Trowbridge, England, United Kingdom
I shot this the other day and would love to know what people think, critique is always helpful
Nov 07 12 03:33 am Link
Minneapolis, Minnesota, US
WP Retouch wrote:
Distracting background behind models back [Table top?]
Nov 07 12 04:26 am Link
Los Angeles, California, US
The table should be edited out.
I think the biggest thing is the light blow out, it's not really blown out and not really soft, kind of need to decide which one.
There also seems to be two temperatures of lighting going too, it's not bad though.
Nov 07 12 03:31 pm Link
Lansing, Michigan, US
Well, it could use some help...
The table could go...
The blow-out because of the window is pretty bad... leaves a huge bright white space to pull the viewers eye off the model.
The neck creases could be softened a bit...
But her expression doesn't 'grab' me... can't really tell what she's thinking... but I'm pretty sure she's not flirting...
Just my opinion.
Nov 07 12 04:02 pm Link