WP Retouch wrote:
I shot this the other day and would love to know what people think, critique is always helpful

Distracting background behind models back [Table top?]
Due to pose models has several neck wrinkles
Hair messy by models ear
Black of bra on model back has lots of noise

As far as the eyes the black part of the pupils are not round
Prefer not to have the eyes locked to one side, rather to have white on both sides of pupil
Some kind of white line along models bra strap on her left shoulder
Need to rotate head for true profile or more toward camera nose is protruding through outline of cheek

Wish you well