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Dave Luyando

Posts: 22

Spring, Texas, US

Ignore this post...moved to correct header.

Nov 08 12 05:54 pm Link



Posts: 9423

Minneapolis, Minnesota, US
Less head tilt
More detail in black area of hair

Nov 09 12 05:25 am Link


DEP E510

Posts: 1882

Miramar, Florida, US

your work is much better overall than this..

it is completely weak, unfocused, and not typical of your quality.

Nov 09 12 02:26 pm Link