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Model

Winnie L

Posts: 5867

Singapore, Singapore, Singapore

What do you think? The photographer wanted to try a different feel of a woman escaping from urbanism, and looking lost at the end when she has no way out. Please let me know any feedback you might have.

PS. the montages are made by photographer.

https://lh4.googleusercontent.com/-9gCZOaJg-TY/UJxiy_xo0nI/AAAAAAAAFOw/_Npiu0RFmjU/s600/65391_10151246830668464_1623834050_n.jpg

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https://lh3.googleusercontent.com/-hqOsYWmG4O0/UJxiy5j3dCI/AAAAAAAAFO0/ruy6q6hiE00/s600/534707_10151246831318464_609682057_n.jpg

Nov 08 12 06:03 pm Link

Photographer

Orca Bay Images

Posts: 32234

Woodinville, Washington, US

The photographer wanted to try a different feel of a woman escaping from urbanism, and looking lost at the end when she has no way out.

Other than the center-row left images, I don't get any such feel from the model. The poses are largely stock poses and the model is expressionless. Far from looking like she's trapped by her surroundings, she seems to be posing off them.

Nov 08 12 06:14 pm Link

Photographer

D0127H

Posts: 1135

Ottawa, Ontario, Canada

Bottom left and top....GREAT.  I wouldn't blink if I saw them in the kind of magazines I like ; )

Nov 08 12 06:16 pm Link

Model

Winnie L

Posts: 5867

Singapore, Singapore, Singapore

Thank you. I admit I could look more "trapped". wink

Nov 08 12 06:28 pm Link

Photographer

sospix

Posts: 21396

Orlando, Florida, US

All work for me except the middle right image, seems a bit too posed, and doesn't really express the visual intent to me  .  .  .  nice departure though  .  .  .

SOS

Nov 09 12 06:14 am Link

Model

Winnie L

Posts: 5867

Singapore, Singapore, Singapore

sospix wrote:
All work for me except the middle right image, seems a bit too posed, and doesn't really express the visual intent to me  .  .  .  nice departure though  .  .  .

SOS

thanks wink

Nov 09 12 08:53 pm Link