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Model

Official_Cat

Posts: 1830

Milan, Lombardy, Italy

Can you give me any help/advise and critique about my port?
Which pictures I have to remove? Do you like the New works?
Thank you so much!!!

Nov 10 12 02:12 am Link

Photographer

Lee_Photography

Posts: 9230

Minneapolis, Minnesota, US

Here is a list that has your top 10 images and a bit of critique Would rate these images as 10’s, 9’s which are very strong and memorable portfolio photos


http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121110/01/509e21c10c722_m.jpg
This is close
Why not a pair of gray shoes or something that takes a color from the dress
Models left arm too straight


http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121110/01/509e2176a4d14_m.jpg
Black shoes
Less door in photo
Hips on angle to camera
Don’t loose your hands in your hair

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120609/11/4fd392c1d4970_m.jpg
Lower shoulder toward camera

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110725/08/4e2d900176dde_m.jpg
Fun photo

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110330/10/4d93650ade8ba_m.jpg
Nice wish eye was not locked to side [Models left]


http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/101227/12/4d18fa5578d8b_m.jpg
Fun would love to see a standing version of this image

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110508/06/4dc694b51f97f_m.jpg
Wish more of your eyes could be seem

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110323/09/4d8a2448a2ed4_m.jpg
Great looking hair

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110727/05/4e2fffe573e68_m.jpg
Soft and beautiful

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110727/05/4e2ffff57dc68_m.jpg
Wish both eyes were centered in mask



Photos with poor technique of glare, color globs, selective color or over exposed will not be selected, eyes need to be in focus too

Wish you continued success!

Nov 10 12 06:43 am Link