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Photographer

Goat Farm Project

Posts: 339

Atlanta, Georgia, US

HEATHER 18 wrote:
Can not pick a to go photo - can pick my Fav smile

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29218663

too sweet!
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120709/18/4ffb8be3cafd9_m.jpg

Jan 02 13 05:53 am Link

Photographer

Goat Farm Project

Posts: 339

Atlanta, Georgia, US

JIOPIX wrote:
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30819630

Weakest for me.

Thx!

Love this one:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120911/00/504ee419cda35_m.jpg

Jan 02 13 05:55 am Link

Photographer

Goat Farm Project

Posts: 339

Atlanta, Georgia, US

_eMMe_ wrote:
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/28888321

For me this is the weakest.

Thanks.  This is awesome!
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121112/04/50a0edcc8a95c_m.jpg

Jan 02 13 05:57 am Link

Photographer

Goat Farm Project

Posts: 339

Atlanta, Georgia, US

HEATHER 18 wrote:
Can not pick a to go photo - can pick my Fav smile

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29218663

This one too:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120508/14/4fa98ecc585f7_m.jpg

Jan 02 13 09:55 am Link

Photographer

Hector Pachas

Posts: 92

Stamford, Connecticut, US

Really liked your images,

though this one looked as if you tried to save it from over exposed and quite didn't work for me.
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121121/07/50acf77004d3d.jpg


Cheers

Jan 02 13 10:05 am Link

Model

Anna Kl

Posts: 189

Toronto, Ontario, Canada

great port, just gets better and better

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/26 … #/30880544

that is my least favourite, awkward lighting and pose
bravo on the rest, especially recent!

Jan 02 13 10:12 am Link

Model

Bobby Alonzo

Posts: 423

San Francisco, California, US

Your port is impressive, but this is probably my least favorite:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121118/19/50a9aa74f0129_m.jpg

The photography is great but the model's expression and pose is enough to bring the entire photo down.

Jan 02 13 10:50 am Link

Photographer

JBerman Photography

Posts: 1113

New York, New York, US

in my opinion, this one needs to go...
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30680120
i'm not fond of the crop.

Jan 02 13 11:03 am Link

Model

Leone P

Posts: 515

Batley, England, United Kingdom

I'm not overly fond of this image:

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121206/07/50c0b6cfe677f_m.jpg

I think there is too much emphasis on the background rather than the model being the focus. I also don't think its quite up to the standard of many of your other images. JMHO.

Leone P. x

Jan 02 13 11:30 am Link

Photographer

JIOPIX

Posts: 1183

Toronto, Ontario, Canada

Goat Farm Project wrote:

Thx!

Love this one:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120911/00/504ee419cda35_m.jpg

Thank you for taking the time to look.

Jan 02 13 01:05 pm Link

Photographer

Steve Wall

Posts: 623

Sydney, New South Wales, Australia

Goat Farm Project wrote:
Which pics have to go?  Tell me straight up and I will LIST your best pic.

Leave a comment on my best and i will list two of yours.

Never liked the guitar as prop. It's become a bit of an MM cliche - not quite caution tape, but on the way. I think you should lose this one and maybe other in the same series
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121118/11/50a93cf00d775_m.jpg

Other than that, love your work

cheers smile
...Steve

Jan 02 13 02:33 pm Link

Photographer

Goat Farm Project

Posts: 339

Atlanta, Georgia, US

Hector Pachas wrote:
Really liked your images,

though this one looked as if you tried to save it from over exposed and quite didn't work for me.
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121121/07/50acf77004d3d.jpg


Cheers

Yep, you're right.  She was so amazing in that window i just tried to force it in the port.  This one is really nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121123/14/50aff51fa8a47_m.jpg

Jan 02 13 05:15 pm Link

Photographer

BYNW

Posts: 438

Oak Harbor, Washington, US

This one seems like her hair and face are just not quite in focus-
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121024/06/5087f1867797e_m.jpg

I left you a comment on this one-
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120620/07/4fe1da26d9582_m.jpg

Jan 02 13 05:17 pm Link

Photographer

Goat Farm Project

Posts: 339

Atlanta, Georgia, US

Anna Kl wrote:
great port, just gets better and better

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/26 … #/30880544

that is my least favourite, awkward lighting and pose
bravo on the rest, especially recent!

Thanks!  This whole scene is amazing:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121215/18/50cd35d57fb9c_m.jpg

Jan 02 13 05:20 pm Link

Photographer

Goat Farm Project

Posts: 339

Atlanta, Georgia, US

Salvador Alonzo wrote:
Your port is impressive, but this is probably my least favorite:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121118/19/50a9aa74f0129_m.jpg

The photography is great but the model's expression and pose is enough to bring the entire photo down.

I agree. One of our first shoots.  Neither one of us knew what we were doing, lol.  It was like the blind leading the blind...

This is my favorite of yours:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120623/18/4fe6678ee70c4_m.jpg

Jan 02 13 05:24 pm Link

Photographer

Goat Farm Project

Posts: 339

Atlanta, Georgia, US

JBerman Photography wrote:
in my opinion, this one needs to go...
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/306 :)80120
i'm not fond of the crop.

Thanks!

This is sick smile  So original.
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121113/10/50a2951b3b5b8_m.jpg

Jan 02 13 05:28 pm Link

Model

Adrienne M Plus

Posts: 194

Philadelphia, Pennsylvania, US

This...http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121121/07/50acf77004d3d_m.jpg
is really beautiful:) I love the model's expression and the softness of the light.


Not a big fan of these..
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121229/06/50def82c682a4_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121130/15/50b93b481c3e7_m.jpg

Jan 02 13 05:28 pm Link

Photographer

Goat Farm Project

Posts: 339

Atlanta, Georgia, US

Leone P wrote:
I'm not overly fond of this image:

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121206/07/50c0b6cfe677f_m.jpg

I think there is too much emphasis on the background rather than the model being the focus. I also don't think its quite up to the standard of many of your other images. JMHO.

Leone P. x

Yep, we need to yank that one.

Love this one - so creative:
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30922013

Jan 02 13 05:30 pm Link

Model

Paige Morgan

Posts: 4058

New York, New York, US

Something about the post work in this one isn't my favorite....a touch too flat/grey:

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121229/06/50def82e70fb1_m.jpg

Jan 02 13 05:34 pm Link

Photographer

Goat Farm Project

Posts: 339

Atlanta, Georgia, US

Steve Wall wrote:

Never liked the guitar as prop. It's become a bit of an MM cliche - not quite caution tape, but on the way. I think you should lose this one and maybe other in the same series
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121118/11/50a93cf00d775_m.jpg

Other than that, love your work

cheers smile
...Steve

Your whole port is just plain cool.  This is awesome:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/080402/06/47f35b252fcb8_m.jpg

Jan 02 13 05:35 pm Link

Photographer

Steve Wall

Posts: 623

Sydney, New South Wales, Australia

Goat Farm Project wrote:

Your whole port is just plain cool.  This is awesome:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/080402/06/47f35b252fcb8_m.jpg

Thanks smile

Jan 02 13 05:36 pm Link

Photographer

Goat Farm Project

Posts: 339

Atlanta, Georgia, US

Steve Wall wrote:

Never liked the guitar as prop. It's become a bit of an MM cliche - not quite caution tape, but on the way. I think you should lose this one and maybe other in the same series
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121118/11/50a93cf00d775_m.jpg

Other than that, love your work

cheers smile
...Steve

Amazing!:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120502/14/4fa1a1ed7eb43_m.jpg

Jan 02 13 05:37 pm Link

Photographer

Goat Farm Project

Posts: 339

Atlanta, Georgia, US

Adrienne M Plus  wrote:
This...http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121121/07/50acf77004d3d_m.jpg
is really beautiful:) I love the model's expression and the softness of the light.


Not a big fan of these..
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121229/06/50def82c682a4_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121130/15/50b93b481c3e7_m.jpg

Thanks!

You have a beautiful smile:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120202/05/4f2a912d9696f_m.jpg

Jan 02 13 05:45 pm Link

Photographer

Goat Farm Project

Posts: 339

Atlanta, Georgia, US

BYNW wrote:
This one seems like her hair and face are just not quite in focus-
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121024/06/5087f1867797e_m.jpg

I left you a comment on this one-
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120620/07/4fe1da26d9582_m.jpg

Yep, Canon 5D Mark II Auto-Focus sux unless i use the Center AF Point.  Sent it back to them twice and it still sux. 

Anyway, this is awesome:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/100707/16/4c350e0721fc5_m.jpg

Jan 02 13 05:48 pm Link

Photographer

Goat Farm Project

Posts: 339

Atlanta, Georgia, US

Paige Morgan wrote:
Something about the post work in this one isn't my favorite....a touch too flat/grey:

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121229/06/50def82e70fb1_m.jpg

Thanks!  This one is my favorite:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120504/05/4fa3d1e51c360_m.jpg

Jan 02 13 05:51 pm Link

Photographer

le fashion

Posts: 14

Orlando, Florida, US

The pose is unflattering to the model
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121206/06/50c0ac06a482a_m.jpg

I am more of a studio fashion person than a glamour outdoors person, so I might be totally wrong but i feel alot of the images have distractions.

Jan 02 13 05:55 pm Link

Photographer

Michael Griffey

Posts: 274

Conyers, Georgia, US

I don't really dislike any one image over another, but I have noticed the same model with several different looks in your port. You port is strong enough to suggest you have a much wider pool to choose from and list. You may want to look in that direction also.

My $0.02 worth - your mileage may vary....

Jan 02 13 06:24 pm Link

Photographer

Goat Farm Project

Posts: 339

Atlanta, Georgia, US

Michael Griffey wrote:
I don't really dislike any one image over another, but I have noticed the same model with several different looks in your port. You port is strong enough to suggest you have a much wider pool to choose from and list. You may want to look in that direction also.

My $0.02 worth - your mileage may vary....

I agree.  The wife disagrees.  So, we'll do it her way, lol.

Thanks!  I love this shot:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/100905/20/4c8467300eaa8_m.jpg

Jan 03 13 04:29 am Link

Model

Adrienne M Plus

Posts: 194

Philadelphia, Pennsylvania, US

Goat Farm Project wrote:

Thanks!

You have a beautiful smile:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120202/05/4f2a912d9696f_m.jpg

Thank you:)

Jan 03 13 06:19 am Link

Photographer

Goat Farm Project

Posts: 339

Atlanta, Georgia, US

Adrienne M Plus  wrote:

Thank you:)

This is cool too:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120814/17/502aeb333e0b4_m.jpg

Jan 04 13 07:00 am Link

Photographer

Goat Farm Project

Posts: 339

Atlanta, Georgia, US

Anna Kl wrote:
great port, just gets better and better

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/26 … #/30880544

that is my least favourite, awkward lighting and pose
bravo on the rest, especially recent!

Beautiful!
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121230/09/50e078855af92_m.jpg

Jan 05 13 05:19 am Link

Photographer

Digital Blitz

Posts: 2313

Gaithersburg, Maryland, US

Goat:
Your weakest is probably stronger than my best. But for arguments shake - this one is the least appealing to me http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31112388

Jan 05 13 05:24 am Link

Model

all_names_are_taken

Posts: 337

Ankeny, Iowa, US

Good all the way around...

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121130/15/50b93b481c3e7_m.jpg
This one's probably my least favorite.

Jan 05 13 07:44 am Link

Photographer

Goat Farm Project

Posts: 339

Atlanta, Georgia, US

Digital Blitz wrote:
Goat:
Your weakest is probably stronger than my best. But for arguments shake - this one is the least appealing to me http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31112388

lol, not hardly.

This is fantastic!
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29764901

Jan 05 13 01:26 pm Link

Photographer

Goat Farm Project

Posts: 339

Atlanta, Georgia, US

all_names_are_taken wrote:
Good all the way around...

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121130/15/50b93b481c3e7_m.jpg
This one's probably my least favorite.

Thanks.  I like this one:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120526/19/4fc197b48e708_m.jpg

Jan 06 13 07:09 am Link

Model

Laura1982

Posts: 81

Eaton, Ohio, US

I would pick this one to go even though it's a beautiful shot. My reason is just that I don't think the clothing matches well with the backdrop.

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31111675

Jan 06 13 07:37 am Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6400

Champaign, Illinois, US

not crazy about this

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121223/19/50d7d2ab2e200_m.jpg

you do such a good job in highlighting and bringing out a model's curves and legs and strong points. However in this shot she is "lost" in all the colors.......plus it doesn't help that she is scrunched up

Jan 06 13 08:05 am Link

Photographer

Goat Farm Project

Posts: 339

Atlanta, Georgia, US

Laura1982 wrote:
I would pick this one to go even though it's a beautiful shot. My reason is just that I don't think the clothing matches well with the backdrop.

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31111675

You're right.  Maybe i should photoshop the background a solid color.

This is very natural and you look great:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121226/11/50db4cf8cf687_m.jpg

Jan 06 13 10:26 am Link

Model

Maria Susanti

Posts: 546

Banyuwangi, Jawa Timur, Indonesia

I choose this http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121229/06/50def82c682a4_m.jpg
idk it just me or, she doesnt look comfy and the smile is lil bit awkward for me

Jan 06 13 11:22 am Link

Model

Lizzy Takahashi

Posts: 54

Tulsa, Oklahoma, US

I'd drop your avatar.

Jan 06 13 01:20 pm Link