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Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6386

Champaign, Illinois, US

they will be fast and honest. Who's game?

Edited:
even though I am obviously not always up, I will continue to do these as long as you wish. The rules still apply.....fast and honest

Oct 28 12 01:45 am Link

Photographer

Sonn

Posts: 338

Melbourne, Victoria, Australia

Oct 28 12 01:47 am Link

Model

Echo_

Posts: 282

Hamburg, Hamburg, Germany

moi

Oct 28 12 01:51 am Link

Model

LisaInLondon

Posts: 707

London, England, United Kingdom

Me please!

Oct 28 12 01:56 am Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6386

Champaign, Illinois, US

Crack The Sky wrote:
my video please

https://vimeo.com/52314200

Not much action

Oct 28 12 03:15 am Link

Model

Affinity Finch

Posts: 652

Bodmin, England, United Kingdom

Anything worth giving advice on?

Oct 28 12 03:15 am Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6386

Champaign, Illinois, US

Echo_ wrote:
moi

Oct 28 12 03:16 am Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6386

Champaign, Illinois, US

LizaK wrote:
Me please!

I like what I see, but you still haven't turned the corner. You haven't got that WOW shoot yet

Oct 28 12 03:17 am Link

Model

Maria Susanti

Posts: 546

Banyuwangi, Jawa Timur, Indonesia

me please. do I have what it takes?

Oct 28 12 03:18 am Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6386

Champaign, Illinois, US

Jade Honey wrote:
Anything worth giving advice on?

amazing figure and love your artistry. Nose and lips rings are distracting and devalue your natural beauty

Oct 28 12 03:19 am Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6386

Champaign, Illinois, US

Maria Susanti wrote:
me please. do I have what it takes?

Depends on what you want to do. You have a gorgeous face and like your versatility. That is my story and I'm sticking to it........

Oct 28 12 03:20 am Link

Model

Affinity Finch

Posts: 652

Bodmin, England, United Kingdom

Peach Jones wrote:

amazing figure and love your artistry. Nose and lips rings are distracting and devalue your natural beauty

Thanks for the honest critique smile

Oct 28 12 03:20 am Link

Model

HEATHER 19

Posts: 1156

Boston, Massachusetts, US

Too Late ???

Oct 28 12 05:23 am Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6386

Champaign, Illinois, US

HEATHER 18 wrote:
Too Late ???

You will be the last one Heather. I have always enjoyed seeing your port. You have a pretty much perfect figure and truly gorgeous legs. Great versatility. If that is the type of modeling you wish to do then you are well on your way to success. However, I can't help but think your port would be boosted by some classy lingerie shots, or the POP of a hot bikini shoot on the beach. Something that people can really see you and say OH MY GOSH.... she is amazing!!

That's my 2 cents anyway.

good night

Oct 28 12 06:43 am Link

Model

HEATHER 19

Posts: 1156

Boston, Massachusetts, US

Peach Jones wrote:

You will be the last one Heather. I have always enjoyed seeing your port. You have a pretty much perfect figure and truly gorgeous legs. Great versatility. If that is the type of modeling you wish to do then you are well on your way to success. However, I can't help but think your port would be boosted by some classy lingerie shots, or the POP of a hot bikini shoot on the beach. Something that people can really see you and say OH MY GOSH.... she is amazing!!

That's my 2 cents anyway.

good night

Thanks smile

Oct 28 12 10:21 am Link

Model

IDiivil

Posts: 4113

Los Angeles, California, US

Did a major portfolio update and would like to know your thoughts.

Edit: Crap, just saw Heather was the last one. Bugger smile

Oct 28 12 11:02 am Link

Makeup Artist

ImageBeautique

Posts: 169

London, England, United Kingdom

me please !

Oct 28 12 02:26 pm Link

Model

Christina Josephine

Posts: 121

Warsaw, Indiana, US

Insomnia.... me too please!

Oct 28 12 09:17 pm Link

Model

Kristi Prisner

Posts: 5

Houston, Texas, US

Me Please

Oct 28 12 09:21 pm Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6386

Champaign, Illinois, US

IDiivil wrote:
Did a major portfolio update and would like to know your thoughts.

Edit: Crap, just saw Heather was the last one. Bugger smile

Hey, I'm back for another shot......

But I'm not sure I will say anything about your port that you don't already know I will say. But I will give it a try.

World class legs and behind. Fabulous artistic value and love your versatility and desire to go an extra mile. Almost wonder though..........what about some classy beauty......I am picturing the little black dress shoot for you. You can still show off the legs of course, and even do flirty stuff. Who knows.....you might have fun!!

Thanks for stopping by and asking my opinion again.

Oct 29 12 09:18 pm Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6386

Champaign, Illinois, US

ImageBeautique wrote:
me please !

I like your quality and I like what I see. If I needed to hire you, your port would tell me yes

Oct 29 12 09:20 pm Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6386

Champaign, Illinois, US

Christina Josephine wrote:
Insomnia.... me too please!

Hello Christina from Warsaw. Your port suffers from keeping so so shots. It drags everything down. Also looks like you struggle a bit between being an art/statement model or being a fashion model. Which will it be......or perhaps both?

Oct 29 12 09:23 pm Link

Makeup Artist

BKellerman MUA

Posts: 129

Saint Louis, Missouri, US

my MUA skills worth anything? just starting out...

Oct 29 12 09:25 pm Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6386

Champaign, Illinois, US

Kristi Prisner wrote:
Me Please

Hello Kristi. How are you this evening? I will most likely be in Houston soon. Have spent quit some time there in the past.

On to your port.

it suffers severely from bad lighting and coloring. You are lovely. Get some better shots and you will def shine!

Oct 29 12 09:25 pm Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6386

Champaign, Illinois, US

BKellerman MUA wrote:
my MUA skills worth anything? just starting out...

I like. shows talent and makes me take notice.

Oct 29 12 09:26 pm Link

Model

NicoleNudes

Posts: 3860

Toronto, Ontario, Canada

Shoot

Oct 29 12 09:28 pm Link

Makeup Artist

BKellerman MUA

Posts: 129

Saint Louis, Missouri, US

Peach Jones wrote:

I like. shows talent and makes me take notice.

Thank You! smile

Oct 29 12 09:29 pm Link

Model

BackInTime

Posts: 84

Norco, California, US

Sure, go for it please!

Oct 29 12 09:31 pm Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6386

Champaign, Illinois, US

NicoleNudes wrote:
Shoot

I like your avatar, makes me smile

You are without a doubt one of the foremost nude models on MM. You have a large WOW factor and your versatility is fabulous. The art nudes I believe are the ones I like best. I can easily see some of your work in an art gallery.

Keep it up!!

Oct 29 12 09:31 pm Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6386

Champaign, Illinois, US

Dancing4u wrote:
Sure, go for it please!

Your port suffers from redundancy. too much of the same thing.

And

Me thinks you have missed your calling. You could be a great art nude model.

P.S.--you have my interest up at wanting to be Mary Tudor. Hmmmm.....I like.....but remember she was very very violent and power hungry

Oct 29 12 09:41 pm Link

Photographer

jennifer lockstedt jl

Posts: 19

Houston, Texas, US

Peach Jones wrote:
Hello Kristi. How are you this evening? I will most likely be in Houston soon. Have spent quit some time there in the past.

On to your port.

it suffers severely from bad lighting and coloring. You are lovely. Get some better shots and you will def shine!

Kristi, you did a great job, just remember that every photographer has different styles.... its all art... some like and it and some don't.... that is the way of the world, but please don't let anyone make you feel like you should not be modeling.... I know you said that to me..... but hey take the chances and dance.... love u, jen

Oct 29 12 09:56 pm Link

Photographer

DAN CRUIKSHANK

Posts: 1786

Vancouver, British Columbia, Canada

let's go!

Oct 29 12 10:01 pm Link

Photographer

GMM Photography

Posts: 269

NORTH HOLLYWOOD, California, US

Still going?

Oct 29 12 10:05 pm Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6386

Champaign, Illinois, US

GMM Photography wrote:
Still going?

sure

Oct 29 12 10:06 pm Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6386

Champaign, Illinois, US

DAN CRUIKSHANK wrote:
let's go!

I enjoy how you have separated the lighter and darker images. It works well and kudos to that.

I like the artistic on the dark shots. They are moody and well worthy of publishing.

I like how you show the pure feminine form on your lighter shots. The legs almost come of the page and grab me

Nice!!

Oct 29 12 10:08 pm Link

Photographer

DAN CRUIKSHANK

Posts: 1786

Vancouver, British Columbia, Canada

Peach Jones wrote:

I enjoy how you have separated the lighter and darker images. It works well and kudos to that.

I like the artistic on the dark shots. They are moody and well worthy of publishing.

I like how you show the pure feminine form on your lighter shots. The legs almost come of the page and grab me

Nice!!

Thanks!

Oct 29 12 10:09 pm Link

Model

Mary Geraldine

Posts: 1697

Valdese, North Carolina, US

Still at it? Trying to get back into the game & working on updating my portfolio. Thoughts? Thanks in advance. ^_^

Oct 29 12 10:09 pm Link

Photographer

Lakeshore Photography

Posts: 177

Holland, Michigan, US

I'm game.

Oct 29 12 10:13 pm Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6386

Champaign, Illinois, US

GMM Photography wrote:
Still going?

You have several things going in your port.

I like the classy B/w shots in the upper third. You inspire me with those.

I like the editorial type feel in the middle third. Nice quality and looks like your shot hot.......is that correct?

the bottom third......hmmm, while I very much like your painting, I am not sure that this is the proper place for it. The paintings almost seem to tip the psyche of your port way off its axis.

Have you thought of starting a different port just for your paintings? I would like to see more of them too

Oct 29 12 10:13 pm Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6386

Champaign, Illinois, US

Mary Geraldine wrote:
Still at it? Trying to get back into the game & working on updating my portfolio. Thoughts? Thanks in advance. ^_^

If I may say, your body is pretty much perfect. HUGE wow factor!! I like your nudes because they are different. Gritty. Moody almost. I would like to see more because you do such a great job.

The only thing I didn't care for is there are too many 2 piece lingerie type shots. They seem to be redundant. Take your best 2 or 3, put them in opposite spots on your port and they won't detract so much.

Once last thing. i LOVE your eyes. They are exotic, moody and mysterious. I could do just a shoot with your eyes. Use them. They can be a selling point.

Good luck and thanks for stopping by!

Oct 29 12 10:20 pm Link