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Model

El KM

Posts: 1

Gold Coast, Queensland, Australia

Hi, I am just looking to make my profile better. I do have new photos on their way, but until then, let me know what you think of the ones I have so far!

Thanks,

El KM

Nov 10 12 03:59 am Link

Photographer

M-A-R-C

Posts: 172

Norwich, Connecticut, US

Work with a better photographer!

Nov 10 12 04:14 am Link

Photographer

Revenge Photography

Posts: 1830

Melbourne, Victoria, Australia

M-A-R-C wrote:
Work with a better photographer!

+1

I would also add, work on expressing different emotions, it's something that will always help you stand out from the crowd.

Nov 10 12 04:28 am Link

Photographer

Jeff Fiore

Posts: 9224

Pelham, New York, US

M-A-R-C wrote:
Work with a better photographer!

There is not much more to say than that.

Nov 10 12 04:36 am Link

Photographer

Lee_Photography

Posts: 8842

Minneapolis, Minnesota, US

Quality photos have at least a few of these elements
Model in great wardrobe
Great hairstyling, makeup
Outstanding pose
Great photography capture, with exquisite lighting


http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121108/01/509b7c86e2a64_m.jpg
Your photos are missing the mark on several of these elements
This is not a quality pose
The whites of your eyes do not appear natural

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121108/01/509b7c6608742_m.jpg
This misses the mark on all elements
Plus distracting background

From your photos it would be difficult to evaluate your modeling and thus suitability for any photo projects, suggest finding a strong team that is able to work with a newer model and provide you with quality images

"[I absolutely love sports and fitness as well as different types of art forms and have recently combined these two loves by taking up aerial silk acrobatics dance arts.]"

This is the only part of your BIO that has any relevance to modeling, lets see some images of these areas


Wish you well

Nov 10 12 06:21 am Link

Photographer

DVP Photography

Posts: 2865

Broomfield, Colorado, US

All of your current photos have been taken by an amateur snap shooter.  Using one single on-camera and harsh flash.  Do a casting call and find a local good photographer to start your portfolio.

Nov 12 12 11:51 pm Link