getting into arguments if you don't feel a shoot will benefit you.

Oh, and ditch this. It's cute, but it doesn't add anything of value to your portfolio as a model and only tells me that you can look goofy as well as pretty, which most people can do if they try.

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120913/15/5052640d05f83_m.jpg




Just my $0.02

Ciao
Stefano
www.stefanobrunesci.com

Oct 20 12 08:01 am Link

Photographer

Mark

Posts: 2893

New York, New York, US

-B-R-U-N-E-S-C-I- wrote:

+1

I'd go further: simply say you will be very selective about trade shoots. Period.

You shoot nudes and (sensibly) you are open to TF nude shoots if they will benefit your portfolio, so in that sense they are no different than clothed shoots.

By reducing and generalising what you say in your profile you will actually give yourself more wiggle room to quote rates or decline altogether without getting into arguments if you don't feel a shoot will benefit you.

Oh, and ditch this. It's cute, but it doesn't add anything of value to your portfolio as a model and only tells me that you can look goofy as well as pretty, which most people can do if they try.

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120913/15/5052640d05f83_m.jpg




Just my $0.02

Ciao
Stefano
www.stefanobrunesci.com

yeah that protruding tooth look isnt flattering

Oct 20 12 07:57 pm Link

Photographer

SugarSharai photography

Posts: 387

Edmonton, Alberta, Canada

Ok guys!! Thanks for your honesty!! I got rid of well over 30 shots!! Holy that was a lot of effort!

Im debating on how strong my portfolio is looking now! Im working on fixing my lists, that will take quite some time!! However, as for lack of shots, ive got lots more shoots coming up, so i have lots of room for improvement/better work!

Thanks sooo much!! I needed that!



Hope there isnt any more fine details i missed?! One more look over from some people would still be nice!

Oct 22 12 06:38 am Link

Photographer

shooter 88

Posts: 530

Houston, Texas, US

For a better portfolio, you need to make a trip to Houston, Texas USA
Luv to do a shoot with you down here.

I LIKE what you got in your port so far, PLEASE let me know if you ever down here.

Oct 22 12 06:49 am Link

Photographer

L Bass

Posts: 957

Nacogdoches, Texas, US

I didn't see your profile and port before you started this thread, but what I see now is good. It refreshing to see an 18 year old model actually take advice given to them by (in most, if not all cases) older more experienced players in the modeling game. So many times I've seen 18-22 year olds (young, in general) get all huffy when they ask for advice and then, when given said advice, respond as if they know FAR more than any of the responders. That, to me, is a good sign that you will actually take your time to learn how the modeling industry works, instead of assuming that you know it all, only to realize that you know nothing. Bravo!

I wish you all the best and hope your experience with MM is a good one. There is a LOT to learn and a LOT of hard work in your future as a model. Don't give up, stay safe and keep that positive attitude. It will take you far in this business.

Oct 22 12 08:42 am Link

Photographer

SugarSharai photography

Posts: 387

Edmonton, Alberta, Canada

L Bass wrote:
I didn't see your profile and port before you started this thread, but what I see now is good. It refreshing to see an 18 year old model actually take advice given to them by (in most, if not all cases) older more experienced players in the modeling game. So many times I've seen 18-22 year olds (young, in general) get all huffy when they ask for advice and then, when given said advice, respond as if they know FAR more than any of the responders. That, to me, is a good sign that you will actually take your time to learn how the modeling industry works, instead of assuming that you know it all, only to realize that you know nothing. Bravo!

I wish you all the best and hope your experience with MM is a good one. There is a LOT to learn and a LOT of hard work in your future as a model. Don't give up, stay safe and keep that positive attitude. It will take you far in this business.

Thanks for that !!! I am ALWAYS learning and researching! Brainstorming and networking! And im always willing to take advice from anyone who offers!!

However, i will always remain ME and keep my origionality amongst whats marketable and profitable!   

I like to "think" i have something different to offer then the average models and i will try my best to keep on top, and continually innovate to modern day ways.

Oct 22 12 09:39 am Link

Photographer

Orca Bay Images

Posts: 32234

Woodinville, Washington, US

Your profile and portfolio are much improved... except that this image...
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29919346 18+
is still there. The heel hooked in the panty string is cliche' and the image is poorly executed. But it's gotten a lot of attention which is probably one reason you want to hang onto it, but I'd suggest that should be the next image to be replaced when you get better shots for your port.

Your attitude in this thread has been admirable. You've dealt well with some hard feedback and given up on some bad images you liked. It's refreshing to give advice to someone who actually wants to hear the advice and isn't just looking for fluffy egoboost.

If you're ever in central California, let me know.

Oct 22 12 11:41 am Link

Photographer

SugarSharai photography

Posts: 387

Edmonton, Alberta, Canada

thanks for all of the wonderful comments and help guys!! keep em coming if you notice i missed anything! ( i recently put up a makeup shot, please disregaurd that, its for a forum post!)


always looking to improve my portfolio!

Oct 25 12 04:21 pm Link

Photographer

Mark

Posts: 2893

New York, New York, US

that avatar just misses the mark- your true strength are nudes- so your avatar needs to have much more skin showing not some country gal sitting on the porch waiting for her farm boy to show up

Oct 25 12 06:47 pm Link