It's been a LONG time fellow MMr's. To commemorate me wasting the last 3-4 hours of my time looking through the forums today lets play what I call; Yay, Nay, Or Meh. No critique. No reason why (Cuz im lazy). Post a photo and I will give you just a simple Yay, Nay, or Meh. I know you guys have the stuff. I am setting my expectations pretty damn high. Let the games begin! Nov 07 12 11:01 pm Link Tough crowd today for no takers :-I.. I will even throw in a sentence Critiques. Nov 08 12 12:23 pm Link Vincente Lopez wrote: aw Nov 08 12 01:14 pm Link I'll take it Nov 08 12 01:23 pm Link Jojo West wrote: I think he wants you to post or link to an image. I'll pass... Nov 08 12 10:00 pm Link Nov 09 12 07:48 am Link Nov 09 12 07:49 am Link Nov 09 12 07:51 am Link Nov 09 12 08:07 am Link This...? Nov 09 12 08:16 am Link LittleWhiteRabbit Photo wrote: Meh.. While the ambiance of the photo seems promising (I always dig a throw back vibe) The model does nothing for the photo and the black crushing along the bottom of the skirt is a little heavy. Nov 09 12 01:49 pm Link Nov 09 12 01:52 pm Link Nov 09 12 01:53 pm Link MelissaAnn wrote: Meh.. Honestly not a bad photo but the crop could of killed the dead space on top. On top of that the photographers angle required you to bring you chin up a little on that shot. Remember to never forget to accentuate your neck if the shot is at a downward angle. Nov 09 12 01:56 pm Link TDSImages wrote: Meh... Remember neckline. If the model is bringing arms forward as in the model of this case. What happens is the back hunched masks a lot of the neckline. So instead of a long slender neckline you get chin then all of a sudden shoulders. When shooting come down slightly below the model and make sure the chin is positioned to bring out the neckline. Nov 09 12 01:59 pm Link Thanks for your honest feedback - I think you're great at critiques... Nov 09 12 02:16 pm Link Vincente Lopez wrote: Gotcha thanks! Nov 09 12 03:11 pm Link This one? https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/1 … dc4cb1.jpg Or this one? https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/p … 2#30565592 18+ Nov 09 12 03:20 pm Link Kit DeLite wrote: First link. Nay... In order to pull off "girl in the bed" look you have to have two prerequisites in place. 1) Interesting shooting location if you aren't manipulating your crop or 2) in close crop on the subject. Neither of these fill that requirement. In the first photo since the location isn't great the photographer really needed to over extended the depth of field. Especially in a empty room if he wasn't going to crop. But all the DOF in the world wouldn't have helped the nonchalant ambiance of the room. Nov 09 12 03:35 pm Link Vincente Lopez wrote: I completely agree that the first one would have been better if it was cropped more. Thank you for your input. Nov 09 12 03:37 pm Link Vincente Lopez wrote: Drat, haha. Nov 09 12 05:20 pm Link Nov 09 12 05:30 pm Link Nov 09 12 05:40 pm Link Nov 09 12 06:50 pm Link Nov 09 12 06:53 pm Link Nov 09 12 09:46 pm Link Nov 09 12 10:19 pm Link Nov 09 12 10:22 pm Link Lauren Grace wrote: Yay.. Speaking strictly to your modeling it's a good look so for that you get a Yay. As far the lighting (which nothing after this is your fault), the kicker light in the rear needed higher placement or angled up and gridded. Then turned down a stop. Because of that you get quite a bit of light mid frame, and magnified because the hair is down. Also placing a rear light with no clothing really makes white hairs stand out. This could of been processed out by your photographer. Nov 09 12 10:28 pm Link Nov 09 12 11:26 pm Link Nov 10 12 02:56 am Link Nov 10 12 10:05 am Link yeh Nov 10 12 05:30 pm Link |