Forums > Critique > New set! Would love critique/feedback!!!!

Photographer

JoseM Photography

Posts: 105

Los Angeles, California, US

first 4 pictures in my port. any ritique is welcome....thanks guys!

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/2673555/viewall

Nov 05 12 06:17 pm Link

Model

Lynn Elizabeth

Posts: 1336

Coral Springs, Florida, US

I don't really like the first image. Not as crisp as the others. The other 3 are very nice though!!

Nov 05 12 06:31 pm Link

Photographer

The Effective Image

Posts: 3960

Lansing, Michigan, US

Well, they are... nice.

The model has black thigh highs on I presume... but nothing shows off her legs.

She's making eye contact... but there's no expression on her face that I can relate to.

Lovely girl...

Just my opinion.

Nov 05 12 06:37 pm Link

Photographer

BanzaiStudios

Posts: 17

Evansville, Indiana, US

I really like the composition and structure of the fourth picture.

The pose and lay out in 2 and 3 are nice, but the lamp is distracting.

Nov 05 12 06:37 pm Link

Photographer

Images by MR

Posts: 8388

Vancouver, British Columbia, Canada

I like the focus in # 1... can't say much for 2, 3 & 4

Just my thoughts ~ MR

Nov 05 12 06:44 pm Link

Photographer

JoseM Photography

Posts: 105

Los Angeles, California, US

thanks everyone! i turned the lamps int he back on because i thought it would be  a nice touch but i guess its distracting to some? ill have to consider things more closely next time smile

Nov 05 12 10:56 pm Link

Photographer

JoseM Photography

Posts: 105

Los Angeles, California, US

bump

Nov 07 12 03:22 pm Link

Photographer

SSR Designs

Posts: 471

Bartlesville, Oklahoma, US

I like the concept of the BnW photo.  The tones and the balance are right on, however I'm not a fan of the extremely shallow depth of field, the background is just a tad to out of focus. However, I feel that you are very close to getting it perfect.  As far as the color photos...Overall there is a bit too much warmth (more specifically yellow) for me to truly appreciate them.  The composition, however is nice.

Nov 07 12 03:31 pm Link

Model

Brightonn

Posts: 234

New Orleans, Louisiana, US

The first photo is probably the weekest as it seems to have the worst retouch on the face.  The final photo is definitely the best and the expression on the model's face is phenomnal.  I love the set and use of bokeh throughout!

Nov 08 12 01:26 pm Link